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shweta
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Shayri-e-Dard
1st July 2012, 10:02 PM
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!.. Shaa'ir huN to
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2,901
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shweta
------------------------------------ sach...
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sach me..mobile tod kar achcha kiya...
again ur writing is awesome n once again made me ur fan ;)
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Shayri-e-Dard
7th May 2012, 01:26 AM
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mere hamsafar mere saath chal
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shweta
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In one word: Superb
yahee raat din kee shikaayte hame is safar men lagi rahee,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi, tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.
...
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Shayri-e-Dard
3rd April 2012, 10:31 AM
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~.. ek mukalmaati ghazal
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1,070
Posted By
shweta
Hi... this one is really touching.. nice...
Hi...
this one is really touching.. nice try...
kaha maine tumhare samne kyun aaNkh bhar jaye
kaha usne bahut mumkin hai aise pyar mar jaye
kaha maine kahaN tak aur mere saath rahna hai ...
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Shayri-e-Dard
2nd April 2012, 12:03 PM
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18
Do pal ki zindagee mayn!
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1,329
Posted By
shweta
Hello.. Its really nice. Every line is so...
Hello..
Its really nice. Every line is so awesome..
specially
Na poocho yaaro hamsay visl_o_hijar ki baatayn,
Haye visl ayk naghmaa aur hijr ik fasaanaa!
Hasb_o_nasab pay apnay, thaa naaz...
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Shayri-e-Dard
27th March 2012, 07:40 PM
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24
hijr ka rona kyun rote ho ?
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2,810
Posted By
shweta
wow.... so much left to jot down.. hahha.. its...
wow.... so much left to jot down.. hahha.. its really nice and i think iss meter ko humne khich kar kilometer me kar diya hai ;) .. :):)
I liked it all especially
jab dekho rote rahate ho....
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Shayri-e-Dard
20th March 2012, 11:43 PM
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8
- baat sayaani tum karte ho -
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1,679
Posted By
shweta
* baat sayaani tum karte ho dil se fir bhi, tum...
* baat sayaani tum karte ho
dil se fir bhi, tum bachche ho
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
20th March 2012, 11:15 PM
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6
~.. kya kahana tha kya kahte ho
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889
Posted By
shweta
kaabil-e-taareef... yaad chalo na aati...
kaabil-e-taareef...
yaad chalo na aati hogi
yaad aana bhi kyu bhoole ho
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
20th March 2012, 10:59 PM
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8
- baat sayaani tum karte ho -
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1,679
Posted By
shweta
Thank you so much for reading it :)
Thank you so much for reading it :)
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Shayri-e-Dard
20th March 2012, 10:52 PM
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8
- baat sayaani tum karte ho -
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1,679
Posted By
shweta
Hello Uffaq.. Firstly a lot of thanks for...
Hello Uffaq..
Firstly a lot of thanks for reading it and appreciating it.
ye meri ek koshish thi.. aapko pasand aayi achcha laga... aur hmmm m in a learning phase so all the technical aspects are...
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Shayri-e-Dard
20th March 2012, 12:29 PM
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8
- baat sayaani tum karte ho -
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1,679
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shweta
- baat sayaani tum karte ho -
baat sayaani tum karte ho
aql se par bacche lagte ho
main tumko samjhuu kaise
itna abke jo badle ho...
mujhko bhi tum ab batlaao
raaz jo dil me sab rakhte ho
ik ik baat chupaane ko ab
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
10th March 2012, 05:15 PM
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13
~.. Yaad rakhna hai bhool jana hai
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1,121
Posted By
shweta
liked it.. ek chup Fikr sukh so degi...
liked it..
ek chup Fikr sukh so degi tumheN
barna baatoN ne dil dukhana hai
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
10th November 2011, 12:31 PM
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4
~.. Woh kya tha meri aankh se
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1,829
Posted By
shweta
aane ka gham karuN ki jaane ka gham karuN tha...
aane ka gham karuN ki jaane ka gham karuN
tha ashq aakhiri jo gaNvaane ka gham karuN
dil iske aane se mera halkaa jo tha abhi
woH kya tha meri aaNKh se chalkaa jo tha abhi
zugnu sitara chand sa...
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Shayri-e-Dard
10th November 2011, 12:15 PM
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11
~..masla anaa ka nahi zazbaat meri..~
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1,752
Posted By
shweta
$..masla anaa ka nahi zazbaat meri..$
hi..
just a thought... (not arranged in meter )...
