yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai (Ghazal)
 

PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!


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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai

mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai

deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai

voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai

har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai


*peshtar = before, pehle


rab raakha
maikash

wahhhhhh Maikash ji.....majja aa gya aapki gazal pad ke, hamesha ki tarah superb :)

khush rhiye
rabb raakha
:)

Bas ek hee lafz...lajwaab.!!!!!

Salamat rahein....

Umdaa ustaad...har sher mein vo kashish ki kya baat hai....bechain dil ko qaraar aa gaya....yunhi likhte rahiye janaab...

Shukriya, aap sab ka

baraa-e-meherbaani, rasmii "waah-waah" se parhez kiya kijiye


rab raakha jee
maikash

:( aisa kyun laga aapko ki yeh rasmii waah-waah hai?

rasmi waah waah.............??

just an observation.


stay safe and sound.

rab raakha
maikash

BAhut dino baad aapko pada kailash sahab..it's really wonderful creation of yours....

yeh apne kailash saahab kaun hai Aru bhai? :confused:

maikash bhai tak shaad ka aadaab pahoNche.....
ummeed karta hoon khairiyat se honge, aaj aapki is taazaa tareen ghazal pe nazar gayee to main khud ko maikash mahsoos kar raha hoon...
dil ko itnaa sukoon mil raha hai aapke kalaam ke lafz lafz se ke bayaan nahi kiyaa ja sakta, bas use mahsoos karke sukoon paaya jaa sakta hai....

aapki kalam me waaqai jaadu sa hai koii..... ham khushnaseeb hain jo aap jaise aalaa shayaron ki sohbat me pal rahe hain seekh rahe hain....
mujh haqeer ki naaqis daad qubool kijiye.....

tashreef laate rahiye.... apna khayaal rakhiye.. likhte rahiye

Shaad....

har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai


Maikaash Bhai
Written straight on heart. Sort of Nostalgic.
You are king of such writing.

"na haste hein na khul kar roo rahe hein
ye kesi zindagi ham dho rahe hein"

God bless you.

excellent
 

bahut dino baad punah aapko padha... bahut sunder rachana likhi hai aapne..

shubhkamnao sahit
Akant...

voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai

Waaah..lajawaab ghazal..
Har ek sher zabardast..

Likhte rahiye...khaas aapki ghazalein padhne ..kaafi log ab bhi Sdc per aate hain.

A very happy birthday to you

Maikash bhaiya

Pranaam.. Jsk

Kyaa khoob andaaz e Bayaan.. Maza aa gaya

Dil se daad

Khush rahen.. Apna khayal rakhen

Aapka
Dhaval

waah kya kahne Maikash bhai !!! kis tabeeyat se kaha hai ye kalaam !!! wwwaaahhhhh

yeh ghazal nahi ek tarah se vo tahriir hai jo misaal ban kar humhein sikhaati hai ki ghazal kaise kahi jaati hai...ek baar phir salaam jitni baar padhi jaaye kam hai

Maikash bhaii

Arse baad yahaN se guzra par yaqiin janiye mera aana mukkamal ho gaya apki ye ghazal padh ke.. din ban gaya mera .. behad shukriya