Kunaal ji se Gufatgu ka silsilla (01.10.2015)
Namaskaar Dosto
guftagu ke silsilley ko aage badatey haiN aur aaj ham jis shayar ko aap sabse milwane ja rhe haiN, wo sdc ke 11 saal purane member hain, unhone bahut khoobsurat gazaloN se sdc ki bazm ko sajaya hai. aaj ham es shayar ko enhi ki jubaani jaanege. dosto enko ham usi din se padte aaye hain jab se hamne SDC join ki hai, enki shayri ki tareef karne ke liye mere paas alfaazoN ki kami hai..enki shayari apne aap meiN aik misaal hai...enki aik khaas rachna ki kuch panktiyaa aap sabki khidmat meiN hazir hai. es rachna ko padkar aap jaan hi jaogey ki maiN kis ki baat kar rhi hu :) In nigahoN main jo intzaar hai… Mujhe bhi bas usi se pyar hai.. Khwab ki duniya main hi sahi… Koi to hai jo mera dildaar hai… In nigahoN main jo intzaar hai… Uski har ada mujhe hai bulati… Meri bekrari yuN hai badhati… Har waqt bas ek dhun hai sunati… Kehti hai tu hi to mera yaar hai… In nigahoN maiN jo inzaar hai… ji dosto sahi pehchana aapne :) ~~~KUNAAL Jii~~~ aik baar phir wahi shiqayat hai aapse...ham aapse thoda sa aur waqt chahte haiN, kuch waqt pehle to gayab hi thy sdc se...ab pehle se kuch regular hue to hai par jaise ham chahte hai vaise nahi ;) hamne ense bahut request ki hai ki regular ho jayeN...umeed hai hamari baat ki laaj rakhNge :D to enko vapis laane ka yehi aik zariya nazar aaya hame, ham chahte thy ki es umda shayar ko hamare sabhi member jaane bhi aur padey bhi, esi liye ham enko jaise taise pakad laaye hai ki aapko ab regular aana bhi hoga aur sabhi dosto se aik mahina regular baat-cheet bhi karni hogi ji dosto, es mahine ham enhi se baat kareNge, ham sab enke bare meiN wo sab kuch jaan.na chaheNge jo hame maloom nahi hai, hamne to bas enki shayri padi hai, par yeh asal zindgi meiN kaise haiN ense hi jaanege, thode gusse wale haiN par suna hai dil ke bahut acche hai ;-) Kunaal ji, aapka SDC ke es guftagu wale silsiley meiN dil se suwagat hai…umeed hai ki aap es gufatagu ko khoob enjoy karogey…aur ham sab bhi aapse baate karke khoob lutf uthaNge. http://www.daniellesrockawayflorist....istmas/048.jpg Kunaal ji…es silsiley ko aage badate hue ham chahte hai ki sabse pehle aap apne bare meiN kuch batayeN: 1. Aap kahan ke rehne wale hai ? 2. kya kaam karte hai ? 3. aapki family meiN kaun kaun hai…family se bhi thoda introduce karwa dijiye ? 4. SDC se kaise judey aap ? 5. kya aapke pariwaar ka koi aur member bhi SDC pariwaar meiN shamil hai ? filhaal etna hi...aapke intejaar aur suwagat meiN SDC team SDC team ki taraf se Aik baar phir dil ki gehraiyoN se suwagat hai. |
swagat hai..
namaskaar kunaal ji....
guftguu ke silsile me main dil se apka swagat karti hoon...bahut achcha laga apka naam yahaan dekhkar...aap ek bahut achche shayar hain ye to ham jante hee hain....ab aapko aur kareeb se janne ka mauka milega is baat ki khushi hai.... aapke liye bhi ye safar yaadgar aur dilchasp rahe yahi dua karti hoon... jald aaiye aapka intzaar ho raha hai di ke sawaal taiyar hain...unke jawaab dijiye...taki aur sawaal rakhein jayein aapke samne.....) di aapka bahut shukriya ki aap chun chun ke sdc ke behatreen shayar se hamari mulaqat karati hain.....is silsile par bhi dil se shubhkamnayein aapko... apna khayaal rakhein... fir hazir hoti hoon...ijazat dein.. |
Waah didi - inke liye to mere paas itne sawaal hai ki ek mahina kya ek umr bhi kam padegi.....
