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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th November 2006, 11:53 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,367
Posted By GKS
Chora tha jahan tumne mujhko

Aadab sabhi logon,
is mehfil se maafi ka talabgaar hun , mai bahut dinon se gaayab hi tha ab waapas lauta hun.kuch likhne ki koshish kar raha tha aur tedha-medha jo bhi likh...
Forum: Celebrations 14th November 2006, 11:07 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,775
Posted By GKS
Hey sweet Warda , ...

Hey sweet Warda ,
mujhe yeh to maloom nahi ki tumhe mai yaad hun ya nahi magar tumhaari sweet si woh boys ko stupid kehti poem abhi bhi yaad hai mujhe.
bahut din hue kuch...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th May 2006, 03:43 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 610
Posted By GKS
Ae Kaash

Aadaab sabhi ko,
aaj ek bahut puraana khyaal likh raha hun , ise kisi kaayde ko soch ke nahi likha gaya kyunki us samay mujhe kaaydo ka koi ilm nahi tha .aaj kuch kuch...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 27th May 2006, 09:14 PM
Replies: 82
Views: 6,849
Posted By GKS
Mayank ji, ek doosre ko sun ne...

Mayank ji,
ek doosre ko sun ne mei jo lutf aata hai woh ek doosre ko padhne mei kahan aata hai ,aise na jaane kitne bhaav hote hai jo lafzo ki khaamoshi mei band reh jaate hai jabki...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 27th May 2006, 02:54 AM
Replies: 101
Views: 139,487
Posted By GKS
shukriyaa

Maikash ji,
aapka likha yeh tutorial bahut pehle padha tha aur aaj fir padha .us din to ise itna nahi samajh paaya tha magar aaj ise kaafi had tak jazb kar paaya hun.us din kaise...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th May 2006, 04:11 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,389
Posted By GKS
Smile no probs with the delay

Danny ji ,
i will surely take care of myself and along with that i hope that u are taking care of urself and everybody around u :)

bye for now
GKS
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 26th May 2006, 04:03 PM
Replies: 82
Views: 6,849
Posted By GKS
Mayank ji, sabse pehle aapki...

Mayank ji,
sabse pehle aapki raaye do kauri ki nahi hai , kum se kum mere liye to nahi . mai har din kuch na kuch seekhta hun is mushayre se. aur jo kamii aapne bataai hai mai...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 26th May 2006, 01:19 AM
Replies: 82
Views: 6,849
Posted By GKS
Mayank ji, shukriyaa mere galat...

Mayank ji,
shukriyaa mere galat concept ko theek karne ke liye. kuch baatein mai aapse poochna chahoonga kyunki aapne bahut se logon ko padha hai to aap mujhe bataaiye ke mai kaunse...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 25th May 2006, 01:23 AM
Replies: 82
Views: 6,849
Posted By GKS
Mayank ji, mujhe aapki baaton...

Mayank ji,
mujhe aapki baaton se pataa chala ke mera
"wazan" ka concept galat hai.mai sochta tha ke lines ka equal honaa hi wazan ka equally distribute hona kehlaata hai.ab aap hi...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 24th May 2006, 01:04 AM
Replies: 82
Views: 6,849
Posted By GKS
Mayank ji, aapke salike se...

Mayank ji,
aapke salike se likhe hue sher ka jawaab dene fir ek baar aaya hun, koshish karta hun ke har misra baraabar wazan ka ho par zyaadatar ho nahi paata par fir bhi koshish...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 23rd May 2006, 12:42 AM
Replies: 82
Views: 6,849
Posted By GKS
Re: Re: Re: Re: re

Mayanki ji aadaab,
mujhe saahab na kahe aap, mujh se badhe hai har cheez mein .aaj se pehle bhi maine kabhi aapka yeh sawaal-o jawaab padha tha maine par tab kuch himmat nahi hui...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 03:12 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,930
Posted By GKS
Maikash ji , bass ek hi line...

Maikash ji ,
bass ek hi line kehne ka mann hai is se zyaada mann mai kuch kehne ko nahi hai

mai bahut tanha hun
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 22nd May 2006, 03:08 AM
Replies: 82
Views: 6,849
Posted By GKS
Re: Re: re

is saraab-ae-mohabbat ko paane ke liye dozakh mei bhi jale hai hum
na jaane kab se apne hi ashqon ko dawaa maante aaye hai hum

itna achaa to nahi likh paaya magar naacheez ki ek choti koshish...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 02:52 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,155
Posted By GKS
Vipin ji, aaj bahut dinoo baad aapko...

