Forum: Shayri-e-Dard
20th May 2003, 10:29 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,384
hi
zakhmi ji ,
zaroor naam yaad rakhenge aapka...
sanjana
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard
20th May 2003, 10:27 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 788
nice
Very good kshitiz ji ,
this one was really good yaar..............
sanajana
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard
20th May 2003, 10:25 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 845
hi
Lachar ji ,
These lines are very nicely written.
gujarish itni si hai, ha ! me apni galti manta hu;
magar jaleem dunia se kaho muje itna na satao
I liked it.
sanjana
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard
20th May 2003, 10:23 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 968
Bahut khoob
Bahut khoob ji,
Ab kya kahe.... padh kar aapke dard ka ehsaas ho gaya...........aisa hi likte rahiye
sanjana
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard
20th May 2003, 10:21 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 1,340
hi
Banjara ji,
Pehle hi sabne itni tarif kar di hai ki mein kya kahu..... anyway very nicely written....
Sanjana
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard
20th May 2003, 10:19 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 954
good
Wah khitiz ji,
Kya likhte hai aap.....bahut dil se likha hai aur ye lines to humein bahut hi pasand aa gay ihai...
itna bharosa tha ki hum mahfil se aa gaye
is aas me ki...
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard
20th May 2003, 10:17 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 747
hi
Aap to bhai gujrati lagte hai,tabhi itni achhi gujrati likhi hai na aapne.....padh kar achha laga
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard
20th May 2003, 10:15 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,251
hi
hello lachar ji,
bahut achha likha hai ji aapne.........bahut khoob ...likhte rahiye..
Sanjana
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