TuJsE jUdA tO hO gAyE..pAr TuJkO jUdA nA kAr SaKe
tujse kabhi liya tha jo wada,khudse wo wada kar na sake hum apne haq me kabhi bhi.. faeede ka sauda kar na sake tarz-e-jindagi* apni..kuchh is tarah se gujari hai tark-e-taluq* ka bhi poori tarah irada kar na sake jab dekha tuje mehfil me,in ankho me sailab aa hi gaya hum to 'sanam' tuj ko,bhulane ki bhi aDaa* kar na sake Har toofan se nikala tuje,har andhi ke liye aagah kiya bus khud ko jindagi ke tufano ke liye aamada* kar na sake har kadam pe na jane kyo..teri jarurat si mehsus ki hai Tujse juda to hum ho gaye.. par tujko juda kar na sake tarz-e-jindagi=way of life tark-e-taluq= end of relationship aDaa=Act, posture aamada= prepared, ready |
tujse kabhi liya tha jo wada,khudse wo wada kar na sake
hum apne haq me kabhi bhi.. faeede ka sauda kar na sake tarz-e-jindagi* apni..kuchh is tarah se gujari hai tark-e-taluq* ka bhi poori tarah irada kar na sake Wah Wah!! jab dekha tuje mehfil me,in ankho me sailab aa hi gaya hum to 'sanam' tuj ko,bhulane ki bhi aDaa* kar na sake Har toofan se nikala tuje,har andhi ke liye aagah kiya bus khud ko jindagi ke tufano ke liye aamada* kar na sake Lovely... har kadam pe na jane kyo..teri jarurat si mehsus ki hai Tujse juda to hum ho gaye.. par tujko juda kar na sake Wahh! Hey Sanam! Lovely Nazm dear... Bahut accha laga padhkar.... Very nice words..... jab dekha tuje mehfil me,in ankho me sailab aa hi gaya hum to 'sanam' tuj ko,bhulane ki bhi aDaa* kar na sake Har toofan se nikala tuje,har andhi ke liye aagah kiya bus khud ko jindagi ke tufano ke liye aamada* kar na sake This sher was just 2 good.. seedha dil ko chho gaya hai....I loved it.... aage bhi aise hi likhti rehna... & Do TC:) |
wah wah
bohot khoob likha hai aapne , mera itne dinoon ke baad yahaan loutna aur yeh padha baar baar yahaan aane ki daawat deta hai.
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meri sanam, humesha ki tarah ........ dard ka sringaar.... tumhe padhna humesha achha laga hai. tumhari DDD |
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SANAM JI,
Kai dino baad aaye hai hum yahan par aur aapke sher padhe aur hamesha ki tarah hi bahot achha likha hai aapne. Hum kai baar sochte hai ke itna achha likhte ho aap fir kyun is mehfil se dur chale jaate ho. Aya kijiye yahan kuch achha padhne mil jata hai . Kyunki aap bhi hamari tarah dard par jyaada likhte ho jo hamara favourite topic hai. Khair hum to likhte nahi aaj kal lekin aap to likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye yahan par. Dard bhare sheron ko padhne ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai. tujse kabhi liya tha jo wada,khudse wo wada kar na sake hum apne haq me kabhi bhi.. faeede ka sauda kar na sake Mohabbat karte hain woh faayda kya dekhenge yeh to bus ek deewangee ki tarah hai sab kuch lutakar bhi dil jeet jaata hai tarz-e-jindagi* apni..kuchh is tarah se gujari hai tark-e-taluq* ka bhi poori tarah irada kar na sake Iraada kahan se hoga bcz true love does not have any end jab dekha tuje mehfil me,in ankho me sailab aa hi gaya hum to 'sanam' tuj ko,bhulane ki bhi aDaa* kar na sake Tujhe bhulna to chaha lekin bhula na paaye jitna bhulana chaha tum utna yaad aaye Har toofan se nikala tuje,har andhi ke liye aagah kiya bus khud ko jindagi ke tufano ke liye aamada* kar na sake Pyaar karne vaale kabhi darte nahi jo darte hai woh pyaar karte nahi aur har toofan ka saamna karte rehte hai har kadam pe na jane kyo..teri jarurat si mehsus ki hai Tujse juda to hum ho gaye.. par tujko juda kar na sake Dil ka rishta hi kuch aisa hota hai ke chah kar bhi dil se koi kisiko juda nahi kar sakta Aise hi likhte rahiyega ab ijaazat dijiye ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com |
sanamji...
waah kya likha hai apne ....its too good....dil ko chhu gai .... mira..... |
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bohat khoob ... ek aise kalam par aake tehra huN jahaN ... har kona dard se karah raha hai .... har ek lafz wakai dard se sarabor hai .. par ek gana yaad aa hi gaya ... hum bewafa har giz na the par hum wafa kar na sake ... well kuch line apne se jaroor kahUnga ,.. apni aadat se majboor huN ... tumhare hi kalam ki bulandi maiN... fisalta raha waqt hath se is tarah.. jindgi gujar jaye ek pal main jis tarah... gham ko haNsi se dhakta raha "saccha_pyar"... mar ke jinda nazar aate rahe jis tarah... yahi likh paya bas kuch aur khak alfaz ... apna khayal rakhna kunal |
Thans Pulkit,
Tumhare dil ko chhu gaya? tab to bhai sach me achha hoga..:) Thanks Zeba ji, Bahot Bahot Shukriya.. yaha aane ke liye aur hausla afjayee ke liye DDD Muje Bhi padhna achha lagta hai aapka reply:) Thanks to mai kahungi nahi take care Shukriya Meera ji take care |
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Waise maine notice to kiya hai ki aap yaha se gayab hai aur muje laga ki sayad likhne ke sath yaha pe aana bhi chhod hi diya hia. But im lucky that u r here on my post Janab, Likhte to aap bhi achha hai ....fir aap bhi likha kariye na. Hume bhi mauka mil jayega aapko padhne ka.. Aur jaha tak bat 'same topic' that is 'dard' ki hai..to kya kare.. bus wahi ek topic hai jo dil se nikalta hai. :) Aur kehte hai na ki Sharing same interest makes a company.. isi liye sayad aapko bi padhna achha lagta hoga Ek bar aur..Dil se bahot achha laga aapko dekh kar Take care n keep coming |
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Hamesha ki tarah..tumhara Share bahot achha hai And very rightly u said abt the song..hum bewafa hargij na the.. Thats one of my very favrt song Thanks for coming here.. and thanks for replying..and thanks for ur she'r and thanks for reminding that song n .... Bus filhal itna kafi hai :P see u take care |
sanam
kaafi arse baad aap ne is forum per likha hai, khayal ki yeh khoobsurti, dil ko chooti mehsoos hui hai "Tujse juda to hum ho gaye.. par tujko juda kar na sake" isi tarah aati raha karein , forum ko sajaati raha karein. musharrafhusain |
Sanam ji very good post feel so close bonding of meaning very nice....
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Thank you very much Musharraf ji
n shadow too.. Take care |
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sana
how r u? are is kaam main faida kahan naseeb main hota hay sana g gar kuch milta hay tu bas nuksaan yah kismat walon ko dard byan karne ka hunar....jaise aap k hathon ko mila khub likha hay |
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koi fayeda nahi hota... muje to yahi samaj me nahi aata ki log jan kar kulhari par pair kyo marte hai.... well...thanks for ur compliment take care |
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