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Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 7th November 2013, 06:00 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,626
Posted By swaraa
Rajinderseep Ji, Bahut bahut...

Rajinderseep Ji,

Bahut bahut dhanywad aapke sarahna bhare shabdo ke liye. Jo aapne kaha kavita ke samapt hone ke liye vo ek tarah se theek hai lekin ye sirf glimpses hain uss...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 18th October 2013, 12:00 PM
Replies: 2
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Views: 997
Posted By swaraa
Shaad Ji, Thank you so much for...

Shaad Ji,

Thank you so much for liking this poem :):)
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 12th October 2013, 12:39 AM
Replies: 2
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Views: 997
Posted By swaraa
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DEAR FRIENDS ,

Ek baar phir aapse apni ek rachna share kar rahi hoon. Please bataiyega ki apko kaisi lagi. Mujhe bahut khushi hogi.

आज फिर
तुम
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th October 2013, 12:09 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 684
Posted By swaraa
Shaad Ji , wah wah wah !!!!!...

Shaad Ji ,

wah wah wah !!!!! lovely !!!!! bahut sunder ehsaas . mann choo lia iss ghazal ne . likhte rahen. god bless you :):)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th October 2013, 07:31 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 733
Posted By swaraa
shaad ji, wah wah wah!!!!!!...

shaad ji,

wah wah wah!!!!!! Bahut sunder !!!!!!!! Mann ke bahut kareeb lagi aapki ye rachna . Bahut sunder feelings hain aur bahut sunder shabd bhi . Thanks for sharing :)
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th September 2013, 10:03 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 838
Posted By swaraa
LOVELY !!!! LOVELY!!!! LOVELY !!!! Thanks for...

LOVELY !!!! LOVELY!!!! LOVELY !!!!
Thanks for sharing :)
Forum: General Stories 27th September 2013, 05:01 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 20,001
Posted By swaraa
Shaad Ji, Sabse pahle to apka...

Shaad Ji,

Sabse pahle to apka shukriya mujhse ye kahaani share karne ke liye . Apme ye hunar bhi hai ye jaan kar bahut khushi hui. Kahaaniya aur upanyas padhna mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai....
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th September 2013, 04:39 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 610
Posted By swaraa
Pursho Ji, AWESOME!!!!!!! LOVED IT...

Pursho Ji,

AWESOME!!!!!!! LOVED IT :) THANKS FOR SHARING .
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th September 2013, 09:54 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 546
Posted By swaraa
SHAAD JI, WAH WAH !!!!!...

SHAAD JI,

WAH WAH !!!!! KYA BAAT HAI !!!!! bahut pasand aayi aapki ye creation . thanks for sharing :) :) :)
Forum: Aapki Shayri 23rd September 2013, 08:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 619
Posted By swaraa
PURSHO JI, Bahut khoob. mann choo...

PURSHO JI,

Bahut khoob. mann choo liya iss baat ne. rachna aapki hai lekin laga kisi apne ne mujhse kaha ho ye . Shayad hum insaano ki bhavnaon ki saanjh ka asar hai ye. likhte rahen aur...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd September 2013, 06:23 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,104
Posted By swaraa
ZARRAA JI, I am...

ZARRAA JI,

I am speechless..........just crying..........
Forum: Ghazal Section 12th September 2013, 12:37 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,428
Posted By swaraa
Sajid Ji, Wah Wah Wah!!!!! aapka ye...

Sajid Ji,
Wah Wah Wah!!!!! aapka ye khayal mujhe bahut achcha laga . Hindi aur urdu ki yaari .........bahut khoob.
Thanks for writing and sharing:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th September 2013, 12:24 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,084
Posted By swaraa
Shaad JI , Bahut sunder hai aapki...

Shaad JI ,

Bahut sunder hai aapki rachna. Jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai. Likhte rahiye aur share karte rahiye. God bless.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th September 2013, 12:19 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 745
Posted By swaraa
Shivpriya Ji , Apki baat achchi...

Shivpriya Ji ,
Apki baat achchi lagi.........bahut sachchi si baat hai ye . Likhti rahen , share karti rahen.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th September 2013, 12:49 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 963
Posted By swaraa
Zarraa Ji , Laajawaab hai aapka ye...

Zarraa Ji ,

Laajawaab hai aapka ye kalaam . Ek ek sher jaise ek ek nageena ho. Bahut sunder. Thanks for sharing. Bahut achcha laga aapko padhkar:):)
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 9th September 2013, 12:16 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,626
Posted By swaraa
Prem ji , Bahut bahut dhanyvad ....

Prem ji ,
Bahut bahut dhanyvad . aapko kavita pasand aayi .......achcha laga . aate rahen.:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th September 2013, 12:15 PM
Replies: 2,443
Views: 172,047
Posted By swaraa
Shaad ji ke sher se inspired ek gustakhi meri bhi...

Shaad ji ke sher se inspired ek gustakhi meri bhi . kuch galat ho to maafi ki request hai .

आबाद भी तुमसे हैं तबाही में भी तुम हो
तुम ही नज़र आते हो देखता हूँ जिधर भी .
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd September 2013, 02:42 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 699
Posted By swaraa
Khamosh samander / shant lahren. Nikala...

Khamosh samander / shant lahren.

Nikala hai ye dil aaj phir teri hi talash me .