Kunaal miyaan aao aao - aapka sawaalon ke kathgare mein swaagat hai....betaabi se intezaar rahegaa ki tumhare jawaabon ka yahan par.... |
Tamaam doston ka shukriya .. aur SDC ke rehnumaoN ka khastaur pe ... sunita ji ka jinhone mujhe is qaabil samjha ki main aap logon se ru ba ru hoN paauN .. pichle do dinon se safar main tha .. to sabse pehle yahan deri se aane ka shukriya .. waise mehmaan-e-khusoosi itni jaldi tashreef le aaye sahi bhi nahi lagta .. jokes apart .. maine abhi ye post dekhi hai.. aur sabse pehle aaj yahi kaam kar raha hun.. ki yahan reply kar raha hun .. ek baar phir se aap sabka shukriya ada karna chahta hun ..
Sawaalon ke jawaab ke sath bohat hi jyada jaldi haazir hounga .. pehle muh dho ke kuch kha pee lun taaki aapke sawaalon ka jam ke muqabila kar paun .. Shukriya aur pyar aap sabke naam Aapka Sifar |
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par haaN main sabhi jagah reply nahi kar paata uski apni apni wajahaat hai .. zindagi maiN masroofiyat ki bhi ... aur kayi baar dil tak nahi pahunchta kuch uski wajah se bhi .. mujhe to mera likha hi nahi bhaata .. jaane kya dhundhta rehta huN maiN .. khair main yahan aata huN .. aur aata rahuNga .. chahe dikhai duN ya nahi .. SDC mere liye ek site se badh kar bohat kuch hai,,.. Quote:
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waise iske alawa bhi mera ek shayri ka pariwar hai .. jisme anginat log maujood hai .. aur yakeen jaaniye sabse mera rishta aisa hai jaise mere janm se jude rishte .. Quote:
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Aapka apna Kunaal |
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Aapke pyar aur khuloos ka main shukriya ada karta huN ... tamaam duaoN ka bhi dil se isteqbal karta huN .. aur maiN koi shayar nahi huN bas jo guzarta hai use alfaz dene ki zehmat utha leta huN .. aap aayi bohat accha laga .. aapko dekh kar ... Kunaal |
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mujhe nahi maloom tha ki aapke paas mere liye itne sawaal hai bata dete mumbai aaya tha abhi waqt nikaal ke pehle sawaaloN ke jawaab hi deta aur main aa gaya huN aap hi gaayab ho ab ... aayiye aap mujhe ab aapka intezaar hai .... aapka apna Kunaal |
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Chalo kuch sawaalat ki aur rukh karte hai.... 1. SDC mein apne pasandida shayar bataiye aur yeh bhi bataiye ki vo aapke aziz kyun hai? 2. Aap to bade bade mushaairoyon se bhi jude hai, aapke ab tak ke safar mein as a shayar aap kya kehnna chahenge? 3. Shayri ki baarikiyon ko aapne kis hadd tak jaana hai aur isse jude agar aapke paas koi kisse ho to humse share kijiye... |
Wah kunaal aaya hai.
Abhi mazzaa ayegaa. Main bhi bohut pakaane wali hun devar ji ready rahiyega. |
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--- Ek waqt tha jab main jab bhi main MANOJ KUREEL bhai ko padhta tha yahi sochta tha ki jo main sochta huN ye kaise likh lete hai .. mere sabse pehle sabse pasandida shayroN maiN unhi ka naam hai .. aise alfaaz bunte hai manoj bhai jaise makkhan main churi ... --- Phir aapke sath maine apne alfaaz ko rakhna seekha aapse bohat kuch jaana hai maine .. aur aaj bhi yaqeen se keh sakta huN ..ki aapse jyada romani hona shayad kahin mil jaaye par aapke alfaaz ki romaniyat ka apna ek zaaii'ka hai .. aur yahi baat MAST BHAI ko mere pasand main laa khada karti hai .. --- Lekin dheere dheere jaise jaise ghazal goyi se raabta hone laga mujhe meri pasand main ek aur shakhs aa khada hua .. Jise aap Sab ZIDD BHAI ke naam se jaante ho .. wo ek alag hi shakshiyat hai aur unki shayri ko maine parwaan chadte dekha hai .. aur phir wo mere pasandeeda ho gaye .. --- Lekin sahi maaii'noN maiN maine shayri main kisi ko jeete dekha hai to wo aur koi nahi VIKAS RANA(JANUMANU) hai aur unki shayri bhi unhi ke jaisi aala hai .. ek saccha shayar jo shayri, romaniyat, aur qudarat aur ek kashish ko mila ke kalaam zaahir karta hai .. ek waqt main shayri se rishta qariib qariib taud chuka tha .. unhone mujhe shayri se dobara milwaaya aur shayri ki dunia se bhi mujhe ru ba ru karwaaya .. aaj mujhe agar koi stage pe jaanta hai to usme vikas bhai ka bohat bada hath hai .. aur is sab se pare phir kahunga unki shayri aur uski taraf unka junooN unhe mera pasandeeda banaata hai .. --- YahaaN maiN mere chhote bhai TAISH ka naam lena nahi bhool sakta .. mere saamne hi usne apni kalam ka jauhar dikhaaya hai ... kabhi kabhi rashq karta huN ki mujhe bhi uski tarah kehne ka andaaz mil jaye kahiN se .. Baaki accha to sab lagta hai par ye log hai jo waqt dar waqt mujhe thoda ziyadah ajeez rahe.. Phir aata huN wapas .. baaki jawaaboN ke sath ... apna khyaal rakhiye ,,.. |
yaar manna padega Mast bhai .. khud aaye chand alfaaz main sawaalaat kar ke chale gaye .. lekin yaqiin jaaniye .. aise aise sawaal kar daale hai .. ki kitna bhi kam likhne ki koshish karuN ungliyoN se dil likhne ko majboor ho raha hai .. aapke aage ke sawaaloN ki taraf chalte hai ..
