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Forum: Aapki Shayri 6th January 2014, 02:56 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,168
Posted By Vazeer Razavi
Adil Sahab i don't wana discourage but personally...

Adil Sahab i don't wana discourage but personally don't liked it much it can be lot better, and ur same Qafiya in all.
though keep up the good work.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 6th January 2014, 02:46 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,301
Posted By Vazeer Razavi
Acha meaningful ashar hai, Bas khuch lines...

Acha meaningful ashar hai,
Bas khuch lines shayri ke lehaaz se bari choti hu rahi hai, aur lafzo.n ki izafat hai jaise is line mein " falak, na chand, na tare, na shohrat, nahin daulat"
Forum: Aapki Shayri 6th January 2014, 02:37 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 937
Posted By Vazeer Razavi
Lines are Ok Hamza, But remember always using...

Lines are Ok Hamza,
But remember always using same Qafiya (rhyming words) is never taken a good shayari in urdu literature . Just a suggestion
Forum: Aapki Shayri 22nd November 2013, 12:58 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,217
Posted By Vazeer Razavi
Bohat Unda Ashaar hai Adeel Sahab. Bas ek...

Bohat Unda Ashaar hai Adeel Sahab.

Bas ek guzarish hai, is line mein sakta huraha hai "Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko"

Ager "shikast dil" ke aywaz "shikasta dil" woh to sher...
Forum: Urdu Dictionary 22nd November 2013, 12:29 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 10,917
Posted By Vazeer Razavi
Adab Puneet, Its not tabsire, its 3 words...

Adab Puneet,

Its not tabsire, its 3 words "Tafsir-e-farma"
Tafsir means to explain (Tafsir is Arabic word, Farma is Farsi)
Tasfir-e-farma means one who explains.

Tabeer means result
Its...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd November 2013, 12:15 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 4,206
Posted By Vazeer Razavi
sukanya Sahiba, This Ghazal is by very...

sukanya Sahiba,

This Ghazal is by very famous poet Ahmed Faraz
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