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Gyan Saxena 12th April 2014 08:53 AM

Ishq-e-dil
 
Dil dhadakta Raha , Hum tadapte rahe
Teri Yadon ke patthar , Baraste rahe
Ek gumnam sa , Dard uthta raha
Jane kya pyaas thi ,Hum taraste rahe…….


Humne chaha bahut , tumko bhulein magar
Saari yadon khayalon mein tum hi tum rahe
Humne bola bahut , per dil na mana ise
Tum yaad aate rahe , dil mein baste rahe……


Humein socha kissi ko khabar na lagegi
Sari mahfil ko phir bhi pata chal gaya
Hum tumehin yaad kar muskurate rahe
Our humein dekhkar log hanste rahe………


Jab talak tu saath tha zindagi saath thi
Kaarwan-e-mohabbat mere saath tha
Aaj jab tu nahin to kuch bhi nai
Na hi manzill, na hi raste rahe……


Anjam-e-mohabbat ko tanhaai mein
Jab bhi socha to humne paya yahi
Bazar-e-mohabbat mein humko sanam
Pyaar mahnga raha, dil saste rahe………

Hamdam 12th April 2014 09:14 AM

Dear Gyan Saxena ji .

Pehli baar para aapka ek kalaam ..Bhai bahut kashish hai aap ke is kalaam
mein . aur ravangi kya khoobsorat hai ki jab tak poora per nahi liya dil ko
chain nahi mila ..Aur jab aapne apni baat khatm ki tou ek chap chor di humare
dil pe .

Beautiful indeed ..Keep it up .

Danjay Sehgal

Gyan Saxena 12th April 2014 10:42 AM

Dil dhadakta Raha , Hum tadapte rahe
Teri Yadon ke patthar , Baraste rahe
Ek gumnam sa , Dard uthta raha
Jane kya pyaas thi ,Hum taraste rahe…….


Humne chaha bahut , tumko bhulein magar
Saari yadon khayalon mein tum hi tum rahe
Humne bola bahut , per dil na mana ise
Tum yaad aate rahe , dil mein baste rahe……


Humein socha kissi ko khabar na lagegi
Sari mahfil ko phir bhi pata chal gaya
Hum tumehin yaad kar muskurate rahe
Our humein dekhkar log hanste rahe………


Jab talak tu saath tha zindagi saath thi
Kaarwan-e-mohabbat mere saath tha
Aaj jab tu nahin to kuch bhi nai
Na hi manzil rahi, na hi raste rahe……


Anjam-e-mohabbat ko tanhaai mein
Jab bhi socha to humne paya yahi
Bazar-e-mohabbat mein humko sanam
Pyaar mahnga raha, dil saste rahe………

Gyan Saxena 12th April 2014 10:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hamdam (Post 458233)
Dear Gyan Saxena ji .

Pehli baar para aapka ek kalaam ..Bhai bahut kashish hai aap ke is kalaam
mein . aur ravangi kya khoobsorat hai ki jab tak poora per nahi liya dil ko
chain nahi mila ..Aur jab aapne apni baat khatm ki tou ek chap chor di humare
dil pe .

Beautiful indeed ..Keep it up .

Danjay Sehgal

Shukriya Danjay Sahab..........Gyan Saxena....

aadeil 14th April 2014 03:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gyan Saxena (Post 458232)
Dil dhadakta Raha , Hum tadapte rahe
Teri Yadon ke patthar , Baraste rahe
Ek gumnam sa , Dard uthta raha
Jane kya pyaas thi ,Hum taraste rahe…….


Humne chaha bahut , tumko bhulein magar
Saari yadon khayalon mein tum hi tum rahe
Humne bola bahut , per dil na mana ise
Tum yaad aate rahe , dil mein baste rahe……


Humein socha kissi ko khabar na lagegi
Sari mahfil ko phir bhi pata chal gaya
Hum tumehin yaad kar muskurate rahe
Our humein dekhkar log hanste rahe………


Jab talak tu saath tha zindagi saath thi
Kaarwan-e-mohabbat mere saath tha
Aaj jab tu nahin to kuch bhi nai
Na hi manzill, na hi raste rahe……


Anjam-e-mohabbat ko tanhaai mein
Jab bhi socha to humne paya yahi
Bazar-e-mohabbat mein humko sanam
Pyaar mahnga raha, dil saste rahe………

Gyanji,
Bahot hi khubsurat aur dardbhari rachna hai...........
aapko hamaari jaanib se dheroN daad....................
khush raheN abad raheN.............
Adil

sameer'shaad' 14th April 2014 05:02 PM

waaahhhhh kyaa kahne Saxena saahab..... ummdah aashaaron se nawaaza hai aapne.
behad khoob peshkash.. daad hi daad

Shaad........

nachwaal3ab 15th April 2014 11:10 PM

waaahhhhh kyaa kahne Saxena saahab.

Masoom Pyar 16th April 2014 10:20 AM

Waah Waah waah waah Gyan Ji Bahot Umdaa.......Bahot Dard Bhari Poem.................................!!!

Gyan Saxena 13th July 2014 09:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hamdam (Post 458233)
Dear Gyan Saxena ji .

Pehli baar para aapka ek kalaam ..Bhai bahut kashish hai aap ke is kalaam
mein . aur ravangi kya khoobsorat hai ki jab tak poora per nahi liya dil ko
chain nahi mila ..Aur jab aapne apni baat khatm ki tou ek chap chor di humare
dil pe .

Beautiful indeed ..Keep it up .

Danjay Sehgal

Shukriya Sehgal sahab..............Gyan saxena

Gyan Saxena 13th July 2014 09:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aadeil (Post 458246)
Gyanji,
Bahot hi khubsurat aur dardbhari rachna hai...........
aapko hamaari jaanib se dheroN daad....................
khush raheN abad raheN.............
Adil

Shukriya Aadil sahab......................Gyan saxena

Gyan Saxena 23rd August 2014 02:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nachwaal3ab (Post 458275)
waaahhhhh kyaa kahne Saxena saahab.

shukriya.......................................... ................gyan

mujib66 23rd August 2014 03:33 PM

Bohut khoob Gyan ji.
Bada maza aya aap ke kalam ko padh ke.
Mubarak ho
Likhte rahiye.

Ashwani Tyagi 26th August 2014 08:37 PM

Bahut he behtreen Kalam... Saxena sahab keep writing rep+++++


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