bheega badan
bheega badan tha mera,
neeyat teri geeli thi tan pe mere paani ki buunde nazaren teri fissli thi lagi jo aag lagan ki dekho geela badan jal gaya chhune laga tha tuu jo mujhko pathther jaise pighal gaya prem ki barakha baras gayi sabbr ka baandh chatak gaya main bus simmat ke reh gayi aang se aang lipat gaya kehene ko the do badan jaan jaise ek hui tuu hi tuu tha mujhme us shun main bhi tujhme sama gayi hothon ka chumbban ,hathon ki hararat ankon me teri,bherpuur shararat tan se tan mila tha tere man se man the mile garam saanse paaker teri marusthal me the fuul khile sharam ki oadhni tajker dekho pyar tera pehen liya kuwanrey sapno ko tuune dulhan jaisa saja diya her pal hua jaise sinduri ab rahi na main adhuri pura mujhe bana diya! |
Re: bheega badan
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Ishse padhkar sirf itna hi kahunga.... Wah Wah Sach mein ek umda rachna ishse padhkar hamein Malik Moh. "Jaysi " jee ki yaad gayi take care |
shukriya
meri ek chhoti si koshish apko lubha gai....shukriya..
Malik ji ke samne to main kuch bhi nahi aur apne meri rachna ki tulna unse kerke mujhe bahut prerit kiya hai...isi tarah meri rachanon per prem lutate rahiyega... fir se tahe dil se shukriya kehna chahungi |
shukriya
meri ek chhoti si koshish apko lubha gai....shukriya..
Malik ji ke samne to main kuch bhi nahi aur apne meri rachna ki tulna unse kerke mujhe bahut prerit kiya hai...isi tarah meri rachanon per prem lutate rahiyega... fir se tahe dil se shukriya kehna chahungi |
tan melagi agan chalo hum sath thumhre hai hum dono pyase
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Re: shukriya
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Dear Jaysi ji ki rachna mein hindi,khadi boli aur Pharsi shabado ka Prayog hota tha bas yahi farak hai apki aur unki rachna mein Baki wahi jazbaat jhalkate hai take care |
saharan
racahan apane andar ke siharan see bah detee hai. prem ke is roop ka bahut pyara warnana kiya hai tum ne
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bahut dino baad is tarah ka likha hua kuch padha thodi alag saili likhne ki aur thode alag ehshash.bas poore badan me ek sihran si ho gayi ise padhte padhte.laga jaise kahin main khud hi to ye pal nahi jee raha hoon.
bahut hi behtareen tareeke se aapne apne khayal pathak tak pahunchaye hain.bas yahi kahunga ki aap bas yunhi likhte rahiye. sirf ek hi baat galat lagi ki ye kalaam ishq me hona chahiye tha.umeed hai ki agli baar se aap forum ka dhayan rakhengi post karte samay. GHAYAL |
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