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Tasveer per Tahreer ..Sept 2014
Aadaab arz hai DostoN
Aaj phir meiN aap sab ki Khidmat meiN haazir ho rahi hooN.. Tasveer per Tahreer SEPT'2014 ke liye... DostoN, is baar hame TPT ke liye kul 7 GhazaleN/NazmeiN mili haiN... maiN sab se pahle un dostoN ki shukr-guzaar huuN jinhone is silsile meN hissa liya, merii taraf se un sab ko mubaarakbaad. Doston kuch problems ki wajah se is baar critics choice per ghazal ya nazm nahi chuni jayegi...only polling based rahenge results.. 1)Voting will close on 20TH sept 2014 2) This is a public poll: other users can see the choice(s) you selected. 3)You can give your vote to more than one ghazal/nazm. RULES FOR VOTING! 1)TPT ke rules ke mutabiq, jin members ki post count less than 50 hai, woh vote nahi de sakte haiN, agar unhone vote kiya bhi, tou unka vote neutralize ho jayega..(Exception :agar kisi member ne TPT me hissa liya hai lekin unke post count 50 se kam hain to wo vote kar sakte hain) 2)Duplicate ids ko bhi neutralize kiya jayega, aur result in sab votes ko delete karke hi sunaya jayega... Meri guzarish hai,plzz yeh saari bateiN dhyan me rakhiye.. Participants se request hai ke kisi se apni ghazal/Nazm ka zikr na kareiN,kis member ne kaunsi ghazal likhi hai yeh baat result tak raaz hi rehni chahiye. GOOD LUCK! http://bestshayaricollectionoflove.f...x195.jpg?w=300 |
sun mere dil kii sadaa wo jo hua badnaam hai
bewafaaii meN kisii kii kya hua anjaam hai wo zaraa kehte mujhe unko meri hasrat nahi yuN raqeeb ke saath dekh hote to be-izzat nahi par mujhe lagtaa hai unkii ye rahii siirat nahi aur ulfat kii merii ab koii bhii kimmat nahi gar jigar tute to kehte kyuN use naa kaam hai wo bichaaraa to wafaa ke naam pe neelaam hai gul badan samjhaa kiye aisii khataa kaise huii jo mile kaaNte mujhe aisii jafaa kaise huii do diloN ke paas meN ulfat khafaa kaise huii naam juDe the jahaaN kismat judaa kaise huii gulsitaaN meN hai havaa detii nayaa paigaam hai aaj bechaaraa ka mujhko mil gayaa ek naam hai |
GumaaN humko tha hum bhi haiN khushnaseeb,
Mileygaa hamein bhee hamaaraa habeeb! SaNjooyay the Khwaab qurbat ki jinke Kisee aur ko paaya unke qareeb! Idhar haath mein hain hamaare gulaab Udhar unke dilpe lagaa hai saleeb! Shikwe gile ham kareN bhi to kis se NaseebaaN hamaara hamaaraa raqeeb! Ho tumko mubaarak milan ki ghadee Ye TanhaaiyaaN haiN hamaara Naseeb |
Kai baar laga tujhse kah doon
Kai baar maine kadam badaya... Kai baar door se dekh tujhe Laga tu apna,nahi koi paraya.... Din guzre tere khyalon me .. tujhe hi raat khwabon me paaya... Bade jatan se samjhaya dil ko Tab ye aaj yanha tak aa paya.... Himmat ki phir thodi aur Kuch phool sath lekar aaya.... Dil aur dimaag ki kasmakash me Jyada hi vaqt maine lagaya.. Tujhko shayad thi jaldi jaana Nadaan dil ye samajh nahi paya.. Mujhko thoda vaqt laga aur Koi aur bana tera hsmsaaya...... Shayad Lagi nazar in phoolon ki Berahmi se toda jinhe.. Tere khatir inhe bhi aaj Jane maine kitna tadpaya...... |
Toota toota dil toota,
Choota choota sab choota, Tujhko hee samjha saccha, Too bhi nikla jhootha, Dekha jo tujhko to Man ne jode dhaage Aaj chhuda ke haath Nikle tum aage aage Loota loota sb loota Patti patti boota boota Ek bs dil hai bacha Vo bhi toota foota Dekha tujhe jab se Maanga tujhe tab se De ke fir cheena hai Kya kahun rab se Rooth rootha rab rootha Aankhon se samandar foota Jiyunga kaise main ab Sab hai choota choota Toota toota dil toota, Choota choota sab choota, Tujhko hee samjha saccha, Too bhi nikla jhootha, |