Vipin ji,
aaj bahut dinoo baad aapko padhna naseb hua aur aapke rachna ki zindagi se kareebi dekh ke aaj fir ek tripti ka ahsaas ho raha hai
magar mere...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 02:27 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,147
Posted By GKS
Simmi ji, aap ko dekhke dhyaan...

Simmi ji,
aap ko dekhke dhyaan aaya jab mai kuch mahine pehle yahan aya tha.aap yahaan nai hai isliye humaare parivaar ki taraf se welcome.
aapke basics...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 02:21 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,938
Posted By GKS
hi bro, mere bachpan ke khoye...

hi bro,
mere bachpan ke khoye khazaane ki yaad dilaane ke liye shukriyaa. bahut si muskurahatein waapas dene ke liye shukriya.
pataa nahi kaise bhool gaya tha mai ke yeh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2006, 02:16 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,365
Posted By GKS
Lightbulb Sweet Warda , aaj woh...

Sweet Warda ,
aaj woh guroor tumhaari rachna mei jhalak raha hai jo har ladki aaine ke saamne khade ho ke apni aankhon mei padti hai, shayd yeh kavita har ladki apne mann mei...
Forum: Celebrations 20th May 2006, 08:43 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 13,113
Posted By GKS
janamdin mubaarak ho

Anil ji,
janam-din mubaraak ho aapko, aapke upar Bhagwaan ki kripa sadaa bani rahe . aap din ba din aur behtar likhte jaaye aur hum yunhi padh ke kuch na kuch seekhte rahe.
sadaa khush...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th May 2006, 03:38 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 6,056
Posted By GKS
Anil ji, kavita chaahe 100vi ho chaahe...

Anil ji,
kavita chaahe 100vi ho chaahe dasvi ,dil ki baat numberon se tay nahi hoti . aapki is kavita ne fir se dil mei ek nayi jagah banaai hai. ek aashik ki nazar se to gum hum ne bahut...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th May 2006, 07:08 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 956
Posted By GKS
Pulkit bhai, galti to dono...

Pulkit bhai,
galti to dono kar rahe hai magar ek ki galti khud ko nuksaan pahuncha rahi hai aur ek ki galti kisi aur ko.
meri kavita ke shaks ke pass yahi do choices thi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th May 2006, 01:52 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 956
Posted By GKS
ek baat jo kehni thi....

Aadaab sabhi logon ko ,
kuch samay pehle ek rachna maine yahan likhi thi jiska shirshak tha "aaj khanzar se apna dil hum cheerne aaye hai "
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th May 2006, 12:37 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,513
Posted By GKS
Farhana ji, mai theek hun aur...

Farhana ji,
mai theek hun aur aasha karta hun ke aapke yahan par sab kuch theek hoga.khushi hui jaankar ke aapko mera likha sab kuch pasand aata hai.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd May 2006, 02:27 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,513
Posted By GKS
Manu ji, jab bhi koi naya...

Manu ji,
jab bhi koi naya vyakti meri is shayri ki zameen per aata hai to bahut achaa lagta hai ,aapka yahan aane ka bahut bahut shukriya,
jab bhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd May 2006, 02:24 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,513
Posted By GKS
Anil ji, aapka aur baaki Gurujano ka...

Anil ji,
aapka aur baaki Gurujano ka saath aur shiksha jab tak saath rahegi tab tak yeh kalam kuch na kuch likhti hi rahegi aur improve karne ki koshish jaari rahegi.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd May 2006, 02:18 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,513
Posted By GKS
Paras ji, aaj aapko yahan dekh ke...

Paras ji,
aaj aapko yahan dekh ke bahut achaa lag raha hai, aapko meri rachna pasand aai aur uski soch us se bhi zyaada pasand aai yeh jaan ke bahut khushi hui.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd May 2006, 01:12 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,817
Posted By GKS
Post hello Paras ji, i had read...

hello Paras ji,
i had read another poem of urs in urdu and in tht i found the passion and touch of magic between two lovers(i dont remember the title if u will give me the link to tht...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd May 2006, 12:13 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,389
Posted By GKS
Hello Danny ji, the way...

