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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st March 2016, 01:15 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,900
Posted By prasaxena
Rajeev Sahab Bohat zabardast ummedeiN haiN...

Rajeev Sahab

Bohat zabardast ummedeiN haiN aapki Kuhuda se. Dil se yahi aawaaz nikalti hai ke wo ye ummeedeiN poori kar de. Agar aisa ho jaye to ye duniya kuchh aur hi nazar aaye.
Aameen
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st March 2016, 01:09 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,815
Posted By prasaxena
Dhaval Bhai Bohat dinoN baad! Umda romantic...

Dhaval Bhai

Bohat dinoN baad! Umda romantic khayalat!

Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th February 2016, 12:35 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,319
Posted By prasaxena
Umda sher hai Aru. Dili daad Praveen

Umda sher hai Aru. Dili daad

Praveen
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 27th February 2016, 03:41 PM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 170,975
Posted By prasaxena
sher

Kya khoob matla hai

Meri peshkash ye rahi

Jab bhi kii haiN duaaeN, Kuchh na maNga Khuda se
Jissko mil jaaye chaahat, KyuN wo maaNge Khudayee
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th February 2016, 12:33 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,224
Posted By prasaxena
Bichad ke arsh se pal meiN bikhar gaya hoga

Ek ghazal dostoN ki nazr
ग़ज़ल - बिछड़ के अर्श से पल में बिखर गया होगा
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बिछड़ के अर्श से पल में बिखर गया होगा
कोई कहे वो सितारा किधर गया होगा

जो आइनों के मोहल्ले में गर गया होगा
ख़ुद...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th February 2016, 12:26 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,778
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

दिखादो उस भगवान् को
के तुम भी विनाश कर सकते हो
जनक न सही तो न सही
विनाशक तो बन सकते हो,

अभी भगवान् सो रहा है।

Apne insaan hone par sharm aati hai Chaand Bhai. Insaan ka jaagna zaroori hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd February 2016, 07:54 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,468
Posted By prasaxena
Waah Waah

Mast Masti aur Madhu

Waah kya ghazal hui hai. Kya khayalaat aur kya bayaN ki ravaani.
Bohat Achchi lagi poori ki poori ghzal. Har sher par wah wah kahe bina reh nahin paaya. Ummeed hai aage bhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd February 2016, 07:48 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,890
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

Waah waah Maikash Bhai

Kya khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne. Har sher lajawaab.

bhujhegi tere jism ki jab chamak
mere ishq ki raushn’ii aazmaana

Kya kehne!!

Khaaksaar
Forum: General Stories 22nd January 2016, 01:16 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 27,125
Posted By prasaxena
Madhu Sabse pehle to maiN kahuuNga ke I'm...

Madhu

Sabse pehle to maiN kahuuNga ke I'm impressed. Bohat achcha likhti ho tum. Pathak ko aakhir tak chipkaaye rakhne waali likhaii hai tumhari. Isse bhi jaari rakhna. Bhasha ka bohat rochak...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd January 2016, 12:06 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Shukria

Kunaal Bhai

Sahi kaha aapne Jaun Eliya yaad aa gaye. Jab maine uss group meiN ye qafiya aur radeef diye gaye to mujhe bhi unki ghazal yaad aa gayi thhi. Bohat shukria apni rae se nawaazne ka.
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd January 2016, 12:03 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Shukria

Aadaab Dhaval Bhai

Bohat achcha laga aapko apne iss thread par dekh kar. Isse pasand karne aur daad ke liye aapka bohat shukria. YuN hi saath banaye rakhiye.

Khaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd January 2016, 12:01 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Shukria

Aadaab Sunita ji

Ghazal ke ehsaas aapko pasand aaye jaankar baohat achcha laga. Aapki daad ka bohat shukria.

Khaaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd January 2016, 11:59 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Shukria

Addab Rajendar ji

Ghazal pasand farmaane ka bohat shukria. Jawaab meiN deri ke liye muafi chaahta huuN.

Khaaksaar

Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2016, 02:57 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,326
Posted By prasaxena
Bohat khoob Madhu Bohat umda ghazal kahi...

Bohat khoob Madhu

Bohat umda ghazal kahi hai aapne. Achche khayal hain aur aapne unhein khoobsoorat alfaaz diye hain. Bohat khoob.

Khaaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th January 2016, 06:58 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,877
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

Chaand Bhai

Bohat dinoN ke baad aapki aamad hui hai. Bazm meiN raunaq si nazar aati hai. Aapki ye nazm ehsasaat ko chhu jaati hai. Bohat achchi lagi. Issi tarah share karte rahiye.

Khaksaar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th January 2016, 01:10 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,245
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

Waah kya baat hai Arvind Sahab!

Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th January 2016, 12:51 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Shukria

Janaab Arvind Sahab

Bohat kushi hui ke aapko ghazal pasand aayi aur aapko padhakar achchi lagi. Meri jaanib se shukriya qubool farmaayeN. Aise hi hosla badhate rahiye.

DuaoN ke saath
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th January 2016, 12:49 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Shukria

Aaadab Sarika

Gahzal pasand aayi aapko, bada achcha laga ye jaankar.
Aaapki daad ka bohat-bohat shukria.

DuaoN ke saath

Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th January 2016, 12:42 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Bohat Shukria

Janaab Shaad sahab

Huzoor maiN to aapke andaaz-e-daad ka qaayal ho gaya huuN. Badi shayraana daad milti hai aapse. Aur Ghazal par aapki aamad se lag jaata hai ke humne kuchh achcha hi kaha hoga.
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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th January 2016, 12:37 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Bohat Shukria

Aadaab Maikash Bhai

Aapko thread par dekh kar dil khush ho gaya. Aapki daad se hausla aur khushi bhi bohat badhe.

