bhari bheed me bhi tanha ho gaya
 

Jindgi main ek sathi juda ho gaya
begana mujhse mera khuda ho gaya

tere milane per jo aaya tha chehare pe noor
surk galo.n ka rang ab syaha ho gaya

jo bhi sapne dekhe the ranginiyo ke
her ek sapna wo aaj feekha ho gaya

tu jo shath thi na thi jaroorat kisi aur ki
tere jane se bheed me bhi tanha ho gaya

maien socha tha tu ban jayegi jindgi meri
aaj main us jindgi se hi juda ho gaya……



dllip mere dost

mujhe pata hai k kisk liye likha hai

tu udas mat ho mere dost]

main is dost
ko hamesha mukurate dekhna chahta hu..is peshkas k ehsas bahoy hi achhe hai

wo zarur zindagi me wapas aayegi bhagvanse prarthna karta hu

apna khayal rakhana

aapka dost
dhaval

Re: bhari bheed me bhi tanha ho gaya
 

dilip main tumhara ek dost ke jane ka drad samjti hu. par ek baat kahu dost kabhi bhi ek doosrey se jayada der tak naraz nahi rah saktey. so woh jaldi hi vapas aa jayegi.

ahsaas bahut pyarey hain.

keep smiling :-)

tumhari didi

Re: bhari bheed me bhi tanha ho gaya
 

dilip ji agar aap fir udaas hue na to achhi baat nahi hogi----------
bcoz i dont like ur udaas chehara..........i hate ur udasi my dear friend...........ok.............meri baat samajh aai ki nahi.......:mad:

keep-----------<<<<<<<<(((((((:) ))))))>>>>>>>--------------smile
ALL-WAYS

GRATSE

AAPKI CHHOTI SI DOST
POOJA;) ======================

Re: Re: bhari bheed me bhi tanha ho gaya
 

pooja jab koi apna jata hai to udasi to aati hi hai na.....
but tumhara reply padne ke baad main bilkul bhi udas nahi hoo.n
tum hamesha mere chehre per muskan la deti ho..........
cute ladki tumhara naam to muskan hona chahiye....
shukriya yaar

:) ---'--,--'--,--(((@

hi
 

tu jo shath thi na thi jaroorat kisi aur ki
tere jane se bheed me bhi tanha ho gaya

maien socha tha tu ban jayegi jindgi meri
aaj main us jindgi se hi juda ho gaya……

great writting dear...
its shows that reality comes on the paper..
its very well known fact that love and pain both comes together...
so make yourself as strong as you can do...
take care...

shukriya dost///
kuch bate.n jeevan main fir se sambhab nahi hoti.....
tumhare mere prati jo ehsas hai.n uske liye main tahe dil se tumhra shukrguzar hoo.n
ese hi ehsas banaye rakhan

ek begana sa
dilip

Re: Re: bhari bheed me bhi tanha ho gaya
 

shukriya didi

abhi maine jo dhaval se kaha main fir wahi kahna chahta hoo.n.
mera manna hai ki kuch cheeje esi hoti hain jo jindgi main fir dubara aa hi nahi sakti....... or yadi aa bhi jaye.n to unme pahli si baat kaha.....

" RAHIMAN DHAGHA PREM KA, MAT TODO CHATKAYA
TOOTE SE FIR NA JUDE, JUDE GANTH PAD JAYE....."

shukriya didi
ese hi apna pyar banaye rakhiye ga...... aapke reply se dil ko sukoon milta hai......

aapka
dilip

Re: hi
 

chem sahab

main aapki is baat se poorn sahmat hoo.n
or achha laga jo aap meri is post per aaye...
shukriya

ase hi aate rahiye ka.....

shukriya.......

dilip

hi
 

Jindgi main ek sathi juda ho gaya
begana mujhse mera khuda ho gaya

wah dilip kaya baat hai bhut acha kaha appnr....

tere milane per jo aaya tha chehare pe noor
surk galo.n ka rang ab syaha ho gaya

bilkul sehmat hoon appse ki jab koi apna juda hota hai to yahi aalam hota hai.....

jo bhi sapne dekhe the ranginiyo ke
her ek sapna wo aaj feekha ho gaya

tu jo shath thi na thi jaroorat kisi aur ki
tere jane se bheed me bhi tanha ho gaya

maien socha tha tu ban jayegi jindgi meri
aaj main us jindgi se hi juda ho gaya……

bhut achi baat kahi appne apne is khubsurat qalaam par raj ki diili daad kabool karna or yu hee mehfil ko jawaa banaye rakhna.....take care......raj.......

Re: hi
 

bahut bahut shukriya janab aapka yahan aane ke liye ........
yadi aap hamesha yunhi hi hamara sath dete rahenge to hum bhi sada kuch na kuch likhte rahenge

shukriya janab

aapka dilip

Re: hi
 

bahut bahut shukriya janab aapka yahan aane ke liye ........
yadi aap hamesha yunhi hi hamara sath dete rahenge to hum bhi sada kuch na kuch likhte rahenge

shukriya janab

aapka dilip

bhai aaj tak jitni bhi baar padha hai aapko is baar aapne sabse ahcha likha hai.bas kuch kamjoriyan dikhin par fir v pichli posts se bahut behtar hain.bas ek baat hai, surk nahi surkh hota hai.........
bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki har kalaam ke saath aap aur behtar likhte rahen........

lucky ji
aap hamari is post per aaye shukriya .... aur main behad khush hoo.n ki aaj aapne is nacheez ke likhe kalam ki kuch tarif ki ... wanki to main hamesha yahan aapse kuch na kuch seekhta rahta hoo.n... or yadi aap yu.n hi agar sath dete rahe to main aapko kabhi nirash nahi hone doonga ye wada hai....
aap yahan aaye iske liye shukriya........

aapka dost
dilip

hi dilip ji

apne bahut hi khubsurat andaz main apne dil ke darad ko kaghaz per utara he ye hunar sabhi ko mayassar nahi hota ap iski qadar hamesha kijiyega aur likhte rahiyega main apke bare zyada to nahi janti magar jitna padhkar pata chala he uske liye main sirf itna hi kehna chahungi

"JUDAI per hi qayam he nizame zingani bhi
bichad jata he sahil se gale milke pani bhi"

so dont worry be HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

keep writing+smiling
take care
bye

hi rubina ji

accha laga jo aap yahan aayi.n aur mujhe reply diya . ye aap jaise dosto ki hi dua ka natija hai ki main kuch likhne ki koshish kar pata hoo.n aapki likhi shayri bhi behad umda hai..... or ab to aapse dosti ho hi gayi hai.... aate rahiyega jjisse mujhe likhne ke liye housla milta rahe.......
shukriya...............

Tamam umar to apni intzar main guzar gayi wo na aaye
ab ki jab hum is duniya se jane lage to unka khat aaya......

apna khyal rakhiyega.....

ek begana sa dost
dilip

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hi,hume tumhara sher bahut pasand aaya hume jayada kuch nahi bas itana hi kahana hai ki....,
GAM KE LIYE PADI HAI ABHI TO UMRA KAFII,,
AAOU YE CHAND LAMAHE HANS KE GUJAAR LE,,
BYE KHAYAL RAKHIYEGA AAPNA

sahi kaha janab
per pyar karne wale ye kahan samjhte hai.n jara gam ke sagar main gota lagaiye fir pata chalega judai kya hoti hai


shukriya janab aapka ese hi sath dete rahiye ga.........

aapka begana sa dost
dilip