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meri shayri ka koi safar nahi hai .. ye us diye ki tarah hai jo suraj nahi hona chahti bas ujaala karna chahti hai .. kam ya ziyadaah isse ise koi farq nahi.. maiN kal ko rahuN na rahuN .. ye rahegi .. apni ek dunia banaaye jisme koi chahe to utar sake .. maiN phir se kehna chahunga maiN koi shayar nahi huN .. bas mujhme junooN hai likhne ka nikharne ka ,, aur agar kisi fun ka shauq rakh hi liya hai to use sahi tareeke se adab se kar sakuN yahi meri aarzoo hai .. baaki jo itne pyare dost aapke jaise aur kuch kadradaan hai unki sarparasti maiN apne is junooN ko zinda rakhna chahta huN maiN .. umeed hai mujhe aap aur aap jaise tamaam dostoN ka pyar baar'ha yuN hi milta rahega .. mushaa'iroN ka kya hai .. jahaaN chaar dil ke qareebi dost baith kar adab maiN dil ki baateN rakh deN wahi mushaa'ira hai .. Quote:
Phir bhi jo soorat-e-haal abhi shayri ki takneek ka hai uske lihaaj se maiN bas itna hi keh sakta huN ... ki apni baat ko adab maiN rakhne ki himakat kar sakuN itna fun khaak bande ne zaroor ikhteyaar kar liya hai.. baaqi zabaan pe pakad kaafi aa chuki hai aur dheere dheere badh rahi hai .. baaki maiN tab bhi taalib-e-ilm tha .. aur ab bhi taalib-e-ilm hi huN .. Shukriya aap aaye aur bhi aap jo bhi rakhna chaaheN rakh sakte haiN .. Khyaal rakhiye apna bohat acche se Aapka apna Kunaal |
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Kunaal ji....bahutttttttt accha lga aapne meri har baat ka etni tafseel se jawaab diya...muje sach meiN bahuttttttttt accha lag rha hai ki main aapko es silsilley meiN lekar aaye...kyuki jis tarah aap har baat bahut saafgoi se kar rhe hai, hamne pehle aapko aise nahi dekha...bas aapki shayari tak hi ham thy...us se aage kabhi aapse koi baat nahi hue...:) baat nahi hue ya yu kahna bhi sahi rhega ki kabhi himmat hi nahi hue :D Kunaal ji :) 1. sabse pehle aapko aapke bachpan meiN lekar jana chahungi...jo ki sabse haseen waqt hota hai zindgi ka...to aap apne bachpan ki koi pyari si yaad hamse share kijiye...jo baar baar aapko bachpan ki yaad dilatai hai. 2. kya aap bachpan meiN sharati thy / bade bholey se thy / bade gusse wale thy ? 3. aapki bhai behan meiN se kis se jayada banti thi ? |
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wahhhh kya khoobsurat lafzoN meiN aapne jawaab diya hai aur jin shayroN ki shayri ke aap mureed haiN wo to sach meiN kamaal ke shayar hai sabhi...hamne bhi Manoj Khureel, Janumanu, Zidd ji, Mast Bhai aur Taish sabhi ko khoob pada hai aur padte bhi haiN. |
kunaal ji....sabhi ke sawaal aur un par aapke jawaab padhe maine...aur bahut achcha laga ki aap poore dil se sabhi sawalon ke jawaab de rahe hain.......
Sdc par aap kinhe padhna pasand karte hain ye jaankar khushi huyi... Main bas itna poochna chahoongi ki- 1. sdc ke alawa urdu ke tamaam mashhoor shayron me se vo kon hazrat hain jinki shayri aapko bahut pasand hai..aur unki shayri aapko likhne ki prerna deti hai 2.Kya mahaz shauk ke sath aapne apni pahli rachna likhi...ya fir iske peeche koi dard koi ehsaas koi aisa wakiya jisne aapko likhne pe majboor kiya.. 3.Jaisa aapne kaha ki apne dil ke khayalon ko likhne ki zahmat utha lete hain bas koi shayar nahi hain aap.. To poochna chahoongi ki shayar kya hota hai fir... Is lafz ki koi khaas pahchaan aapke nazariye se janna chahoongi... Abhi bas itna hee... Ijazat chahoongi.. |
Kunaal....
