Maya 54 dohe
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Vaise to maya pe bhut kuch likha jaa chuka hai, fir bhi iska concept mere liye akarshit raha hai aur isise prerit hokar maine 54 dohe maya par likhe hain. Har doha shabd Maya se shuru hota hai. aur ismein mera paryaas hamari aaj ki duniyaan se relate karne ka hai. mere apne views maya ke bare doha 4,6,13,17,23,25,333 aur 34 me ankit hain. aasha karta hun apko meri ye koshish pasand aayegi. apki rai ki intzar main Hardev Ashk MAYA 54 DOHE Maya tere roop ke aakarshit rang hazaar ruh se naata toRkar kar liya tujhse payaar 1 Maya tujhmeiN magan ho paNDit bhaye nadaan butt pooja meiN lag gaye bhool gaye Bhagwaan 2 Maya nagri meiN Chal kapaT dhurat ka hai raaj Degree ki boli lagaie paisa karaaye kaaj 3 Maya se bachkar raho parvachan diyo mahaNt par do meri dakshna nakad ya visa turant 4 Maya bhrashT budhi kare, deen bhoole insaan Internet pe katal se kaise bhaRegi shaan 5 Maya agni lalsaa roop ati parchaND Peer Sayiad Ajmeri Baba PaNDit kiyo pakhaND 6 Maya tujh meiN Doobkar BhrashT ho gaye saNt tabhi mere GobiNd ne kaha “Guru maaneo GraNTH” 7 Maya nagri meiN teri ‘Meraa ,Meraa, pardhaan dujoN ka haq CHeenkar kareiN apna kalyaan 8 Maya toone looT liye maanav, dev, pishaach aisee karni hai teri bhule sach ki jaach 9 Maya tere din ke ajab haiN saNjh sver Dhan waala maNgta bana nirdhan hua kuber 10 Maya kab paidaa hui koi na jaane bhed haaN is-se bachkar raho kaheiN graNth aur ved 11 Maya lat dhan ki bani kahiN roop saNgeet ik dooje ko ChoRkar bhaage jaayeiN meet 12 Maya, moh, ahaN, kaam hai jin jazboN ka ehsaas bin unke naN duniyaN chale lok kareiN banwaas 13 Maya na tujhko taj sake purshotam Shri Ram Seeta mayaa tayaag kar ban gaye insaan 14 Maya teri agan meiN jale so nirbal hoye heera samjhe kaaNch ko sona peetal hoye 15 Maya ke jaNjaal se Krishan nahi bach paaye “AshwTHaama” ke jhooTH se paaNdav liyo bachaaye16 Maya ri too mohini aur ati chitchor Vishvamittar dekhi Menika huaie aanaNd vibhor17 Maya karam kaaND ki do dhaari talwaar eik dhaar ghrinna bani dooji ban gayee payaar18 Maya dharti ko shiNgaar kaisa diyaa sajaaye dev janoN ka man bhi aaneiN ko lalchaaye 19 Maya kaNchan kayaa meiN kaala dil hai piroye rishte TooTeiN pal meiN, mittar vidhrohi hoye 20 Maya sapne suNdar sajaa chalaaye yeh saNsaar kareiN chaakri vaasna lobh moh ahaNkaar 21 Maya teri CHavi se kiya bhi jisne payaar Aisaa jadoo kar diya bhula sirjanhaar 22 Maya simran tera kareiN aur pooja na hoye maNdir meiN bhi baiTHkar dhyaan tere meiN khoye23 Maya tera drev, munijan kar na sake virodh INdar ko shakti ghumaNd Parshu Ram krodh 24 Maya ke darbaar meiN sach jhooTH na koye Jaisa chaSHmaaN Daaliye vaisa hi ruNg hoye 25 Maya ke suNg vichro par hath na uske aaoo kaheiN Baba Nanak tum karam yogi ban jaao 26 Maya garv na keeje ye hai paNCHi samaan Mrigtrishna ki jaani jaane kab bhar le uRaan 27 Maya ke saNtaap se jab man tera roye Sai charaN ki oaT le sab dukh dga dhoye 28 Maya makRi jaal se koi nahiN bach paaye Maanav daanav dev munijan sab chuNgal meiN aaye29 Maya ke bahkaave jab aa jaaye insaan Bahan bhai kaya baNdhujan ban jaye haivaan 30 Maya se ruTHiye na keeje is-se payaar aNtar aatma ki sun vichro beech saNsaar 31 Maya ANtar man ko jab deti hai maar Khudgarzi fir jeevan ka ban jaati aadhaar32 Maya aur Bhagwaan meiN itna hi aNtar bhai eik kraaye kaid aur duja deve rihaaee 33 Maya jeevan ke sapnoN ko deti aakaar Ab yeh maanav pe nirbhar vo kaise kare saakaar 34 Maya trishna kal THi hai aaj rahegi kal Samay ki seeDHi pe haNphti gayee umariya