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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th September 2013, 07:03 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,743
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
baRe roshan khayaal hain bohat khoob ghazal...

baRe roshan khayaal hain

bohat khoob ghazal kahi hai .. wah .:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th September 2013, 06:59 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 629
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bohat sunder aehsaas hain khoobsurat...

bohat sunder aehsaas hain

khoobsurat peshkash . :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th September 2013, 11:16 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,096
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
अपने ही दिल की बंदिशों में बंधा हूँ मैं तेरे...

अपने ही दिल की बंदिशों में बंधा हूँ मैं
तेरे नाम की कश्ती से पार उतर जाऊंगा

bohat khoob

kya aehsaas piroye hain

zabardast

waaaaaaaaaaaaah. :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th September 2013, 11:12 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,093
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
ChhoD kar jaa chukii hai parchaai, saaya ban...

ChhoD kar jaa chukii hai parchaai,
saaya ban kar chalaa kare koi.

bohat sunder

baRe khoobsurat ashaar likhe hain

behtreeeeeeeen ghazal

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th September 2013, 11:08 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,017
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bohat khoob ashaar bohat aalaa ghazal ...

bohat khoob ashaar

bohat aalaa ghazal

waaaaaaaaaah.:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 28th August 2013, 08:37 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 10,691
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
wah .. excellent...

wah .. excellent .......................................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th August 2013, 08:32 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 4,973
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
kya naazukii aehsaas pesh kiye hain bahot...

kya naazukii aehsaas pesh kiye hain

bahot sunder ................................................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th August 2013, 08:26 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,481
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
wah zabardast behtreeeeeeen kalaam...

wah zabardast

behtreeeeeeen kalaam .................................................. :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th August 2013, 08:23 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,308
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
kya khoobsurat sher pesh kiye hain ...

kya khoobsurat sher pesh kiye hain

shaandaar ghazal .. wah .......................................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th August 2013, 08:21 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,034
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bahot bahot umda .............................. :)

bahot bahot umda .............................. :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th August 2013, 05:32 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 2,873
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
thnx a lot...

thnx a lot ........................................ :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th August 2013, 05:28 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,268
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bahot khoob ji har ek sher laajawaab hai ...

bahot khoob ji

har ek sher laajawaab hai

very nice .................................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th August 2013, 05:26 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,626
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bahot sundar neetu ji very well...

bahot sundar neetu ji

very well .................................. :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th July 2013, 11:49 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 7,190
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
कौन जाने कहाँ जाना है मरने के बाद 'इश्क' के...

कौन जाने कहाँ जाना है मरने के बाद
'इश्क' के हाथों में उसका मुकाम लिखा है

saccha sher ... wah

bohat khoob ghazal ........................ :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th July 2013, 07:11 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,753
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
prem ras ka khoobsurat chitran bohat sundar...

prem ras ka khoobsurat chitran

bohat sundar ................................ :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th July 2013, 12:46 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 6,390
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
विरह की आग में जलते हुए एक नज़ारा देखा, हर कण...

विरह की आग में जलते हुए एक नज़ारा देखा,
हर कण में उसी के अक्स का चमकता सितारा देखा

खुली आँखों से देखी रूप बदलती ये दुनिया
हर गुज़रे अंजाम के पीछे उसका एक इशारा देखा

wah laajawaab ashaar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th July 2013, 12:45 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 981
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
wah wah umda ashaar ...... bohat khoob...

wah wah umda ashaar ...... bohat khoob ................. :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th July 2013, 12:41 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,546
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
wah bohat khoob...

wah bohat khoob ..................................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th July 2013, 12:40 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,461
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bohat umda ........................ :)

bohat umda ........................ :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th July 2013, 12:38 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,843
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
जान देना जो उसकी फ़ितरत थी जान लेकर निकल गया...

जान देना जो उसकी फ़ितरत थी
जान लेकर निकल गया पानी

कौनसी ज़िद पे अड़ गया आख़िर
बहते-बहते मचल गया पानी

wah bohat sunder .................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th May 2013, 11:12 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,127
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bahot sunder Aaiinaa Dekhogi Dekhna ...

bahot sunder

Aaiinaa Dekhogi Dekhna
Chaand Sii Soorat Hogii ...

