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Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th July 2015, 10:43 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,063
Posted By jat_in_mood
Sagar Sahab, hausla badhaane ka bahot bahot...

Sagar Sahab, hausla badhaane ka bahot bahot shukriyaa :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th July 2015, 10:41 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,063
Posted By jat_in_mood
Jee aapne ek dam sahi kaha, vaise shayri mujhe...

Jee aapne ek dam sahi kaha, vaise shayri mujhe aati bhi nahi :P
Bas aise kuch ahsaas ek apni sochi hui si rythm me piro lete hain kabhi kabhi...

Hausla badhane ka bahot bahot shukriyaa :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th July 2015, 10:39 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,063
Posted By jat_in_mood
Shukriya Sarika Jee, meri chhoti si koshish ko...

Shukriya Sarika Jee, meri chhoti si koshish ko sarhaane ke liye...
Aajkal roji roti me itne busy ho gaye hain ki is behtareen jagah par aane ke liye bhi taras gaye hain ... Vaise beech beech me...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th March 2014, 07:29 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,431
Posted By jat_in_mood
bahot hi gazab likhte ho bhai.... Aapko padh kar...

bahot hi gazab likhte ho bhai.... Aapko padh kar bahot achha laga...
Keep writing...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th February 2014, 06:48 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,159
Posted By jat_in_mood
Shaad bhai bahot hi badhiya likha hai ... padh...

Shaad bhai bahot hi badhiya likha hai ... padh kar bahot achha lagaa ...
keep writing !!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th August 2013, 02:43 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,798
Posted By jat_in_mood
Bahot achhe !! Aapko padh kar achha laga......

Bahot achhe !!
Aapko padh kar achha laga... Aage bhi likhte rahiye,
keep sharing your thoughts...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th August 2013, 02:57 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,435
Posted By jat_in_mood
wah ji wah !! kya gazab likha hai... padh kar...

wah ji wah !! kya gazab likha hai... padh kar maja aa gaya..
keep writing
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th August 2013, 11:34 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 435
Posted By jat_in_mood
Parshant bhai ... aapne apne ehsaaso ko youn...

Parshant bhai ... aapne apne ehsaaso ko youn ubhara hai aur lafzo me dhala hai uske liye mubarakbaad ... achhe ehsaas hain...
Keep sharing your thoughts...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th August 2013, 11:24 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 733
Posted By jat_in_mood
Arvind jee hausla badhane ka bahot bahot...

Arvind jee hausla badhane ka bahot bahot shukriyaa ...
Aage bhi sath dete rahein... Apna khyal rakhein...

Thanks!!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th August 2013, 11:22 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 733
Posted By jat_in_mood
Taish bhai hausla badhane ka bahot bahot...

Taish bhai hausla badhane ka bahot bahot shukriyaa ... aur jis tarah aapne padha aur diye se relate kiya wo bhi kaafi impressive hai... maine ye expect nahi kiya tha... aisa laga jaise meri chori...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th August 2013, 03:30 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 538
Posted By jat_in_mood
जब हाथ में कुछ नहीं, निशानों को ढूँढना क्या ...

जब हाथ में कुछ नहीं, निशानों को ढूँढना क्या
लकीरों से ही सब कुछ है, तो अरमानो को ढूँढना क्या

मेरी आवाज से, मेरी खामोशी बहुत अच्छी है
बद-जुबानो के शहर में, हद-जुबानो को ढूँढना क्या

वक़्त भी एक...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd August 2013, 01:19 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 3,362
Posted By jat_in_mood
waah !!! padh kar majja aa gaya... bahot hi...

waah !!!
padh kar majja aa gaya... bahot hi achaa laga aru bhai.... ek ek sher sawa sher hai...

Phoolon mein khushboo nahin thi kai din
Chaand mein chandni nahin thi kai din
Kaise bheegta is...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd August 2013, 01:08 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 572
Posted By jat_in_mood
kabil e tareef likha hai aapne... aisi soch ko...

kabil e tareef likha hai aapne...
aisi soch ko bayaan karne ke liye humari taraf se daad qubul farmayein...
keep sharing your thoughts...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2013, 10:02 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 732
Posted By jat_in_mood
waah ji ...bahot hi achha likha hai aapne.. padh...

waah ji ...bahot hi achha likha hai aapne.. padh kar achha laga... humari taraf se daad qubul farmayein...
keep writing...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2013, 12:39 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,595
Posted By jat_in_mood
Neetu jee bahot hi achha likhti hain aap ... ...

