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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st April 2003, 02:14 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,325
Posted By tanhadil
aadaab

maikash sahaab ... ek baar fir aapki ghazal humen bahot hi pasand aaye .....

kaise banauuN us jagah khwaboN ka aashiyaaN
har samt fareboN ki jahaaN par hawaa chale

usne hamaari khwaahisheN...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th April 2003, 04:44 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 619
Posted By tanhadil
bahot khoob

Rutu jee ....

Khuda jane hamara sath kitna hai lekin, tumhara aaj mai hoon,
Isi "aaj" ke liye, shayad pechaan rakhi hoti mere armaano se.

Aksar raah dhoondhte rishte banate hai hum lekin,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th April 2003, 10:55 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 699
Posted By tanhadil
bahot hi khoob

ishika jee ....

Aaj Jo Ansoo Beh Gaye
Unko Jhoote Sapne Dikhate Gaye
Dil Mei Dard Ki AaG Laagi
Usse HalkE Saroor Se Mitta'te Gaye

ehsaas aur aas ki jo jhalak is shayri mai hai .... humen...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th April 2003, 10:33 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 588
Posted By tanhadil
nagma likhte likhte

nagmai likhte likhte ek kahani ban gayee tu
lamha chunte chunte ek zindagi ban gayee tu

chalte chalte ek parchaai ban gayee tu
bond bond paani si ek sagar ban gayee tu

aaj fir pukar le...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th April 2003, 11:58 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 733
Posted By tanhadil
Salam rutujee

Rutu jee ..bahot khoob ....

anjaan nahi hun mai tere ghum ae dasataan se .....
majboor hun mai mere halae jazbaat se .....

tuje apni bahoon mai lekar tere dard ko apna bana lun ......
tu...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2003, 07:25 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 397
Posted By tanhadil
aadaab dil ka rishta ... sorry i dont know your...

aadaab dil ka rishta ... sorry i dont know your name

aapki shayri parhkar humen sarfarosh ki kuch lines yaad aa gayeee ......

"HOSHWALOON KO KHABAR KYA BEKHUDI KYA CHEEZ HAI
ISHQ KIJIYE FIR...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2003, 07:46 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,011
Posted By tanhadil
hi

ishika jee ....

dard ...toota ...tanha....bekasur dil ...aur..... aansooo .........


kyu pyaar karne waale humeshaa yehi paate hai?

"tum aapne ishq ki khasti le'kar kehin dhoor chale jaana...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th November 2002, 08:06 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 709
Posted By tanhadil
adaab

pinky jee .... yeh acchi baat hai ki aapne yahaan song post kiya ... bahot saare shaqs honge jinhone shayad yeh songs sune nahi honge .....

"socha nahi tha taqdeer yaha layegi,
manzil pe aate hi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th November 2002, 12:40 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 393
Posted By tanhadil
dard bhi

aadaab doston ... just writting in a minute ..... suggestions appreciated


dard bhi nahi raha aaaj
ki ek jaam hi pile de saaqi

reh jaaunga warna pyaasa mai
ki tezaab bhi pilaa de saaqi
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th November 2002, 12:35 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,069
Posted By tanhadil
adaab

vipinsahab ... khaaksaar ka salam kubul kijeyega ...

muaafi chahta hun ki aapke kalaam ko parhne mai kuch der kar di .. khair ... aaj hi sahi ... bahot hi umda likhte hai aap ...

likhte...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th November 2002, 12:24 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 494
Posted By tanhadil
vipinsahab

aadaab ....

shukriya ki aapko humaari likhi lines pasand aayeee...

hum koshish karenge ki aur accha likhen ...

khafiz
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th November 2002, 12:23 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 494
Posted By tanhadil
valekum salam

hosla afzaayee ke liye shukriya ... rutujee

hum koshish karenge ki aur gehra likh paaye

khafiz :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th November 2002, 10:17 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 494
Posted By tanhadil
aadaab neha

shukriyaa hosla afzaayee ke liya ......