Bahut sunder . Any loving heart can relate to these lines . Thanks for sharing:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th August 2013, 12:24 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 2,035
Posted By swaraa
Aru Ji, Bahut khoob. Bahut achchi lagi...

Aru Ji,
Bahut khoob. Bahut achchi lagi aapki ye rachna. Isi tarah likhte aur share karte rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th August 2013, 09:44 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,072
Posted By swaraa
Shaad Ji , Bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas hain...

Shaad Ji ,
Bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas hain ye. Thanks for sharing:):)
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 24th August 2013, 07:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,626
Posted By swaraa
Shaad Ji , Bahut bahut...

Shaad Ji ,

Bahut bahut shukriya kavita ko padhne aur mera hausala badhane ke liye . Aap log padhte aur sarahte hain to prerna bani rahti hai behtar likhne ki.:):)
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 21st August 2013, 07:26 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,626
Posted By swaraa
मुक्ति

Hello Friends ,

Kuch aur hai jo mann se kagajon pe utar aaya hai . Baant rahi hoon aapke saath. Kaisa laga batayen jaroor . Thank you.

...
Forum: Ghazal Section 20th August 2013, 07:12 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,296
Posted By swaraa
Bhanwar Ji, Bahut khoob . Kya baat...

Bhanwar Ji,

Bahut khoob . Kya baat hai !!!!! poori ghazal lajawab .:):)
Thanks for sharing.:)
Forum: Ghazal Section 17th August 2013, 09:25 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 730
Posted By swaraa
Bahut sunder !!!! Thanks for sharing:)

Bahut sunder !!!! Thanks for sharing:)
Forum: Ghazal Section 17th August 2013, 09:10 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,659
Posted By swaraa
Shaad Ji , Bahut achchi ghazal likhi...

Shaad Ji ,


Bahut achchi ghazal likhi aapne. Aise hi likhte rahiye.......
:):)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th August 2013, 02:56 PM
Replies: 2,443
Views: 172,047
Posted By swaraa
wah wah !!!!!!!! Bahut badhiya !!!!

wah wah !!!!!!!! Bahut badhiya !!!!
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 15th August 2013, 10:34 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,339
Posted By swaraa
Taish , Bahut bahut shukriya kavita...

Taish ,

Bahut bahut shukriya kavita padhne aur sarahne ke liye . Definitely aage bhi apni kavita aapke saath share karna chahungi .:)

...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 3rd August 2013, 09:01 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,339
Posted By swaraa
Shaad Ji, Bahut bahut dhanyvad meri...

Shaad Ji,
Bahut bahut dhanyvad meri koshish ko pasand karne ke liye . Aage bhi baantna hai aapke saath apni kavita ko. Aap log padhenge , apni baat kahenge , tabhi aur likh sakungi ....
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 1st August 2013, 08:46 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,339
Posted By swaraa
लकीरें

सांझ ढले
करते रहना
तेरा इंतज़ार ,
आँखों में भरकर
उदास - सी ...
Forum: English Poetry 19th July 2013, 02:18 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,215
Posted By swaraa
For whom I laid into the dirt, They were the...

For whom I laid into the dirt,
They were the first ones to hurt!

GREAT . keep writing n sharing.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 19th July 2013, 02:08 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,412
Posted By swaraa
khoobsurat ehsaas . thanks for sharing . keep...

khoobsurat ehsaas . thanks for sharing . keep sharing.
Forum: English Poetry 19th July 2013, 02:05 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,089
Posted By swaraa
WONDERFUL !!!!!!! what a nice thought ....

WONDERFUL !!!!!!!

what a nice thought . extremely beautiful.
thanks for sharing:):)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th July 2013, 06:23 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 622
Posted By swaraa
zindagi ki tamanna sabab ishq hai... bekhudi ki...

zindagi ki tamanna sabab ishq hai...
bekhudi ki khudi ko talab ishq hai,


WAH !!!! WAH!!!! KYA BAAT HAI !!!!!


BAHUT BADIYA:):)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th July 2013, 01:41 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,522
Posted By swaraa
Shaad Ji , Exellent !!!!!! I dont have...

Shaad Ji ,

Exellent !!!!!! I dont have words to praise your creation.
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 16th July 2013, 01:17 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,277
Posted By swaraa
mann ko choo gayi ye baat. bahut sunder.

mann ko choo gayi ye baat. bahut sunder.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 16th July 2013, 01:13 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 764
Posted By swaraa
Monika Ji, Bahut khoob . Likhte rahiye.

Monika Ji,

Bahut khoob . Likhte rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th July 2013, 08:40 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 886
Posted By swaraa
bahut sunder . thanks for sharing.

bahut sunder . thanks for sharing.
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 13th July 2013, 08:36 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,797
Posted By swaraa
Monika Ji, Thanks for liking .

Monika Ji,

Thanks for liking .
Forum: Aapki Shayri 12th July 2013, 09:41 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,100
Posted By swaraa
Nikhil Ji , Bahut khoob....

Nikhil Ji ,

Bahut khoob. sachmuch bachche se bade hone ka safar bada ajeeb hota hai. kya kya badal deta hai .
Keep writing :)
...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 6th July 2013, 10:41 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,797
Posted By swaraa
Shaad Ji , bahut dhanyavad ye ...

Shaad Ji ,

bahut dhanyavad ye ehsaas samajhne ke liye :)
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