Neetu jee bahot hi achha likhti hain aap ...
Achha laga aapko padh kar ...
Keep sharing your writings ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2013, 11:49 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 733
Posted By jat_in_mood
Thanks Neetu jee for appreciation...

Thanks Neetu jee for appreciation...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2013, 11:02 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 733
Posted By jat_in_mood
Bahot bahot shukriya Shaad bhai ki aapne time...

Bahot bahot shukriya Shaad bhai ki aapne time nikala humko padhne ke liye... aur is chhoti si koshish ko saraha aapne ...
Aur rahi baat humse seekhne ki, aapko to maalum hai ... hum khudh nausikhiye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2013, 08:21 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,711
Posted By jat_in_mood
Bahot hi khoobsoorat likha hai bhai ... Keep...

Bahot hi khoobsoorat likha hai bhai ...
Keep writing...
Raadhe Raadhe ... Raadhe Raadhe ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2013, 08:17 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,051
Posted By jat_in_mood
Kal talak aaNsu nageene the mere, Aaj apna...

Kal talak aaNsu nageene the mere,
Aaj apna khoon paani ho gaya...

bhoolta rehta jise tha raat din,
yaad mujhko vo zubaani ho gaya...

vo hari saari pehan kar aayi hai,
rang mehfil ka bhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2013, 04:29 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 6,220
Posted By jat_in_mood
Bahot hi sundartaa se badi achhi baat likhi hai...

Bahot hi sundartaa se badi achhi baat likhi hai aapne ...
bahot achha laga aapko padh kar ...
keep writing...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2013, 03:40 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 733
Posted By jat_in_mood
Love ~* Teri yaad ka ek Deep *~

Sabhi dosto ko salaam ... Namaskaar !!
Aaj bahot dino ke baad aap logo ke sath kuch share karna chah raha hoon ...
Kaafi dino ke baad kuch likhne ki ichha hui, kuch khayalat dil me aaye, to kuch...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2013, 03:29 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,233
Posted By jat_in_mood
Bahot hi gahri baat likhi hai sahab aapne ... ...

Bahot hi gahri baat likhi hai sahab aapne ...
Achha laga aapko padh kar ...
younhi likhte rahiyega ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2013, 01:26 PM
Replies: 2,440
Views: 163,812
Posted By jat_in_mood
Laazmi hai mere mann me tera naam Rabb ka...

Laazmi hai mere mann me tera naam
Rabb ka bhale hi bhool jaata hoon
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th July 2013, 03:56 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,428
Posted By jat_in_mood
Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su, Go...

Kiye jaate they wo badnaam mujh ko har su,
Go chup to thaa, magar main Be-Khabar nahi tha.

vaise to saare hi sher bahot achhe hain sahab ... par mujhe ye kuch khaas pasand aaya ...
achha laga...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th July 2013, 03:43 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 7,088
Posted By jat_in_mood
तेरे अक्स को शब्दों में न बांध सका कोई लिखने...

तेरे अक्स को शब्दों में न बांध सका कोई
लिखने वाले ने बस तुझे सलाम लिखा है

कौन जाने कहाँ जाना है मरने के बाद
'इश्क' के हाथों में उसका मुकाम लिखा है

waah sahab kya kahne aapke ... bahot achha...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th July 2013, 03:41 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,269
Posted By jat_in_mood
Bahot dino baad idhar se gujraa to aapko padha......

Bahot dino baad idhar se gujraa to aapko padha... Reply kiye bina raha nahi gaya ... waah ... kya khoob likha hai aapne ... padh kar bahot achha laga ...

Aise hi likhte rahiye janaab !!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th November 2012, 04:58 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,846
Posted By jat_in_mood
Sach se hai door talak jinka koi vaastaa nahiN, ...