HaseeN Jo Ho Iss Qadar
Roz Nayi Qayaamat Hogii ...

very romantic .................................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th May 2013, 11:10 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 3,004
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
wah umda khoobsurat ghazal...

wah umda

khoobsurat ghazal ........................ :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th May 2013, 11:09 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,626
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
wah bahot khoob sunder aehsaas...

wah bahot khoob

sunder aehsaas ............................. :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th May 2013, 11:06 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,242
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bahot daarshnik panktiya behad sacche...

bahot daarshnik panktiya

behad sacche khayaal se paripoorn rachna

badhaayee naresh ji ........................ :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2013, 06:40 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,348
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
Kuch KahTaa Ho Toh MilooN Aise Usse Milkar Kyaa...

Kuch KahTaa Ho Toh MilooN
Aise Usse Milkar Kyaa KarooN ...

NahiN Aaii Baarish Toh Kyaa
MaiN Baadal MeN PaaNii BharooN ...

Jo Aate NahiN Ek Baar Bulaane Se
Kis Muh Se Aur Aawaaz DooN ...
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2013, 06:37 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,308
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
kuch milte milaate reh gaya kuch mit'te mitaate...

kuch milte milaate reh gaya
kuch mit'te mitaate reh gaya

Jiski ummiid thi kam
woh hote hawaate reh gaya

chhupaati raaz koi apna
sab chhupte chhupaate reh gaya

bahot sunder
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2013, 06:35 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,008
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
HooN qafas me ik janam se, na khabar hai Is...

HooN qafas me ik janam se, na khabar hai Is jahaaN ki,
karooN kiski bandagee MaiN, yahaaN kaun ab Khudaa hai.

kya baat hai

bahot aalaa ghazal ........................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2013, 06:32 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 3,001
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
Ye udaasi ye gham,uspe aankheN bhi nam TooTi...

Ye udaasi ye gham,uspe aankheN bhi nam
TooTi bikhri meri zaat ka ShukriyaH!

Yaad jab bhi kiya,khwaab me aa gaye
Moutabar aise lamhaat ka ShukriyaH!

Aaya saawan bhi ab, tum na aaye magar
Aisi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2013, 06:28 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,294
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
wah umda aehsaas sunder kalaam...

wah umda aehsaas

sunder kalaam ......................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2013, 06:27 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 622
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
o gawaah tha mere qatl ka, vo bata chuka huliyaa...

o gawaah tha mere qatl ka, vo bata chuka huliyaa tera,
kiya qatl usne hai, jiske chehre par hijaab-o-naqaab hai...

wah sunder

khoobsurat ghazal ................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2013, 06:25 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 859
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bahot khoobsurat poem wah...

bahot khoobsurat poem

wah ........................ :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2013, 06:24 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,207
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
say Khoobi Kaho Meri Ya Phir Keh Lo Buraayi Tum ...

say Khoobi Kaho Meri Ya Phir Keh Lo Buraayi Tum
Bahaana Dhang Se Mujh ko Banaana Bhi Nahiin Aata

wah bahot khooooooooooob

sunder ghazal .................. :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th March 2013, 08:30 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,598
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
Uss SannaaTe Se Niklaa HooN Jiss Ke Baad...

Uss SannaaTe Se Niklaa HooN
Jiss Ke Baad Andheraa NahiN ...

Hunar Ke Beej Daale Bahut
Ek Bhii PauDhaa Ughaa NahiN ...

bahot sunder .... very well writen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th March 2013, 08:29 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,076
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
good one .......... very well writen

good one .......... very well writen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th March 2013, 08:26 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,778
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
very touching .. very well writen

very touching .. very well writen
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 13th January 2013, 12:52 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,207
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
very nice...

very nice ............................................ :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2013, 12:48 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,885
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
zauq e wisaal e dahashat e furqat nahi rahi. ab...

zauq e wisaal e dahashat e furqat nahi rahi.
ab usko mujhse waisee muhabbat nahi rahi.

bahot sunder
shaandaar ghazal ........................... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2013, 12:33 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,699
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
maa ki mamta ka sunder chitran bachpan men...

maa ki mamta ka sunder chitran
bachpan men waapas le jati panktiya achi lagi .......... :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2013, 12:29 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,388
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
bahot sunder abhivyakti ........... very well...

bahot sunder abhivyakti ........... very well writen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2013, 12:27 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,509
Posted By Manshaa Thaakur
very touching lines...

very touching lines ................................................ :)
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