Dhal 35 Maya jiska aadi kare haoga uska aNt g amaiyaN khushiayaN dhan jeevan kuCH bhi nahiN beaNt 36 Maya sevan itna karo jo tan ka sar jaaye Par na itna karo ki man ko har jaaye 37 Maya bin guru gyaan ke jaise aNdhi talwaar Kab jaane ban raaKHshas kar de tujh pe vaar 38 Maya vish ka payaala hai ya madira bhara gilass Ye jaano to aa jaayega jeene meiN vishwaas 39 Maya Rab ki mahima hi socho na man hoga upraam “sabh hai mujh meiN smaya” bole Arjun se GhanShyam 40 Maya aaDubmar ajab hai jo paas lage vo door Khud ko SikaNdar kahne Waala hota ik din majboor 41 Maya ruTHe dil na TooTe aisa khud ko banaao Ye jeevan saugaat hai Rab ki samjho khushi manaao 42 Maya maaNgi jab bhi maaNgi, gaye teeraTH kiye snaan hum Duryodhan ban gaye, maaNga na kabhi Bhagwaan 43 Maya mast havaa se jab ban jaaye tufaan insaaN ke roop meiN fir Dhal jaaye shaitaan 44 Maya ke saNsaar meiN mat DhooNdo bhagwaan Itna hi bahut gar jee leIN hum banke insaan 45 Maya ke vistaar meiN eik samay jo rahe aTal karmoN ka phal yahiN mile aaj naiN to kal 46 Maya se na itna hi uljho ki saNtulan na khoye Dost banke dost rahe koi bairi na hoye 47 Maya man main deep sajaakar ashaa hai deti jagaa Koi kare us-se aarti koi ghar ko deve jalaa 48 Maya aur paNch chaakar uske rab ke haiN vardaan Bin inke ho kaise jag meiN insaaN ki pehchaan 49 Maya sirjanhaar hai anhad shakti mahaan Ham jhagReiN dekar usko apne roop aur naam 50 Maya ki deevaroN meiN jab dab jaaye ehsaas tan jeevit man vayakul aur ruh rahe udaas 51 Maya jeev jigyasoo socheiN gar BHagwaan kahaN Bhagwaan Vishwaas ho shuru kahaN se khatm kahaN ho vigyaan 52 Maya jaise chaDHte paani meiN nayiaa maNjhdaar Sai bnaa le apna khevat le jaayega paar 53 Maya varnan ko tere janm janm lag jaaye Fir nirguniyaaN ‘Ashk’ ki kalam na kyoN Thak jaaye 54 Hardev Sodhi ASHK KUC Surrey, BC |
bahut umda rachna hai sir..likhte rahen....
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Maya 54 dohe
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Dhnayvaad aapki prerna mere liye bahut maynaa rakhti hai Hardev Ashk |
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Hardev ji ,
Maine bade itminaan se aapke sare 54 dohe pare jo ke aap ne Maya pe likhe haiN . Itna detail mein maya ka vyakyan shayad hi kisi ne kiya ho . Mera aapko shat shat naman Sir , Aapki mehnat wakey mein kabile tareef hai . Yeh meri khushkismati ki meri nazar aapki post poe per gayi aur mujhe perne ki curosity hui .. Aapki lekni mein dum hai , aur main soch raha tha ki aap jaise mahubhav ke kuch rachnayein. ghazal parne ko milti rahein tau hamar saubhagya hoga . Maya ANtar man ko jab deti hai maar Khudgarzi fir jeevan ka ban jaati aadhaar32 Maya aur Bhagwaan meiN itna hi aNtar bhai eik kraaye kaid aur duja deve rihaaee 33 Maya jeevan ke sapnoN ko deti aakaar Ab yeh maanav pe nirbhar vo kaise kare saakaar Ye teen dohe mujhe bahut dil ke kareeb lage .. Sanjay Sehgal |
Maya 54 dohe
Sanjay Ji:
aapne is posting ke jo maine lagbhag 4 saal pahle ki, aapna poora samay nikaalkar parha, aapko acha laga, mujhe parteet hua, ki meri mehnat safal hui. bahut bahut dhanavaad. Regards aur naya varsh 2015 aapke liye mangal maya ho. Hardev Ashk |
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Aate rahiyega aur aage bhi aisi rachnayein..padhne ka awsar dete rahiyega.... Madhu.. |
Maya dohe
Madhu Ji:
Koti koti dhanyavaad. bas aiise hi hausla bharaten rahein aur raabta rakehin. Vo kahte dil chata hai bahut jald unka pyaam aaye jaane "Ashk" kab zindgi ki shaam aa jaaye |
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