Sach se hai door talak jinka koi vaastaa nahiN,
PalkoN pe aise bhi chand khwaab rakhte haiN.

Har cheez ahchi ho jaye to log shaq se dekhte haiN,
So hum bhi ab aadateN kuch kharaab rakhte haiN.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th November 2012, 04:45 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,931
Posted By jat_in_mood
bahot hi sanjeeda likhe hai aapne ... padh kar...

bahot hi sanjeeda likhe hai aapne ... padh kar achha laga ...
Keep it up !!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th August 2012, 10:35 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 463
Posted By jat_in_mood
Phir bhi kush hai hum unhe dekh kar, aaj bhi...

Phir bhi kush hai hum unhe dekh kar,
aaj bhi jab dekh hume wo hai muskurate !!

Rohit bhai !!
Nice thoughts ....
Keep writing ... All the best :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th June 2012, 05:59 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 571
Posted By jat_in_mood
Omi bhai bahot hi achha likha hai ... Aise hi...

Omi bhai bahot hi achha likha hai ...
Aise hi likhte rahiye !!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd June 2012, 07:41 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,588
Posted By jat_in_mood
Nice !! I liked the way you expressed your...

Nice !!

I liked the way you expressed your feelings !! :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th January 2012, 12:37 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,113
Posted By jat_in_mood
Praneeta jee hausla badhane ka bahot bahot...

Praneeta jee hausla badhane ka bahot bahot shukriyaa !!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st January 2012, 02:28 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 734
Posted By jat_in_mood
Ye aaNsoo aaNkh ka merii bahut kamzor hai nikla ...

Ye aaNsoo aaNkh ka merii bahut kamzor hai nikla
Jo andar hai wahi mera jo bahar aaya tera hai

PareshaaN haiN bahut se log bus tum hi na sun paaye
Sadaa aawaaz karta hai ye TooTa dil jo mera hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 30th December 2011, 12:50 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 884
Posted By jat_in_mood
Shakil bhai ... mai kis kis sher ki taareef karu...

Shakil bhai ... mai kis kis sher ki taareef karu ... sabhi ek se badhkar ek ....
Dil se daad haazir hai sahab ... qubool farmaayein !!
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 26th December 2011, 06:59 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,064
Posted By jat_in_mood
Shaad bhai bahot achhe ... Sunaa hai wo Aaye...

Shaad bhai bahot achhe ...

Sunaa hai wo Aaye hain wapaas shahar ko,
SitaaroN se Ghar Hum Sajaane lage hain.

Wo khat me to Poochaa kareN haal Dil ka,
Mile hain to AankheN Churaane lage hain.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th December 2011, 11:39 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,063
Posted By jat_in_mood
Shakil bhai salaam !! Aapko humara likha pasand...

Shakil bhai salaam !! Aapko humara likha pasand aaya, aur aapne humare liye waqt nikala... badi meharbaani aapki ...
Bahot bahot shukriyaa bhaijaan !!
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th December 2011, 11:37 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,063
Posted By jat_in_mood
Ishk jee Radhe Radhe ... Radhe Radhe !! Thanks...

Ishk jee Radhe Radhe ... Radhe Radhe !!
Thanks for your appreciations :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th December 2011, 11:33 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,063
Posted By jat_in_mood
bas jee aapki jarra nawazi hai ... hausla...

bas jee aapki jarra nawazi hai ... hausla badhaane ka bahot bahot shukriyaa !!
Aate rahein !!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd December 2011, 10:51 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,044
Posted By jat_in_mood
ohho anjaan bhai !! ye kya gazzab likha daala...

ohho anjaan bhai !! ye kya gazzab likha daala aapne ... bas katl-e-aam ho gayaa ... mai rok nahi paya apne aapko is umdaa gazal ke liye aapko mubarakbaad dene se ... aap younhi likhte rahein ... ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 23rd December 2011, 12:30 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,063
Posted By jat_in_mood
Manshaa jee hausla badhaane ka bahot bahot...

Manshaa jee hausla badhaane ka bahot bahot shukriyaa ...

Younhi saath dete rahiyega ... !!
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