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mittal_pali 7th June 2010 04:17 PM

Door ka sitara - [poem is in image format]
 
Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.

http://www.geeta-kavita.com/images/d...orkasitara.gif

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poem is in image format. if unable to see, click show picture in browser menu. THANKS

Rashmi sharma 7th June 2010 04:58 PM

jindgi ka ek sach aapne byan kiya hai or aapke ye ehsas mujhe bht hi gehre tak choo gaye hai jis sawal se aksar mai jujhati hoon us ke aage ek or prashan chinh lag gya hai.................kash bita waqt laut ke aata.............

Ritu18525 7th June 2010 05:04 PM

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Originally Posted by mittal_pali (Post 395035)
Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.

http://www.geeta-kavita.com/images/d...orkasitara.gif

Bahut khoob...........
Dil se daad qubool kijiye.
God Bless You.
Ritu

mittal_pali 7th June 2010 05:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Rashmi sharma (Post 395042)
jindgi ka ek sach aapne byan kiya hai or aapke ye ehsas mujhe bht hi gehre tak choo gaye hai jis sawal se aksar mai jujhati hoon us ke aage ek or prashan chinh lag gya hai.................kash bita waqt laut ke aata.............

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thanks
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mittal_pali 7th June 2010 11:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Ritu18525 (Post 395044)
Bahut khoob...........
Dil se daad qubool kijiye.
God Bless You.
Ritu


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thanks :)
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zainy 14th June 2010 08:15 AM

Good one Mittal ji...........................................

mittal_pali 14th June 2010 03:03 PM

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Originally Posted by zainy (Post 396219)
Good one Mittal ji...........................................


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thanks for repling my posts. this encourages me posting.........:)
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Taish 14th June 2010 03:21 PM

mittal sahab ko mera salaam,

waise bahut kam hi muktak kavitayeN mujhe pasan aa paati haiN, par yakeen maaniye aapne jis saadgi se rishtoN ke badalte maayenoN ko dikhaya hai vo kaabil-e-tareef hai,hum sab ye dekhte hain aur dekh ke chup se ho jaate haiN,bas umeed karta huN ki aap aage v aisi pehskasheN laate raheNge...!!

Aapka GHAYAL...!!

Kavita Negi 14th June 2010 03:44 PM

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Originally Posted by mittal_pali (Post 395035)
Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.

http://www.geeta-kavita.com/images/d...orkasitara.gif


Pali ji,
Bahut khubsuruat andaaz me dard ko byaan kiya hai,,,,,,,, Ye sahi hai ki bita waqt laut ke nahi aata,,,, Waqt ke sath sath sab badal jaate hai,,,,,shayad jo hum aaj sochte hai,,,, wo kal na soche,,,,,,Aisi hi koshish ke sath aur likhte rahiye,,,,,,,, dil se daad qubool kijiyega.......!!!!!

mittal_pali 14th June 2010 04:06 PM

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Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 396286)
mittal sahab ko mera salaam,

waise bahut kam hi muktak kavitayeN mujhe pasan aa paati haiN, par yakeen maaniye aapne jis saadgi se rishtoN ke badalte maayenoN ko dikhaya hai vo kaabil-e-tareef hai,hum sab ye dekhte hain aur dekh ke chup se ho jaate haiN,bas u
sir ji aapka aashirwad chahiye...anyway thanks. posting another now.........
meed karta huN ki aap aage v aisi pehskasheN laate raheNge...!!

Aapka GHAYAL...!!

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aapka aashirbad chahiye, sirji..........anyway thanks for replying
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mittal_pali 14th June 2010 04:32 PM

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Originally Posted by Kavita Negi (Post 396287)
Pali ji,
Bahut khubsuruat andaaz me dard ko byaan kiya hai,,,,,,,, Ye sahi hai ki bita waqt laut ke nahi aata,,,, Waqt ke sath sath sab badal jaate hai,,,,,shayad jo hum aaj sochte hai,,,, wo kal na soche,,,,,,Aisi hi koshish ke sath aur likhte rahiye,,,,,,,, dil se daad qubool kijiyega.......!!!!!



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theek kehti hain aap. waqt hi insaan ki pehchaan mukarar karta hai. waqt sahi hai toh sab sahi hai, nahin toh..........................!!!

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naresh_mehra110 14th June 2010 05:50 PM

Mittal Sahab ........aapki rachna saadhgi ke libaas me .....bahut umdaa peshkash ban gai....rishton ka sach dikhati is rachna ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen... khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....

mittal_pali 15th June 2010 03:07 AM

http://i45.tinypic.com/2v1q42p.jpg

Dhaval 15th June 2010 09:30 AM

Mittal jee:

namaskaar!

saadagee bharii aapki yeh rachanaa bahot hi achChhi rahii.n! yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aap!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval

dineshdharvi 15th June 2010 07:04 PM

pali ji bahut ache aur sache ehshash bayan kiya hai apne.
khush rahiyega hamesha

dauon ke sath

dinu

mittal_pali 18th June 2010 02:18 AM

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Originally Posted by dineshdharvi (Post 396489)
pali ji bahut ache aur sache ehshash bayan kiya hai apne.
khush rahiyega hamesha

dauon ke sath

dinu


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thanks for repling
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mittal_pali 18th June 2010 02:21 AM

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Originally Posted by Dhaval (Post 396399)
Mittal jee:

namaskaar!

saadagee bharii aapki yeh rachanaa bahot hi achChhi rahii.n! yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aap!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval


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jawab ke liye shukriya
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mittal_pali 18th June 2010 02:24 AM

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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110 (Post 396309)
Mittal Sahab ........aapki rachna saadhgi ke libaas me .....bahut umdaa peshkash ban gai....rishton ka sach dikhati is rachna ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen... khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....





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thanks

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shakuntala vyas 19th June 2010 05:26 PM

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Originally Posted by mittal_pali (Post 395035)
Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.

http://www.geeta-kavita.com/images/d...orkasitara.gif

bahut hi acha likha

har sabd itani gahrai liye he

saral sabdo me sab risto ko bata diya

maa baap ke bina har ghar ghar nahi begana ho jata he

do jodi niswarth aankhe kho jaty he

tub har jagah ek jesi ho jaty he

daad hajir he

sada khush raho

mittal_pali 20th June 2010 11:34 PM

aap sahi keh rahi hain shakuntala ji. aajkal koi doosre ka chehra bhi nahin dekhna cahataa. khaas kar rishtedaar.
par kiya kya ja sakta hai. duniya hai,chalta hai...http://i47.tinypic.com/2lnzwa9.jpg

jawab ke liye sukriya.

khush rahein.

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