Mera ek hi sawaal... Woh kunaal kahaa kho Gaya Jo mujhe kehta tha Ki bhabhi apki shaadi ka lehenga main design karunga... WO innocent sa kunaal kahaan Jo apni choti choti baatein mujhe bataata tha? Mujhe aaj bhi wo bholi baatein yaad hain magar jab nau saal baad tumhaare touch Mein phir se aayi to paaya Ki tumme bohut badlaav aa gaye hain. WO hhar baat ko Hansi Mein udaane wala kunaal kahan Gaya aur kyun? Chaho to iss sawaal ka jawaab do ya phir ignore bhi kar sakte Ho agar lage Ki zyada keh Diya Maine. |
Kunaal bhaii
namaste Aapko shayri pariwaar ke kathghare mein dekh kar khushii huii...aapka dil se swaagat kartaa huun...aap pariwaar ke bahot hi pooraane sadasyaa hain...aapko main tab se paDhtaa aaya huun jab maine site join bhii nahiin kee thee...jab aapka id name sacchcha_pyar tbaa aur avatar mein thaa wo elepthant ...kunaal@shayri.ciom.. :) ..aap ko paDh kar bahot kuchh seekhaa bher hai ... Bahot khushii hoti hay jab aap jaise pooraane sadasyaa abhi bhii pariwaar ko itnaa chaahte hain aur samman dete hain aur waqt bhee dete hain Aik baar fir se aapke swaagat kartaa hun... Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
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Sarika....Kunaal ji to ta nahi aapke en sawaaloN ke kya jawaab denge...par main to aapke sawaal padkar hi emotional ho gye hu :( |
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mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai main apne papa ko khana dene unke office jaata tha .. aur khana dene ke baad wahan se jaate waqt apne papa ko baar baar baar kehta tha.. PAPA MAIN JAA RAHA HUN .. JAAUN... waise to papa ek baari main samajh jaate the .. par kabhi kabhi kaam main ulajahne ki wajah se nahi samajh paate the to mujhe dohraana padta ... phir papa uthte .. aur mujhe 1 rs de dete .. mujhe jo khushi hoti thi bata nahi sakta .. kabhi kabhi ye 1 rs 5 main bhi badal jata tha .. to main imaandaari se 5 din unse maangne se bachta tha... ye shayad mujhe aaj bhi utna hi khushi deta hai jaise us waqt deta tha ... ek aur baat hai main aur mera bhai aur sis ek hi school main padhte the .. humare paas do cycle thi .. ek ladies ek gents .. par gents meri sis chalaati thi .. aur ladies pe mera bhai aur main aate the .. khasiyat ye thi .. do pedal pe char pair hote the .. aur kya bhaagti thi humari cycle .. double power jo lagti thi .. isi wajah se hume aadha school jaanta tha .. Quote:
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aap aayi phir se accha laga .. aur sawaaloN ke liye bhi behichak aayeN Kunaal |
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baaki jigar muradabadi aur jaun elia.. jaun to humaari jaan haiN.. aur jigar wakai jigar .. jaun ko padhna bas lutf bhar nahi deta .. baat ko kis tarah doosri taraf jaake dekha jaye ye bataata hai .. shayad yahi shayri hai .. Quote:
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shayri karna ek fun hi nahi ek calculation karne jaisa hai ek kalaakaari hai .. mere hisaab se jo adab main apni baat ek alag tareeke se rakh dete hai wahi shayar hai .. jinhe ye sab karne maiN waqt nahi lagta .. ek aur shayri kabhi bas roke nahi ki jaa sakti warna 90 percent log shayar ho jaate ,.. aur ye kehna bhi bwajah hai ki aisa karne se khyaal mar jaate hai .. waisa karne se baat ban jaati hai .. ley main dhaal do to sab accha ho gaya .. nahi .. alfaaz kabhi bhi kaise bhi rakhe jaayeN wo apne aap apni kahaani kehte hai apni gehraai dikhaate hai .. bas inhi sab baatoN ko mila ke apne experiences ya samajh se jo alfaaz bun de wahi shayar hai .. meri nazar maiN... khud ko nakaarne ki taaqat bhi honi chaiye aur roz kuch naya banane aur samajhne ki hasrat .. jiska koi mukaam na ho wo shayar hai .. par dukh ki baat hai ek makaam pe pahunch ke log apne ko shayar aur na jaane kya kya samajh lete hai .. Quote:
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Ye sawaal jawaab ka silsila chalta hee rahega..aur dilchasp bhi rahega aisi ummeed karti hoon.. Apna khayal rakhein.. Fir milti hoon... |