Title: Mehboob, Raqeeb Ko Baghal Mein Bithaaye Huay
taaza hawa meiN tafreeh ke liye aaye huay! mehboob, raqeeb ko baghal meiN bithaaye huay woh jin ki khaatir hum ne barbaad kar di zindagi bethe haiN shoq se kisi aur ka dil behlaaye huay tohfa-e-aqeedat laaye thay un ke liye door se! yahaN to woh ghairoN ka ghar basaaye huay hamara harra bharra dil dasht ka manzar hua aas ke sabhi phool bhi aaj murjhaaye huay kal ke aashna pal bhar meiN huay na-aashna jaane kese sulagtay dil ko hum samjhaaye huay un ki khushi meiN kyuN na shareek hoN hum! apni zaat ko sar-e-aam un per lutaaye huay kal tak mere shaanoN pe sir tha jis dil-ruba ka!! ruteN badli to woh auroN ke naaz uthaaye huay dil-lagi ik din jaaN ka rog bun ke nigal jaaye gi kab socha tha hum bhi hoN ge jaaN se haaray huay us shaks ko dikhaaya tha in haathoN meiN jis ne! aaj woh najoomi bhi hum se sir chupaaye huay |
tum hi to meri nigaahoN meiN the
aaj kyoN tum gairoN ki baahoN meiN the ? maine tumse pyaar kiyaa kyoN tumne inkaar kiyaa ? maine jaaN se zydaa chahyaa tujhe apne har khwaab meiN paayaa tujhe mere jeene ka saharaa hai tu meri zindagi ka kinaraa hai tu tere binaa kon mujhe saMbaaleN ? aajaa ek baar gale se lagaa leN aakhir kyoN tum mujhse khafaa huye kyaa wajah thi jo tum bewafaa huye ? |
Iss tarha aankh churayenge ye maalum na tha
Wo hume tod hi jayenge ye maalum na tha Tod kar rasmon ko thama tha jo daaman humne Aaj daaman wo chhudayenge ye maalum na tha Humne jis shakhs ko sartaaj banaya apna Humko nazron se girayenge ye maalum na tha Aaina banke nibhati thi main jinse subah o sham Aaj wo ungli uthayenge ye maalum na tha Humne har rishte ko thukraya tha jinke aage Wo kabhi chhod bhi jayenge ye maalum na tha…!!! |
Best wishes to all participants
dear members...bahut accha likha hai sabhi ne...sabhi ko hamari taraf se shub-kaamnaye... :)
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Bohut khoob.......ek se badhkar ek.
Sabhi ehsaas beshkimti aur sab ko dil se daad. Jisse main sabse jaada relate kar paayi ya jiska dard mere dil ne mehsoos kiya woh hai no.3 Maine isey tasveer par 100% utarta paaya. Magar iska katai yeh arth nahi ki koi rachna kisi se kum hai. Sab bohut sundar. |
i have also given my vote...... all of them are too good.
my heartily wishes to all of the participant.... All the best. |
Please vote..................................
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Aadaab O Tasleemat Bhaeeo wa Bahno!!
Absolute gems... that's what all of the above works of poetry are!! Har kaavish dard-o-gham say labrayz, jazbaataon wa ehsaasaat ka paimaana haye! Har kaavish apnay drishtikone/perspective say sahee haye... my job of choosing a single one was made diffcult by the effort being put in by each participant poet. I believe this comp is much more about learning and sharing than winning or losing, so I chose the ones I (in my own flawed view), found more close to the subject in the "Tasveer". Wishing everyone Good Luck and All the Best!! Duago Ahmad |
voted............................... .... :)
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Bahut khoob likha hai sabhi ne...All the best to all participants...
Voted.....:) |
Looks like very tough competition this time...:)
Chaliye dostoN jaldi se apna vote dijiye aur best one ko jitaiye Only 3 days left.... |
Sabhi doston ko dil se mubaaraqbaad. . . . . .
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only 1 day left......hurry up friends..........
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