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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th May 2006, 08:30 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,300
Posted By Devangi
Pathar na kehna Jis Dil mein armaan bahut hay ...

Pathar na kehna Jis Dil mein armaan bahut hay
Patharon se ek jharney ka rukh modne hum chaley

Phuul na kehna Jis Phuul mein kantey bahut hay
Phuulon ko Katon se Sajaane hum chaley

Karvaan...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 09:08 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,524
Posted By Devangi
Re: tanhaiya bhi gum-gashda hain !

Sukun mujhko kabhi milta na shayad …
Magar ab dard dil ke darmiyan hai !

Mera hona bhi ab to bewajah hai ..
Jiye jana bhi jaise ek saja hai !

Khud apne shahar mai main ajnabi hun …
Tumhara...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 08:59 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,639
Posted By Devangi
Mayank ji, Aap ko yaha dekh ke bahut achha...

Mayank ji,

Aap ko yaha dekh ke bahut achha laga. chalo aap ko kuch to pasand aaya. aaise hi apni raaye dete rahiyega aur sikhaate rahiyega. thanks!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 08:50 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,241
Posted By Devangi
mushkil danny ji, kaise ho? kya kahu iss...

mushkil danny ji,

kaise ho? kya kahu iss poem ke baare me? bahot dard hain, achhe se bayaan kiya hain. do keep writting.

aapki chhoti si dost.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 08:42 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,379
Posted By Devangi
Anish ji, aapki baat sahi hain. aur...

Anish ji,

aapki baat sahi hain. aur andaaz-e-bayaan bhi pasand aaya mujhe.

Karte hain wafa kee baate wo jo naam-e-wafa bhi na jane
Ab to wafa kee kasm de kar ek pyaas bhujhai jaati hain
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 08:35 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,123
Posted By Devangi
Sukanya ji, So nice of you to share these...

Sukanya ji,

So nice of you to share these meaningful words here. Very nice message, thank you so much.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 08:32 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 6,022
Posted By Devangi
Anil ji, Mubaarak ho. aaise hi likhte raho...

Anil ji,

Mubaarak ho. aaise hi likhte raho aur apna khyaal rakho.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 08:29 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,639
Posted By Devangi
Anish ji, Mein aap jaisa kaha likhti hun,...

Anish ji,

Mein aap jaisa kaha likhti hun, yeh to bas kuch yun hi aaise hi. khair, aap ko pasand aaya jaan ke achha laga. aap ka dil chhu liya to mera likhna safal huya. aaise hi saath rahiyega aur...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 08:25 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,639
Posted By Devangi
ilesh ji, Aapne isse parha aur pasand kiya...

ilesh ji,

Aapne isse parha aur pasand kiya iss ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th May 2006, 10:18 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,904
Posted By Devangi
Re: Koi Aur KHATA nahiN...!

Dear kunal,

Tum aur tumhare khyaal, kya kahu mein? bahut bahut bahut badhiya likha hain aur sahi bhi. sabhi sher pasand aaye mujhe. dil se daad kubul kijiyega aur likhte rahiyega.

Aur haan apna...
Forum: Ghazal Section 19th May 2006, 10:10 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 3,985
Posted By Devangi
Re: Ek tarahi ghazal..

HaiN log pooCHate jo mujh se iSHq ki kahaaniyaaN
Suna sakunga kaise main jo dil hi taar taar hai..

Tamaam umr saaTH dun maiN ban ke tera ham-safar
Tu zindagi nahiN hai to yeh zindagi bekaar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th May 2006, 10:04 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,828
Posted By Devangi
har raat jab jeewan ka har pal sota hai dil...

har raat jab jeewan ka har pal
sota hai
dil mera bahut rota hai
jeewan woh kyon nahee
jo sapno main dikhta hai
jeewan toone diya hai
aur sapne man likhta hai
dil khud ko tujh se bara manta...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th May 2006, 09:17 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,746
Posted By Devangi
Wafa ji, zindagi ko bezaar kehna aasaan...

Wafa ji,

zindagi ko bezaar kehna aasaan nahin
koi shaqs duniya mein bekaar nahin

Bahut badi baat keh di hain aapne aur yeh bhi ki "woh baatein ab puraani ho gayi". ajeeb si tadap mehsoos ki,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th May 2006, 09:12 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,071
Posted By Devangi
Anil ji, Aap ka dard aur bebasi khoob ubhar...