humaaara dil agar humaare paas hota to shayad jaan paate ke kaisa hai ....
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th November 2002, 10:14 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 542
Posted By tanhadil
nice one

aadaab neha ... bahot hi badhiyaa likha hai aapne ....

jaise roomana jee ne kahan ....do pal mai likha hai lekin humeshaa ke ehsaas ko pirooya ho aisa lagta hai

keep it up....

khafiz...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st November 2002, 01:29 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 494
Posted By tanhadil
registaaN

bahot dinooN ke baad kuch aise hi likhaaa hai .... khaaksaar comments ka muntazir

registaaN ke phoool mai jaise khusbooo ki aahaat hai

tere laut aane pe woh hi ehsaas hai .....

mujh ko na...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th August 2002, 11:37 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 435
Posted By tanhadil
all three are best

adaaab rutu jeee ...

bahot hi umda likha hai.....jitna baar parha accha laga and dard ko to mai bahot hi acche se samaj leta huN...

jaane kyu aaaj aaisa lagta hai ki shayad yeh dharm...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th August 2002, 01:34 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 999
Posted By tanhadil
Indipendance Day

aadaab doston .... hum aaj kal bahot busy rehtai hai ... kisiki sharyies pe comment bhi nahi karte ... muaaf kijiyega ... kal independance day hai to socha ki kuch post kar den ....

"Long years...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd August 2002, 12:50 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 543
Posted By tanhadil
Love Happy Freindship Day

aadaab ...

shayri.com ke members ko taNhaDIL ki taraf se

......HAPPY FREINDSHIP DAY ......

humari duaeen aap sab ke saath hai aur humesha rahegi...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th July 2002, 10:58 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,613
Posted By tanhadil
bahot accha likha hai aapne

maikash jee , bahot dino ke baad aaj humne "aapki shayri" parhi...muaaf kijiyega

dil ke dard ko ek ehsaas hua aaj firse usi ki yaad aayi hai aaaj

likhte rahiyega....

k'hafiz
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2002, 10:46 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 358
Posted By tanhadil
upar waale pe vishwaas kar

rutuji , jo hoga accha hi hoga....

hazaarooN khawaishe aisi ki har khawaish pe dum nikle
bahot nikle mere aarmaaN lekin fir bhi kam nikle......

kuch faisle aise hote hai ki hum shayad kar hi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th June 2002, 05:52 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 636
Posted By tanhadil
Tabassum hai aaj

Tabassum hai aaj tere lab par khili hui

kar le tu bhulne bhoolane ki baat

nazm ban jaayegi koi adhoori si

kar le tu aaj har dil ki baat


k'hafiz.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th June 2002, 05:48 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 570
Posted By tanhadil
jee haaN

Rutu ji , is baar ki baarish hi kuch aisi hai......

bahot hi shukriya zarranawaazi ka aur

humari dastaaN sunne ka

k'hafiz
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th June 2002, 04:14 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 570
Posted By tanhadil
ji haaN

neha ..... pehle baarish ka maza hi haseeN hota hai.....

kuch dafnaaI gai yaadooN ko firse nayi zindagi mil jaati hai......

hum to humesha khush rehne ki koshish karte hai aur dua karteN hai ki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th June 2002, 05:02 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 570
Posted By tanhadil
boond

a short nazm again in baarish....:)


har boond meri baat tujse aakar kahegi
har raaz ka khul ke jawaab degi
tere chehre ko chum kar hole se nikal jaayegi
zindagi bhar tu use bhula nahi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th June 2002, 04:47 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 452
Posted By tanhadil
aadaab

sundeep ji , houslaafzaai ke liye shukriya....:)

k'hafiz.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th June 2002, 09:45 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 452
Posted By tanhadil
baarish

aadaab....bahot dino ke baad aaaj pehli baarish mai kuch likhne ko man kiya hai.....baarish ki thand hawaaoN ne dil ke jazbaatoN ko jhanjood ke rakh diya hai....

kuch is tarah likha hai humne........
Forum: Aapki Shayri 24th June 2002, 02:45 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,846
Posted By tanhadil
waah

maikash sahab...bahot khooob.....