Hello Danny ji,
the way u blended a story of thousand words and so many beautiful emotions in simple words was really a pleasure to read.a thought came to me while reading ur...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd May 2006, 12:04 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,513
Posted By GKS
Pulkit , thanks buddy for the...

Pulkit ,
thanks buddy for the words of encouragement. its nice to c u again.ur words though small in number but they mean a lot for me.

bye for now
GKS
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd May 2006, 12:00 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,513
Posted By GKS
Hello Passionate lover, the...

Hello Passionate lover,
the same thing that i said to Rohin applies to u also.thanks a lot for ur words of encouragement.
apart from poetry i was going through ur...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st May 2006, 11:55 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,513
Posted By GKS
Rohin ji, aapko pehli baar dekh...

Rohin ji,
aapko pehli baar dekh rahaa hun is zameen pe .bahut achaa lagta hai jab koi naya mujhe padhne aata hai aur woh pasand karta hai mera likha . aisaa lagne lagta hai ke ab mai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st May 2006, 11:47 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,513
Posted By GKS
Warda ji, aapka WOW padhke to mai...

Warda ji,
aapka WOW padhke to mai bhi WOW keh utha , aapko pasand aai jaan ke khushi hui aur tariff se bhare shabdo ke liye shukriyaa.

bye for now
GKS
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th April 2006, 09:44 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,513
Posted By GKS
Ek Tabaayaf ki kahaani

aadaab sabhi logon ko,
aaj kuch bilkul alag likh raha hun jiska khyaal to bahut pehle aaya tha magar muqammal aaj hui.agar kisi ko kuch galat lage to zaroor...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th April 2006, 02:16 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,915
Posted By GKS
Anil ji, ek lekhak ki soch ki udaan na...

Anil ji,
ek lekhak ki soch ki udaan na jaane kahan se kahan tak udti hai ,aapki kavita ko padhke pataa chalaa.kuch lines aapko padh ke soojhi ,isiliye yahan pesh kar raha hoon.

woh ek...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd April 2006, 05:16 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,001
Posted By GKS
Anil ji, aapne is rachna ko wakt...

Anil ji,
aapne is rachna ko wakt diyaa iske liye bahut bahut shukriyaa.mai aur meri shayri ek doosre ka khyaal rakhte rahenge.aakhir dono hi tanha hai abhi.

aap bhi apna khyaal...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd April 2006, 03:51 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 903
Posted By GKS
Shradhaa dd, sabse pehle...

Shradhaa dd,
sabse pehle to surma Bhopali ki jay aur fir aapko pranaam , aapka likha har ek post bahut keemati hai. ise dil ke kareeb rakhte hue shukriyaa likhta hun aaj.

GKS
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd April 2006, 03:49 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 903
Posted By GKS
Ranjana ji, aapka saath yunhi...

Ranjana ji,
aapka saath yunhi milta rahega to kaafilaa yunhi aage badhta rahega .aapko pasand aayi yeh rachnaa aur aapne iske liye kuch shabd bhi diye mujhe aapka tah e dil se...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd April 2006, 03:46 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 903
Posted By GKS
Warda ji, aapko yeh likha pasand...

Warda ji,
aapko yeh likha pasand aaya aur inhe aapne ten kamaal ke lafzon se nawaaza ,bahut bahut shukriyaa
apna khyaal rakhiyega

GKS
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2006, 02:42 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 903
Posted By GKS
aaj khanzar se apna dil hum........

Aadaab sabhi doston ko,
aaj ek jalta hua jawaab likh rahaa hun , bahut dinon se dil mein chupaa thaa aaj zubaan tak aaya hai .

wo poochte hai
" kya aap...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th April 2006, 05:45 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,225
Posted By GKS
Mukhra ji, aapke un khumaar se...

Mukhra ji,
aapke un khumaar se bhare palon ko mehsoos karte hue padha aapke ahsaason ko,betaabi se kisi ka intzaar karte hue shabd bahut ache lage.
yunhi likhte...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th April 2006, 02:41 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,001
Posted By GKS
Thaks Ranjana ji, aapko...

Thaks Ranjana ji,
aapko itni pasand aai aur uske baad aapne dil khol ke waah waahi ki aur mere liye wakt nikaala aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa.

sadaa khush rahiye

GKS
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