Anil ji,

Aap ka dard aur bebasi khoob ubhar aaye hain iss kalam me. aaise hi masoom se ehsaas hum sab ki nazar karte rahiyega aur apna khyaal rakhiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th May 2006, 08:26 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,225
Posted By Devangi
Sukanya ji, Bahot khoob. Aap ka likha parh...

Sukanya ji,

Bahot khoob. Aap ka likha parh ke achha laga, bahut badhiya likha hain. aaise hi likhte rahiyega.

Tere Dil mein Chupe kuch Aankahe se Raaz hain
Guzartey Lamhon mein Satatey yeh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th May 2006, 08:16 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,639
Posted By Devangi
Re: bahut achha hai

Anil ji,

Aapne isse parha aur samjhaa yeh bhi bahut hain. aaise hi aage bhi saath rahiyega aur aap bhi apna khyaal rakhiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th May 2006, 08:15 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,639
Posted By Devangi
Sukanya ji, Aap ko yaha dekh ke kitna achha...

Sukanya ji,

Aap ko yaha dekh ke kitna achha laga yeh mein bata nahi sakti. aur aapne aaise hi saath diya to mein jaroor likhungi. Aap bhi khush rahiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th May 2006, 08:12 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,639
Posted By Devangi
Wafa ji, Aap yaha aaye aur isse parha aur...

Wafa ji,

Aap yaha aaye aur isse parha aur pasand kiya iss ke liye bahut shukriya. aap bhi likhte rahiyega aur apna khyaal rakhiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th May 2006, 08:13 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 5,235
Posted By Devangi
Re: ' Mushkil Mera Naam Nahin Hai...! '

Mushkil danny ji,

Bahot khoob. bahut achha likha hain aapne, sahi hain, it's beautiful work. do keep writting.


Bhoule se bhi jo toumko yaad na kiya meine
Aissa koyi din, raat, subhah,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th May 2006, 07:53 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,489
Posted By Devangi
Re: Meri Aatma Ka Bojh

Ehsason ko kuredna humein Aata nahin hai
Kya Maloom meri Kalam kya likhti jati hai

Tadap tadap kar hi jeena Naseeb hai agar
Toh jee lenge jab takk Zindagi jeeye jati hai


ekwafa ji,

bahot...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th May 2006, 07:48 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,639
Posted By Devangi
Re: hi

Manu ji,

aapne isse parha aur pasand kiya iss ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th May 2006, 07:51 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,639
Posted By Devangi
~Jalaa karte hain~

Woh aJnabee ban ke mila karte hain
Phir bhi kyun humse gilaa karte hain

Zakhm dete hain kuch Jaan_bujh kar
Phir chupke se aake dawa karte hain

Pehle to Jeete Jee maar diya hum ko
Ab Qaatil...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th April 2006, 02:27 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,931
Posted By Devangi
Kunal ji, Kaise ho? aap ke khyaal parhe aur...

Kunal ji,

Kaise ho? aap ke khyaal parhe aur inn ehsaason ko dil se mehsoos kiya. isse parh ke ek gazal yaad aa gayi jo yaheen pe reply me likh rahi hun. aasha hain ki aap samajh jaayenge.

...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th April 2006, 02:22 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,464
Posted By Devangi
Anil ji, Bahot badhiyaa likhaa hain aapne...

Anil ji,

Bahot badhiyaa likhaa hain aapne hamensha ki tarhaa, yun hi likhte rahiyega, aur hum sab ko aap ke behtareen kalam parhne ka mauka dete rahiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th April 2006, 09:09 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,652
Posted By Devangi
Sukanya ji, Aap ko yaha dekh ke bahut achha...

Sukanya ji,

Aap ko yaha dekh ke bahut achha laga. aapka likha huya sher bhi mujhe bahut pasanad aaya. aap ko jo line pasand aayi woh meri bhi favourite line hain. aap aaise hi aate rahiyega aur...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th April 2006, 09:06 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,652
Posted By Devangi
Sameer ji, Isse pasand karne ke liye...

Sameer ji,

Isse pasand karne ke liye shukirya.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2006, 08:10 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,325
Posted By Devangi
Sukanya ji, Aapne bahut achha likha hain,...