Ji haaN jab uss group meiN ye qavafi aur rdeef diye gaye to mujhe bhi Jaun...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th January 2016, 12:31 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Shukria

Aadab Madhu ji

Jawaab meiN deri ke liye muafi chaahta huuN. Aaapki daad aur duaoN ka bohat shukria. Ummeed hai ye silsila aage bhi jaari rahega.

Khaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th January 2016, 12:28 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,762
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

Madhuji

Bohat umda ghazal kahi hai aapne. Achche khayal aur khoobsoorat adaaygi.
Lokhti rahiye. Khuda kare zor-e-qalam aur ziadah.

DuaoN ke Saath
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th January 2016, 07:14 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,062
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

Wah Wah Maikash Bhai

Kya khoob Ghazal kahi hai aapne. Meri daad iss sher ki shakl meiN pesh hai. Qubuul farmaayen.

Maikash tere kalaam ke qayal to yuN bhi hum haiN
Ik ek sher padh ke hum...
Forum: Introduction Forum 8th January 2016, 07:14 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 9,505
Posted By prasaxena
Aadab Anil ji Iss safar mein aapka swagat...

Aadab Anil ji

Iss safar mein aapka swagat hai. Aapko aur qareeb se jaanne ka mauqa milega. Aapke anubhav sunne ko milenge.

Nek Khaahishaat ke saath

Khaakssar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd January 2016, 01:02 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 3,912
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

Madhu ji

Aapki ghazal padhi. Achche khayal aur unehein achche se pesh karne ki koshish. Aapke iss kalam par Kunaal ne kaafi kuchh keh hi diya hai. Haan main bas yahi add karna chahuuNga ke Ghazal...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd January 2016, 12:45 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,889
Posted By prasaxena
main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon, tuu nayaa ek...

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise....

Wah wah shaad sahab. Umda sher kahe hain aapne. Rumani andaaz bhi kya kehne.

Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd January 2016, 12:40 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,352
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

Bohat khoob Abhi Sahab

Apne bete ke liye aapne bohat khoobsoorat jazbaat aur ehsaas piroye haiN iss nazm meiN.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st January 2016, 08:29 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 4,133
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

Madhu Ji

Bohat achcha likha hai aapne. aise hi likhti rahiye.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...

Waah...

Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th December 2015, 09:21 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,485
Posted By prasaxena
Ek aur Ghazal Mulaiza Kiijiye

Facebook par ek group mein Qafiya aur Radeef par sher kehne thhe. Sher to huve hi ye ghazal mukammal ho gayi.

Aaap hazraat aapni aara se nawaazeiN.


GHAZAL
मोड़ ये भी हैं दास्तान में क्या?...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th December 2015, 11:17 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 3,943
Posted By prasaxena
Madhu ji Khoobsoorat ahsaas ki khoobsoorat...

Madhu ji

Khoobsoorat ahsaas ki khoobsoorat adaaygi hai aapki ye ghazal. Aise hi likhti rahiyr, behatar aur behtar...

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th December 2015, 11:08 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,182
Posted By prasaxena
Bohat behtareen Sarika. Kisi ladki ke saath...

Bohat behtareen Sarika.

Kisi ladki ke saath guzre haalat kao aapne mehsoos kiya wo badi khoobi se. Bohat achcha aur bohat asardar likha hai aapne.

DuaoN ke saath
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd December 2015, 07:09 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,826
Posted By prasaxena
Bohat Shukria

Sarika ji

Aapki daad ka bohat shukria.

Khaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd December 2015, 06:58 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,544
Posted By prasaxena
Bohat khoobsoorat Ghazal kahi hai aapne shaad...

Bohat khoobsoorat Ghazal kahi hai aapne shaad sahab. Maikash sahab ne tafsili tabsara kar hi diya hai. Aise hi likhte rahiye mehfil kolutf-andoz karte rahiye.

Khaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd December 2015, 06:39 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,638
Posted By prasaxena
Bohat umda kalaam madhu ji. Bas maqte ka doosra...

Bohat umda kalaam madhu ji. Bas maqte ka doosra misra pehle misre se aur behtar rabt meinN aa jaaye to aur maza aa jaaye.

Khaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd December 2015, 06:35 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 7,448
Posted By prasaxena
Bohat achchi Ghazal Madhu ji. Likhti rahiye...

Bohat achchi Ghazal Madhu ji.

Likhti rahiye

Khaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th December 2015, 09:30 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,555
Posted By prasaxena
Bohat khoob Fakhri Sahab Khaksaar Praveen

Bohat khoob Fakhri Sahab

Khaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th December 2015, 09:28 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,692
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

maqaam-e-Ghazal kya hai subah-dam ko, dekhiye?
filhaal to, ashqoN ko giraah* baaNdh raha hooN

Waah Maikash Bhai lajawaab!

Khaaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th December 2015, 09:23 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,209
Posted By prasaxena
Waah

Waah Waah Maiksah Bhai Bohat khoob!

Khaksaar
Praveen
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th December 2015, 09:19 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,826
Posted By prasaxena
Shukria

Janab-e-Shaad

Aaapki to huzuur daad hi badi shayrana rahi. Jin alfaaz mein aapne ghazal ko saraha hai bada hi achcha laga padh kar. Aur huzuur qaayal to hum ho gaye haiN aapke andaaz-e-daad ke....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th December 2015, 09:14 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,826
Posted By prasaxena
Shukria

Anu Bhai

Ghazal par aapki daad ka bohat-bohat shukria.

Khaaksaar
Praveen
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