एक ज़रा सी है ये बात मेरी ..
मसला अना का नहीं ज़ज्बात मेरी ..
जब भी जी चाहा खेल गया वो .
क्या है आखिर बता .. औकात मेरी
Forum:
Shayri-e-Ishq
8th November 2011, 02:11 PM
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34
Tere Husn ko Kitni GhazlooN, NazmooN Mein ChupaooN??
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6,929
Posted By
shweta
bahut hi khoobsoorat.... :)
bahut hi khoobsoorat....
:)
Forum:
Shayri-e-Ishq
8th November 2011, 02:08 PM
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20
Maghroor Sheeshe....
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3,299
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shweta
waah.. nice ... Likhaa jo Naam Haathon...
waah.. nice ...
Likhaa jo Naam Haathon meiN Chupaanaa Bhool Jaate haiN.
.....
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
8th November 2011, 11:50 AM
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31
Tere Ho Kar Bhi Hum Tujh Se Dur Hai
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8,926
Posted By
shweta
mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat kuch...
mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai..
nice lines parineete ji... liked this creation very much
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Shayri-e-Dard
6th November 2011, 02:04 PM
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12
daar pe zinda lamhoN ko kis mazey se jee gaya
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1,248
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shweta
nice creation... mujhey bahut pasand aaya... aur...
nice creation... mujhey bahut pasand aaya... aur last sher to sach me bahut khoobsurat ending
sab lutaa ke zarraa niklaa tha juey-khaaney se par
log kehtey haiN ki chal ke chaal woh gehree gayaa...
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
5th November 2011, 08:40 PM
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14
Ghazal: ye ishq agar jo nahiN hai aasaan to aap-beeti meri talab hai...
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1,355
Posted By
shweta
:) what to say.. literally speechless .. every...
:) what to say.. literally speechless .. every line is beautiful...
waisey to saara ka saara hi bahut pasand aaya aur kisi ek sher ki tareef karna mushkil hai magar fir bhi ye ek sher dil ko chhu...
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
5th November 2011, 09:55 AM
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14
ना ज़मीं कोई ना है आसमाँ कोई
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1,601
Posted By
shweta
really.... no words... every line is awesome... ...
really.... no words... every line is awesome...
:) :) :) :)
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
5th November 2011, 09:52 AM
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17
Ghazal : Din MeN Aaiinaa Ek Baar DekhTe HaiN ... !
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2,281
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shweta
"nice" Dhoop Ne Kar Liyaa Chaahe Rukh Jidhar...
"nice"
Dhoop Ne Kar Liyaa Chaahe Rukh Jidhar Bhii
Saayaa Deewaar Kaa Barqaraar DekhTe HaiN
Jabki Maaloom Hai Kuch Hone Waalaa Nahi
Kyo KarKe Muhabbat Be-Kaar DekhTe HaiN ...
liked this...
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
2nd November 2011, 06:36 PM
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26
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
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2,493
Posted By
shweta
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thank you!!!!!!!
:)
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
2nd November 2011, 04:25 PM
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26
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
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2,493
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shweta
thank you :) ...
thank you :)
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Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
2nd November 2011, 02:54 PM
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21
Ghazal : Andar ChaaheN Kuch Bhee HoTaa Hai ... !
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2,670
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shweta
bahut achchi peshkash... Aaj MudDatoN Baad...
bahut achchi peshkash...
Aaj MudDatoN Baad Jab Milaa Woh KahiN
Ussme Baakii Rishtaa Ab Bhii DikhTaa Hai ...
nice thoughts.. :)
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
2nd November 2011, 01:26 PM
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27
dikhaayee na deta, sunaayee na deta
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3,921
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shweta
simply wow... juda mujhse hai to, khafa bhi...
simply wow...
juda mujhse hai to, khafa bhi to hoga
tasavvur meN rehta hai dil jo jalaane
hai ik aaina bhi, mere ghar meN aisa
bulaata hai mujhko mujhi se milaane
:)
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Shayri-e-Dard
2nd November 2011, 12:21 PM
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26
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
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2,493
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shweta
hmmmm what to say on this.... i m really glad...
hmmmm what to say on this.... i m really glad that you told me some mistakes.. looking forward for more dissection :) ... and auro ka to ni maalum zidd sahab but mujhey to kahi se bhi bura ni laga......