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3. Shayri ki baarikiyon ko aapne kis hadd tak jaana hai aur isse jude agar aapke paas koi kisse ho to humse share kijiye... Dekha jaaye to ye sawaal mere hisaab se sahi nahi hai .. shayrii ki baareekiyoN ki koi hadd nahi hai .. ye ilm ka wo saagar hai jiski kayi teh hai aur kuch parteN abhi khul gayi hai par na jaane kitni parteN khulna baaki hai aise main mera kuch bhi kehna bemaana ho jayega... Phir bhi jo soorat-e-haal abhi shayri ki takneek ka hai uske lihaaj se maiN bas itna hi keh sakta huN ... ki apni baat ko adab maiN rakhne ki himakat kar sakuN itna fun khaak bande ne zaroor ikhteyaar kar liya hai.. baaqi zabaan pe pakad kaafi aa chuki hai aur dheere dheere badh rahi hai .. baaki maiN tab bhi taalib-e-ilm tha .. aur ab bhi taalib-e-ilm hi huN .. Kunaal Bhai , kaise haiN aap. Aapka uupar wala reply per ke mehsoos hua ki aap shayri meiN kis ghehrai se doobe hue haIn. Merre chand sawal aap ke liye ..... 1. Shayar aur poet meiN kya farak hai ....aur poetry aap ke hisaab se routine haik aur shayri ka level bahut uuncha hai as compared to poetry. 2. Kyra shayri ki gehraee tak pahunchna her shayar ke liye possible hai ya nahiN . Aur Vo shora ya students of shayri jo abhi kachche haiN (raw) aur bahut neeche ki paydaan pe haiN ( tukbandi level) per aage berne ka jazba rakhte haiN , unke liye aap kya message aur method prescribe kerna chahenge. 3. Shayri aapke liye passion hai ye sirf shaq . 4. Aaj kal her cheez mein coaching ka zamana aa gaya hai ..be it studies, games , carreer , profession .. Now a days you have life coaches too. Shayri meiN coaching ka kya sthan hai aur iske ustad kahaN paye jaate haiN??? Kyonki bahut kuch likha hua sdc ki site pe bhi shayri ke baare meiN , jineh padne meiN meiN shayad mahino/ saal lag jayeiN ..but in my view Guru / ustaad se aap jaldi seekh skte haiN against written text/ matter. Regds Sanjay Sehgal |
Kunaal ji....aapne Madhu ke sawaaloN ke jawaab meiN jo shayar aur shayri ke bare meiN detail meiN baate kahi hai...muje bahut sahi lagi, bahut gehra tajurba hai aapko :)
accha lag rha hai ki dheere dheere ham aapko bahut acchi tarah jaan jayeNge :) |
Kunaal ji :) aapse aik request hai ki aik mahine ke liye profile meiN apni photo lagayeN taaki aapse baat karte hue yeh ehsaas bana rhe ki aap hamare saamne hi baithe hai :)
aapne apne bachpan ki 1 Rs. wali baat bataye ham us se poora sehmat hai ki maa-baap ka pyar kisi bhi roop meiN miley bahut keemti hota hai :) mere kuch aur sawaal haiN aapse :) 1. Kunaal ji, aap SDC ke kaun se members ko personely miley haiN, unke bare meiN thoda thoda hame jaroor batayeN, ki wo kis tarah ke ensaan lge aapko ? 2. agar aapko mokka miley ki aap shayri.com ke kinhi 5 members ko mil sakte hai jinse aap aaj tak nahi miley hai, to aapki list meiN wo kaun se 5 member honge? 3. agar shayri aapka shunk na hota to kya shunk hota...jis se aap shayri ki tarah dil se judey hote ? 4. apni pasand ki koi 5 gazloN ke link hame yahan dijiye...taaki agar ham unko aaj tak nahi pad sakeN hai to ab jaroor padeN. 5. jab kabhi aap khud ko kahin kisi baat par kamzor mehsoos karte hai to kis tarah khud ka housla banate hai phir ? 6. dil ki baat maan.ni chahiye ya dimaag ki ? 7. aapne en 11 saaloN meiN shayri.com meiN kya badlaav dekhe hai ? 8. aur wo badlaav aapko sahi lge ya galat ? 9. agar aapko SDC meiN koi badlaav laane ki baat kahi jaaye to aap kya badlaav lana chaheNge ? 10. agar aapko aik din ke liye super-power mil jaaye aur aap apni icsha ke mutabik 3 bade kaam kar sakte hai, to aap wo kaun se 3 kaam karna chaheNge ? 11. agar aapko zindgi ka koi aik hissa phir se jeene ka mokka miley to aap kaun sa hissa dubara jeena chaheNge ? 12. aapke lafzoN meiN shayri.com kya hai...please chand lafzoN meiN bayaan kijiye :) filhaal bas etna hi :D baaki baad meiN :rolleyes: |
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mere paas kehne ke liye waise bohat kuch hai .. lekin aapke sawaal ka jawaab to aapke hi sawaal main dikh jayega aapko .. gaur kijiye apni baat pe .. Quote:
kya meri aapke sath koi takraar hui ... kya aapse koi matbhed the mere .. ya kuch aur .. in sab ka jawaab hai .. NAHI...! to phir itne saaloN tak aapko khyaal tak kyuN nahi aaya .. chalo maan leta huN maiN bura huN maine nahi dekha kisi ko palat ke .. par aapne kyuN nahi ek baar bhi nahi koshish ki .. agar man main itna apna pan tha to aaj tak kahan the aap .. ya maaro goli .. ab bhi koun se aap mere se itni baat karte ho .. aise main aapko kya pata main ab kaisa reh gaya huN ya main ab wo nahi raha jo main tha ... ye self presumption se kyuN itna kuch soch liya aisa nahi hai ki ye aapne intentionally kiya .. ye main bhi jaanta huN .. ek daur aaya tha bhabhi .. sab jaante hai .. mujhe ujaad ke rakh diya us waqt ne maiN bohat toota tha .. aur mujhe bohat dukh ke sath kehna pad raha hai .. isi SDC ke bohat mere apne the jo .. unhone hi mujhe barbaad karne main poora hath rakha .. khair main ab kisi k naam nahi lena chahuNga .. wo daur beet chuka hai .. aapki aur aur mast bhai ki baat karuN to aap donoN ki zindagi bhi bohat waqt baad karwat badli thi .. aapko usme set hona tha .. aapke paas shayad kisi aur ke baare main sochne ka shayad waqt nahi tha.. aur main samajhta huN ki us waqt main aapko apne future ko sochna tha .. lazim tha usme apne aap ko aage leke jaana .. rahi meri baat maiN kabhi kahiN kisi zindagi ka important hissa tha hi nahi .. aap logoN ko bhi shayad main kabhi nahi dikha ... ya yuN kahiye ki sochne ka waqt hi nahi mila aapko bhi ... aise main ye doori aana laazmi hai bhabhi jee.. bohat toota tha main us daur maiN .. mera pyar meri zindagi thi roopali par kisi ko farq nahi pada ki maine kya kho diya .. aisa nahi meri baat mast bhai se nahi hui is baare main unse bhi hui thi .. par unka sath bhi bas naam bhar ka tha .. darasal kisi ko laga hi nahi ki mujhe bhi dard ho sakta hai ... uske baad bhi meri zindagi main kuch sahi nahi raha .. zindagi se utha patak meri chalti hi rahi .. sab kuch hi bigadta chala gaya .. khair wo sab ab beet chuka hai .. rahi baat mere pehle jaise na rehne ki .. to bhabhi jee pehle .. pehle ki tarah apna kar dekho .. bajaai ye sochne ke main waisa nahi raha .. ye socho ki ab ye gap hai to kyuN hai .. mere aas paas aaiye to sahi .. mujhe dekhiye to sahi .. maiN wahi huN .. jaisa tha .. wahi jiske dil main hazaaroN emotion baste the .. aaj bhi ehsaasoN ke liye bohat kaccha huN maiN .. aaj bhi apno ke sath ke liye utna hi bechain huN jitna pehle hua karta tha.. aur to aur meri to kad kaathi kaaya .. kuch bhi nahi badla .. log aaj bhi 23 24 saal ka hi kehte hai .. ;) lekin mera ye sab kehna bemaana hai kyuNki mere kehne se sab saccha ya jhootha nahi ho jayega.. mujhe wahi jaan sakta hai jo mere kareeb hai .. jinka sath mere sath hai aaj bhi .. bohat ziyadah keh gaya huN .. ho sakta hai main ghalat bhi huN .. kuch bura lag gaya ho to muafi bhi maagta huN .. bhaabhi to maa ke samaan hoti hai .. muaaf zaroor kar degi maiN jaanta huN .. aapka apna Kunaal |
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aap bhi khyaal rakheN apna .. aapka intezaar rahega.. aapka dost Kunaal |
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Maaz'rat chahuNga.. pehle to maiN samajh nahi paaya sawaal ko phir thoda hansa phir samajhne ki koshish kari to jo samajh aaya us lihaaz se main jawaab de raha huN .. shayad aap shayrii aur kavita kehne waloN maiN farq samajhna chaah rahe hai .. kyuNki poet aur kavi ya shayar bas language difference hai work profile ek hi hai .. wo hai writing .. kyuNki language badalti hai to phir tradition badal jaate hai aur uski wajah se writing rules bhi .. rahi baat shayri aur kavita main farq ki .. to saahab bas rules ka hi farq hai .. par shayri ke qaaide kavita se kahiN bhaari hai aur iska ek daaira hai apna .. kavita ka koi daaiira nahi .. aur aise koi khaas rules bhi ab tak saamne nahi aaye hai .. even ab to atukant aur prose kavitayen jyada prachlit ho rahi hai .. waise mere hisaab se shayri aur kavita main farq hote hue bhi main ek baat samajhta huN dono main RHYMING ka hona bohat zaroori hai aur honi hi chaiye .. shayri main to ye first n must hai .. kuch bhi likh dene ko main shayri ya kavita kuch nahi maanta ... is lihaz se shaayar aur kavi main koi farq nahi hai profile of work ek hai qaaide alag alag.. rahi baat level ki to ye hum tey nahi kar sakte .. par mere hisaab se shayri(ghazal goyi) karna kavita kehne se kahiN ziyadah pechida hai .. darasal shayri chote alfaz ke sath kayi baateN kehne ka hunar hai .. kavita ya nazm ek baat ki taraf ishaara karti hai .. jisme perform karna thoda aasaan ho jaata hai .. phir bhi kayi baar aisi nazm ya kavita likhi jaati hai jo hum padhte hi reh jaate haiN.. jaise gulzaar saahab likhte hai .. jaise amrita pritam likhti thiN ..sab kuch bas isi pe aa tika hai .. ki koun apni baat naye tareeke se doosri taraf jaake aur gehre tareeke se keh pata hai .. jaun elia saahab ka ek sher dekheN aur soche .. ki gham ka hai ya khushi ka din bhala kis tarah guzaaroge vasl ki shab bhi ab guzar li hai .. Quote:
baaqi jinke paas jazba hai junooN hai .. unhe kisi tarah ki salaah ki zaroorat nahi hai .. kyuNki aise dost to apna raasta khud bana lete hai .. aur ijaad karna bhi inhi ke bas ka hai.. bas itna ki kuch bhi mushkil samajh ke beech maiN nahi chhodna.. Quote:
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Apka shukria aap aaye.. aur khaak bande ko is laayaq samjha.. Kunaal |
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mujhe bhi sawaaloN ke jawaab dene maiN maza aa raha hai .. maine kabhi banawti baaten nahi ki .. na yahaN kar raha huN .. maine pehle hi thaan liya tha yahan aane se pehle ki main wo kahunga jo mujhe lagta hai na ki kisi ko khush karne ke liye jawaab rakhuNga ... |
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Aur mere kahne ka aapne matlab samajh hee liya tabhi apne tareeke se mujhe samjhaya ki us baat ko kaise kahna chahiye mujhe.....aap to jante hee hain ki sabka baat kahne ka apna tareeka hota hai...zaroori hai ki baat samne wale ko convey ho sake... Khair mujhe correct karne ka shukriya... Aur intzaar karne ka shukriya...aage bhi aati rahoongi... Khayaal rakhein... |
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Pic laga dee hai aapke kehne pe.. isse aapko pakka ehsaas hoga main saamne huN... :D aur sahi kaha maa baap ka pyar kya maa baap ki to gaali bhi bohat keemti hai .. chaliya aapke sawaaloN ki aur chalte hai .. bohat kam hai :rolleyes: waise bhi ;-) Quote:
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doosre ek mere bhai hua karte the AMIT7600 bohat dil ka rishta tha unse bhi bohat qariibiyat thi unse .. 2 saal unse is mulk main na hone ki wajah se baat na kar saka.. laut ke aaya aur ek mehfil ke dauran unse baat karne k liye phone lagay to jaan pada ki wo bhi ab is dunia main nahi rahe .. mujhe dukh hai in donoN se maiN ab kabhi nahi mil paunga par ye tees mujhe bohat pareshan karti hai.. Teesri MAUSAM aur SHIMUL .. ye dono meri aisi sathi rahi hai ek waqt pe jab koi nahi hua karta tha .. par ye hua karti thi .. ek baar apni zindagi rehte inse milna chahta huN .. aur inhe batana chahta hun ki yo dono mere liye bohat special hai.. DEVIKA se milne ka bohat mann hai ... meri bohat acchi dost hai .. mera bohat sath diya hai usne .. meri mazboori ki main uske waqt maiN uske sath khada nahi ho saka.. aur wo apne aap main ek kahaani hai .. main dekhna chahta huN kya aise log wakai maiN duniya main hai .. jo ek misaal hai .. par zindagi abhi baaki aur umeed bhi.. ek baar dhaval bhai se bhi milne ka mann hai bohat .. koi reason nahi hai phir bhi bas milna hai ... aur aapka naam is liye nahi liya kyuNki main jaanta huN main jaldi hi aapse miluNga Quote:
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baaki jawaaboN ke sath phir aauNga ... |
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beshaq baateN ek hi aur ishaara karti hai par do jagah baat kehne ka alag mudd'a aapko correct karna chahta tha .. aur unhe bas apne dil ka bataana chahta tha .. main pehle hi maazrat rakhi thi .. ki main koi talh mijaaz nahi ho raha .. par mujhe lagta hai .. kuch gustaakhi ho gayi jo sahi nahi lagi aapko .. phir se kehta huN kuch ghalat kaha ho to maaz'rat khwah hun khyaal rakhiye apna .. |
aage badhte hain kunaal ji....
