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GHAJAL ISE SAMAJNHNE KEE GALTI MAT KARNA
SHER ISE SAMAJNHNE KEE GUSTAKHI MAT KARNA NAA YE SHER NAA YE GHAJAL HAI BAS MERA BEETA HUA EK PAL HAI PADNA ISE DOSTON KUCH IS TARAH SE JAISE MERE PYAAR KO SHRADDHANJALI DE RAHE HO Tumhee meri mohabbat, tumhee meri bandigi, tumhjee se meri sari jindagi hai. aye the kabhie vo mujhse karne pyaar sab kuch apna lutaane ko yaar dost mere ab vo din dhal gaye dekhte dekhte vo kitna badal gaye badlein hain vo kuch is tarah se jaise mera sab kuch lootne jaa rahe hain bade pyaar se usne badla the mera naam subhah shaam use lena bas yehi tha kaam aaj ye nujhe thodi taqleef pahunchata hai jab koi aur mujhe "aru' pukarta hai bhoolen hain vo mera naam kuch is tarah se jaise koi apni bhoolta yaadshasht hai usne to katl mera kar hee diya tha jaanta hoon bas mein kaise jiya tha dil ab bhi kahin mera nahin lagta hai naa jeete banta hai naa marte banta hai jeete hai ab hum kuch is tarah se jaise kisi gunaah kee saja kaat rahe hain choodti maa baap ke liye to gum nahin hota choodti paise ke liya vo bhi kam nahin hota chooda kisi aur ke liya bas ye gila hai meri mohabbat ka kya ye sila hai sehte hai sab hum kuch is tarah se jaise tadpane mein maja aa raha hai jaane vo kya tha jo usne kiya tha jaane vo kya tha jo usne diya tha itna to ab hum bhi jaante hain naa use pyaar naa dil kehte hain karte hain sanam pyaar kuch is tarah se jaise apna sab kuch lutaane jaa rahe hain dost mere kehte hain use too bool jaa vo gayee choodkar,too ye kubool jaa kehte hain hum doston bhoola use jaata hai jise kabhie yaad kiya jaata hai karte hain yaad hum kuch is tarah se jaise ek saans ke baad aati doosri saans hai kabhie hum bhi hanste the mere doston kabhie hum bhi hansaate the mere doston aaj ye aalam hai kee jidhar se gujarte hain log dekhkar hansna band kar dete hain hansenge ek din hum kuch is tarah se jaise koi jaane waala karta aakhiri salaam hai aaj bhi yaad hai apnee aakhiri mulaqat pata hota mujhko to jee bhar kar mil leta e mere sanam ehsaan ek kar do aakhiri mulaqat kehkar aakhiri baar mil lo milenge us din hum kuch is tarah se jaise kal hee duniya choodne jaa rahe hain uskee tasveeron ko dekh nahin paata hoon uske tohfon ko fenq nahin pata hon kya karoon main kuch samajh nahin pata hoon uske likhe khat jala nahin pata hoon jaloonga sab ek din kuch is tarah se jaise koi khud hee apnee jalata chita hai usko hee dekhkar likha karte the ek ek rachna use padaya karte the doston hum aaj bhi badlein nahin hain kal ho ya aaj ho likhte usee pe hain likhte hain par kuch is tarah se jaise koi beemar apne dard ko karta bayan hai kabhie mana karte the vo peene se aaj mana karte hain vo jeene se magar yaaron hum aaj bhi pee lete hain shayad isiliye hum jee lete hain peete hain par kuch is tarah se jaise jeene kee dava pee rahe hain vo din jab hame pata chalee baat thi naa poochoo doston qyamat kee raat thi aankhon se mere aasoon bahe jaa rahe the mere dard kee daastan kahe jaa rahe the roya the us din hum kuch is tarah se jaise samandar mein aa gaya sailaab hai jasbaaton se kisi ke khela nahin karte pyaar se diye tohfe fenkaa nahin karte isse to accha mujhe lota dete seene se laga kar hum rakh lete chalte hain sadak parhum kuch is tarah se jaise apne tohfe dhoondte jaa rahe hain jaata hoon ab bhi un jagahon par milte the kabhie hum jin jagahon par aag se ek tan man mein lag jaati hai har taraf vo hee mujhe nazar aati hai lagta hai vahan par kuch is tarah se jaise mujhe jagah jagah dafan kar diya hai khuda mere ye din kisi ko naa dikhaye jab uska pyaar use chood kar chala jaaye mere doston vo waqt bahut hee gujarta bura hai jab apnaa hee yaar ghopnta chura hai jeete hain yaaron hum kuch is tarah se jasie apnee saason kaa lihaaz kar rahe hain vo kehte hain hume maaf kar do hum kehte hain jara insaaf kar do sab kuch kisi kaa leke jaaya nahin karte yaa phir uskee jindagi mein aaya nahin karte hoga insaaf ek din kuch is tarah se jaise khuda ko sab kuch dikhaye de raha hai mere doston mera ek kaam kar dena mere marne kee kahabr un tak pahuncha dena ho sakta hai aankhen ashkon se bhar jaaye aur shayd labon par mere naam bhi aa jaaye sawar jayegi meri kismat kuch is tarah se jaise kisi shaheed ko marne ke baad milta inaam hai |
sach maniye aru sahab.aaj aapka ye nagma padhkar aisa lag raha hai ki shayad meri beeti hui zindagi b inhi mein kahin hai.
inhi mein hai mere zindagi ki wo sachai jo yaad aane par deti hai toh sirf aansu aur takleef. par aaj aisa lagta hai ki shayad meri zindagi ka sabse bada sach b ye hi chund nagme hain. sochti hun toh aisa lagta hai ki kya sach mein wo beete hue pal sirf in lafzon mein simat kar reh jayenge.kya wo pal kabhi dobara wapas nahi aayenge. ho sake toh aru sahab mere in chund sawalon ka jawab zaroor dijeyga. |
hi,Aru
aapki dil ki dastan mahsus ki to dil ne kaha kash yun hi koi chahe kisi ko koi dil se jese apane chu le kisi ke ahsko ko ...aur de jaaye ek aur lamha apni jindagi ko .. aur kya kahun... apke liye anjani aur ajnabi dard_a{nisha} |
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jab bhi yaad aati hai likh leta hoon dard ko shabd ,ashkon ko syahi bana leta hoon |
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thx aapko mere ye nagma accha laga,kaafe aachi baat kahee hai aapne,par jab dil ko chot panuchtee hai to........... leave it thx again |
bohut hi achhi nazm hai ey.
is ne dil ko touch kia. isi tarah likhte rahiye mere kalaam bhi padhiyega. yeh "sheyeri-e-ishq" aur "Ghazal Section" men available hain. aap ka dost Mujeeb Parwaaz |
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mujhe kuch aur nahi srif itna kahna hai ki is dil par lagate hain jo wo jakham dikhate nahi apnou se milate hain jo wo dard mitate nahi so take care n bst of luck |
apne sahi kaha hai nisha jee, dil ka dard dikhayee nahin deta, yun hee reply karte rahiye.
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aru sir ye aap biti un sab ke liye hai jinhone pyar me dhokha khaya hai, mae aap jaisa likh to nahi sakti but realy in lines me meri story najar aayi h
thanks aise hi likhte raho |
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Aur aap aisa mat kahiye kee mere jaisa nahin likh sakti...koshish kariye..i will help u.. |
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