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Shayri-e-Dard
2nd November 2011, 11:19 AM
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26
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
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2,493
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shweta
i am glad u liked it... thank u so mauch...
i am glad u liked it... thank u so mauch zainy.... :)
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Shayri-e-Dard
2nd November 2011, 11:17 AM
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26
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
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2,493
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shweta
shukriya shaad sahab... I am glad u liked the...
shukriya shaad sahab... I am glad u liked the poetry.. :)
the word was "huaa' .. its just a typing mistake.. if u read in hindi font it says "huaa tera" ... btw thanks for pointing it.. next time...
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
2nd November 2011, 10:26 AM
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13
hum kaha tak aa gaye
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1,464
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shweta
:) ... nice one .. khamshi se aapne kya kah...
:) ... nice one ..
khamshi se aapne kya kah diya
zidd ke charche har zabaa tak aa gaye ...
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
1st November 2011, 01:34 PM
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26
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
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2,493
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shweta
Thanks a lot Praneeta ji .....and hope zidd sahab...
Thanks a lot Praneeta ji .....and hope zidd sahab accepts to guide you... :) my best wishes is with you ;)
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
1st November 2011, 01:31 PM
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26
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
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2,493
Posted By
shweta
shukriya anjaan sahab....for reading it and...
shukriya anjaan sahab....for reading it and liking it.. :) .. guru k baare me to main kuch ni kah sakti... haan magar mujhey yaqin hain zidd sahab kuch na kuch mashwara jarur denge... bus unhey ye...
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Shayri-e-Dard
1st November 2011, 12:56 PM
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25
*~~KahiN mAiN BhoOL Naa jaAuN....~~*
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1,773
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shweta
KahiN main Bhool Naa JaauN Misaal-E-Shaad aye...
KahiN main Bhool Naa JaauN Misaal-E-Shaad aye Jaana,
Uthaa kar Dhool Kadmon ki FizaaoN MeiN uDaa Dije...
wahhh...nice thoughts.... this line is awesome and the use of word "misaal-e-shaad"...
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
1st November 2011, 12:29 PM
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26
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
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2,493
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shweta
zidd sahab... but ye bhi hai ki agar gud na ho to...
zidd sahab... but ye bhi hai ki agar gud na ho to cheeni ni banti.... :) ...
and please read ghazal and tell me my mistakes... after all u r guru of my guru... to aapkey khayal bahut maayney...
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Shayri-e-Dard
1st November 2011, 11:31 AM
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26
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
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2,493
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shweta
$..ye dil teri hi chaukhat pe...$
Hi All,
M here again.. :) .. with some poetry (but obvious).
Before posting that... I wanna thanks to few people.. hmm and first thanks goes to "Zidd sahab" .. as without him I couldn't have learn...
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Shayri-e-Dard
25th October 2011, 08:40 PM
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$ mainey kitni baar hai socha.. $
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1,081
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shweta
........................ :) Thank You :)...
........................ :) Thank You :) .........................................
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
25th October 2011, 07:37 PM
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11
$ mainey kitni baar hai socha.. $
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1,081
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shweta
Thank You Zainy.... wow.. you can do changes...
Thank You Zainy....
wow.. you can do changes in it.. great... i'll send changes to you...
:) :) :) :)
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
25th October 2011, 07:27 PM
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11
$ mainey kitni baar hai socha.. $
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1,081
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shweta
thanks a ton for your appreciation... :) jus...
thanks a ton for your appreciation... :)
jus wanted to modify .. so that .. hmmmm... so that it can come in meter... there is still places to make it perfect...
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Shayri-e-Dard
25th October 2011, 07:23 PM
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11
$ mainey kitni baar hai socha.. $
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1,081
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shweta
Thanks a lot :) .. i don't want to delete.. jus...
Thanks a lot :) .. i don't want to delete.. jus wanna modify it.. but i think there is no control in the hand of thread owner... so sad..
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Shayri-e-Dard
25th October 2011, 07:01 PM
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11
$ mainey kitni baar hai socha.. $
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1,081
Posted By
shweta
how to delete post here..??? help :(
how to delete post here..??? help :(
Forum:
Shayri-e-Dard
25th October 2011, 05:06 PM
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11
$ mainey kitni baar hai socha.. $
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1,081
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shweta
$ mainey kitni baar hai socha.. $
Hi All.
Well, Introduction of mine... "kuch khaas nahi hai"..so leave it.
This is my first composition in meter which someone had taught me (with lots of scolding coz m a great slacker ;-)).. ...
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