Sukanya ji,

Aapne bahut achha likha hain, yeh gehre ehsaas aur iss me chhupa inspiration message mujhe pasand aaya. aap kam hi aate ho yaha par jab bhi aate ho ek behtareen kalam ke saath, aap ka...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2006, 07:47 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,652
Posted By Devangi
Kunal ji, Aapke comments ke bina yeh kalam...

Kunal ji,

Aapke comments ke bina yeh kalam adhoora sa tha, aapko achha laga yeh jaan kar mujhe bhi achha laga, aur kya hain bas yaadein hi hain jo rishten toot jaane ke baad bhi humhare saath hoti...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2006, 07:40 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,652
Posted By Devangi
Rajan ji, Pehle bhi keh chuki hun ki aap ka...

Rajan ji,

Pehle bhi keh chuki hun ki aap ka saath hamensha mujhe ek nayi prerna deta hain, bahut bahut shukriya aur yeh "ji" lagaane ki jaroorat nahi hain. By the way, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU. Khush...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2006, 07:38 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,652
Posted By Devangi
Shradh ji, Aap yaha aaye aur yeh bataaya ki...

Shradh ji,

Aap yaha aaye aur yeh bataaya ki tumhe yeh ehsaas achhe lage, jaan kar khushi huyi. aap bhi likhte rahiyega. take care!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th April 2006, 02:14 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,652
Posted By Devangi
~Tere bina~

Adhoora hain mera har khwaab tere bina
Kaise bataayu kya hain ab haal tere bina

Badlaa nahi mausam tere jaane ke baad
Kya patjhad ab kya yeh bahaar tere bina

Sang tere mashoor ho kar huyi...
Forum: Hindi/Urdu Lyrics 17th March 2006, 11:06 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,382
Posted By Devangi
~Tujhse naaraaz nahi zindagi~

Tujhse naaraaz nahi zindagi, hairaan huN main.
Tere maasum sawaaloN se pareshaan huN main.

Jeene ke liye socha hi nahi,
Dard sambhaalne honge.
Muskuraaye to, muskuraane ke,
Karz utaarne honge....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th February 2006, 11:48 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,103
Posted By Devangi
Namaste deewana ji, Bahut bahut shukriyaa...

Namaste deewana ji,

Bahut bahut shukriyaa aap ka isse parhne ke liye. take care!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th February 2006, 11:46 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,103
Posted By Devangi
Khozii ji, Nice to know that you like this...

Khozii ji,

Nice to know that you like this one as well. you too keep writting and take care!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th February 2006, 11:45 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,103
Posted By Devangi
Abey ji, Iss kalam ko pasand karne ke liye...

Abey ji,

Iss kalam ko pasand karne ke liye shukriya. aur kya kahe jab apne hi humko pehchaan na sake to khud ko stranger na kahe to kya kahe. take care!
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 9th February 2006, 02:25 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 633
Posted By Devangi
wah prashant ji, bahut khoob! bahut...

wah prashant ji,

bahut khoob! bahut khubsurat gazal pesh ki hai aapne yaha, parh ke achha laga. likhte rahiyega. tc
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th February 2006, 08:02 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 3,231
Posted By Devangi
Anil ji, Bahut pyaara likhaa hai aapne....

Anil ji,

Bahut pyaara likhaa hai aapne. bahut khubsurti se ehsaas bayaan kiye hai yaha, parh ke bahut achha laga. yun hi pyaare se masoom se khyaal hum sab ki nazar rakhte rehna. take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th February 2006, 07:48 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 833
Posted By Devangi
anil ji bahut khoob. likhte rahiye. ...

anil ji


bahut khoob. likhte rahiye.

take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2006, 07:42 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,510
Posted By Devangi
Very nice gazal anil ji... likhte rahiyega....

Very nice gazal anil ji...

likhte rahiyega. take care!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2006, 07:40 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,103
Posted By Devangi
~Naa duaa kar koi naa dawaa de mujhe~

Tu agar jo chaahe to bhulaa de mujhe
Har nishaani meri ab lautaa de mujhe

Bhale ab mujhe manaane naa aaye tu
Magar tere saher kaa pataa de mujhe

Meri har adaaon pe naaz uthaaya tune
Ab tera...
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