Dukh dard k maron se mera zikr na karna
Dukh dard k maron se mera zikr na karna
Ghar jao to yaron se mera zikr na karna Wo zabt na kar payngi ankhon k samandar Tum raah guzaron se mera zikr na karna Phulon k nasheman me raha hu me sada se Dekho kabhi kharon se mera zikr na karna Shaid ye andhere hi mujhe raah dikhaen Abb chand sitaron se mera zikr na karna Wo meri kahani ko galat rang na de dein Afsana nigaron se mera zikr na karna Shayad wo mere haal pe be- sakhata roo dein Iss bar baharon se mera zikr na karna Le jaynge gehrai me tum ko bhi baha kar Dariya k kinaron se mera zikr na karna Wo shakhs mile to use har bat batana Tum sirf isharon se mera zikr na karna... |
Waaahhhh! Bahot aalaa gazal likhii hai Aafanji!
Gungunane ko jii karta hai. Aate rahiye aur likhte rahiye |
Thnx aadil bhai,jarur mai koshish karunga acchi ghazalein likhne ki
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Wasi Shah ki behad khubsurat ghazal
Yeh bahut hi Khubsurat ghazal hain Wasi Shah saab ki
2009 mein suni thi humne Aafanji, shukriya ise share karne k liye Aadeil saab, waakey khubsurat ghazal hain !! :) Aafan ji, par kam se kam kisi aur ki rachna ka credit khud mat lo mention karo k yeh aapne nahi likhi "not mine" likha kare.. mod saab aapko batayenge agar Dil dukhaya ho to maafi ka talabgaar Zinda Laash Quote:
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Thank you bhai,online me ye meri pehli ghazal thi to mujhe pata nai tha k naam b likhna hoga,jarur se aapki baton ka mai dhyan rakhunga,par mai b ahmed faraz aur rahat indori sahab ka shagird hu to apni ghazalein b mai jarur post rahunga,khuda aapko salamat rakhe....
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bahut khub daaaaaaaaad pesh hai
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Shakir sahab boht shukriya,aapki daad kabul...
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bahot acchi peshkash hai Aafan aapki..... aur jaisaa ke ZL saab ne bataaya hameshayar ko uska credit zaroor denaa chahiye.... isliye ummeed hai ke aage se aap in sab baaton ka kahyaal rakkhenge.. aur hamaare saath jude rahenge...
likhte rahiye, share karte rahiye, khush rahiye.................. Shaad.... |
afaan jee very nice sharing.....aapka shayri ka intrest bahut accha laga, par upar samjhayi gayi baaton ka hamesha khyaal rakhein....thanx for sharing..
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Thank you very much sameer and aru bhai for ur suggestions and appreciation,i will surely adhere to things which u have said....
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