Aapne kaha ki shayri ke ilawa aur bhi shauk hain aapke. .hame bhi bataiye vo kya kya hain aur unhe samay kaise de pate hain aap.ya nhi de pate? Apne bare kuch bataiye jaise... Fvrts...?? Movie Songs Place for holidays Koi aisa ya aisii Cheez jo kabhi bhi apka moid theek kar sakti hai?. Apne doston me aap kon si khaas baat dekhna pasand karte hain?..ya yun kahoon ki kya baat hai jo kisi ko dost samajhne ke liye kafi hai aapki nazar me?.. Muhabbat ki kya ahmiyat hai aapki nazar me..kya wakai iske bagair zindgi ko bemani samajhte hain aap? Abhi itne hee....:) Fir aati hoon... Tkcr |
Kunaal bohut acha laga ki tumne jawaab to diya.
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maine jayada sawaal aik saath es liye kiye kyuki maiN 2-3 din meiN USA ja rhi hu aur month end meiN vapis aaungi...wahan jakar maine aapke reply to padti rhuNgi par shayad etna waqt na miley ki sawaal kar sakun...esi liye :) muje yakeen hai yeh guftagu aapke liye bhi aur hamare liye bhi yaadgaar rhega. beech beech meiN thoda thoda aati rhuNgi :) |
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bahut acchi aur saachi baat kahi aapne...ham kabhi bhi sabhi ko khush nahi rakh sakte so wahi karo wahi kaho jo apne dil ko sahi aur sach lge :) |
Kunaal ji, aapki aur Sarika ki saari baat-cheet padi maine, muje es baat ki behad khushi ho rhi hai ki SDC ka yeh guftagu wala silsilla dosto ke giley-shikwe door karke unko aur kareeb la rha hai...aur haa Roopli ji ka naam beech meiN aaya...muje etna maloom tha ki wo SDC ki purani member hai...par ab jo samaj paaye maiN :( afsos hua jaan kar. yeh zindgi hai Kunaal ji, waqt accha ho ya bura ensaan ko chalna hi padta hai..ruk jao to zindgi khatam..chalne ka naam hi jeevan hai...ham duaa karte hai aapki zindgi meiN bahut acchi aur sulji hue ladki aaye jo aapko bahut pyar kare, aapko dil se samjay :)....god bless u
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jee mere maine kaha mere shauk kayi haiN .. par maiN unhe bhi samay nahi de paa raha .. iska matlab ye katayi nahi ki maiN bohat buzy huN ya kuch .. baki baat ye hai ki mere haalaat nahi hai aise ki maiN apne shauk poore kar sakuN ... Quote:
song to koi bhi .. Mohd rafi to Honey singh.. For holidays india maiN to kahiN bhi chale jao .. i think holidays ke liye to sab bhadiya hai .. but i want to go to las vegas once in my life.. shayri.. n songs .. kayi baar khmoshi.. Quote:
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Shukriya aap phir se aayiN.. khushi hui aapko dekh ke dobara.. Apka apna Kunaal |
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aur kar de na phir baat wahi ... shadi main bula lena .. arre apne logoN ko bulaya jata hai kya .. aur shayad jaldi aisa mauka aaye.. so be ready.. aur main wakai gussa nahi karta ... :D |
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humko bhi sath le le re hum reh gaye akele re hum reh gaye akele .. jawaab to de diye par ye kya humari baari main hi khisakne lagi aap .. ye to sahi nahi hai bhai .. khair aapki journey khoobsoorat ho aur aap jaldi wapas aayeN salamti se ... dua raheGi .. aur aapka intezaar rahega.. Kunaal |
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