humne bahot der se parhi aapke is ghazal ko .... lekin bahot hi pasand aayi.....

likhte rahiyega......

k'hafiz
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st June 2002, 05:30 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 469
Posted By tanhadil
hi

neha bahot hi accha likha hai

kyu koi uske liye humesha tarapta hai jo bewaafa hote hai....

aur jo wafa kareN use har dam dard hi naseeb hota hai...

shayad isi ko zindagi kehte hai....
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th June 2002, 11:33 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 383
Posted By tanhadil
hi

aee masoom dil
itna tanha na ban
tu akela nahi is jahaaN mai
ek tanha bhi hai tere aashiyaane mai

mai jaanta huN tu bahot pareshaaN hai
rehmaaN ka dard kam hua nahi ki ab ek aur dard aaya hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th June 2002, 11:37 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 899
Posted By tanhadil
waah

Rutu jee...kya baat hai....bahot hi khoobsurat likha aapne....

dua karte hai ki aapke har armaan har khawaish jald hi allah kubool kar leN.....inshallah aapko kabhi dard mehsoos tak na ho...:)

...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th June 2002, 04:44 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 774
Posted By tanhadil
khoob

waah maikashjii....

bahot shukriya aapka ki aapne itni haseen ghazal humse share ki......bahot hi acchi lines hai jo mai fir dohrana chahunga....

jaane kisi lagan, kiski dhun meiN magan
jaa...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th June 2002, 12:24 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 6,345
Posted By tanhadil
waah

Rutu...bahot hi accha likha hai.....

inshallah tuje har khushi mile....
meri dua tere saath hai....

k'hafiz.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2002, 11:54 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 427
Posted By tanhadil
waah rutuji

bahot kashish hai.....

ranjishon ke darmiyaan dil ki baation ko gehrai se karna aapko behter aata hai....

bahot hi accha aur umda likha hai aaapne......

dil karta hai aapke paas aake baith...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th May 2002, 11:52 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,856
Posted By tanhadil
hi chintu

i m happy that u like it......

hum koshish karenge ki aur accha likh paaye....

k'hafiz.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd May 2002, 12:47 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 523
Posted By tanhadil
hi

Rutuji...

" Aarzoo nahi rahi jine ki,
Dil karta hai dua.

Rahe tu Sanam kahin bhi,
Salamat rakhe tujhe mera khuda. "

"Lekin itna malum ho tujhe ki,
Ye dil tujhe kabhi maaf nahi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd May 2002, 10:49 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 364
Posted By tanhadil
shukriya

rutuji...aapne khoob samja

humeN maloom tha ki aap humeN is kalaam pe zaroor reply karenge. aur aapne jo dard ki aur tanhayee ki gehrai ko samja hai uskeliye hum shukriya kehna chahte hai.

ek...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th April 2002, 02:44 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 364
Posted By tanhadil
ruk ruk ke

aadaab,

kuch likh raheN hai.....apni raay se nawaziyega.

ruk ruk ke jab mai chalta huN
teri duniya ko mai jab dekhta huN

har pal har raaz ka jab mai malal karta huN
yuhi tadab tadab kar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th April 2002, 03:13 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 714
Posted By tanhadil
Rutu don't be sorry

aapke "sorry" se humein apni nazrooN se mat giraoo.....


hum to tanhayioon ki rahoon mai aksar bhatka karte hai....
khush kismati hai humari ki aap jaisa "dost" humein mila hai

Rutu i m very...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2002, 12:17 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 714
Posted By tanhadil
rutuji

aapne jo mere liye likha hai....uskeliye shukriya.

"Chor de tu yoon shiqayat karna,
Sirf mere majboor-e-halat ko samajh ke dekh. "

hum bhi kuch aapse kehna chahenge....

Chor denge hum yoon...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2002, 10:56 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 714
Posted By tanhadil
aadaab maikashji

rutuji ke jazbah se hum ziyaadah mujrooh hue isliye humne humseshe koshish ki ke woh khush rahe.

"Lekin" shayad humara nazariya galat tha.

humesha se unke khalish kalaam padh ke humne "dard" ko...
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