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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th December 2005, 07:07 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,788
Posted By ~*main maut*~
janab shukriya tareef ka.jaan kar behad khushi...

janab shukriya tareef ka.jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapkohumara kalaam pasand aaya.umeed karta hoon ki aap bas yunhi padhte rahenge hume.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th December 2005, 06:30 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,788
Posted By ~*main maut*~
bahut khushi hui kanchan ji ye dekh kar kisi ne...

bahut khushi hui kanchan ji ye dekh kar kisi ne kaafi deeply padha mere kalaam ko.bas aapse yahi darkhwast hai ki yunhi padhte rahiye hume.aur hum bhi kosish karte rahenge yunhi likhte rahne ki kuch...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th December 2005, 06:29 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,788
Posted By ~*main maut*~
aap bas hume yunhi padhte rahen parul ji aur hum...

aap bas hume yunhi padhte rahen parul ji aur hum bas yunhi likhte rahenge.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th December 2005, 06:27 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,788
Posted By ~*main maut*~
jaroor farhana ji.main humesha kosish karta...

jaroor farhana ji.main humesha kosish karta rahunga ahcha likhne ki.bas aapse yahi darkhwast hai aap yunhi padhte rahe hume.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th December 2005, 06:26 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,788
Posted By ~*main maut*~
Re: Re: meri rooh bhi sari hui hai

kuhulika ji jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko mera kalaam pasand aaya.aap bas yunhi padhte rahiye hume.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th December 2005, 07:13 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,788
Posted By ~*main maut*~
meri rooh bhi sari hui hai

bahut dino ke baad kuch pesh kar raha hoon umeed hai aap sabhi ko pasand aayega


nistabhdta nisha ki din me bhari hui hai,
lash meri mere hi samne pari hui hai.

har taraf khamoshi ka hi aalam...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 5th November 2005, 08:46 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,124
Posted By ~*main maut*~
[QUOTE]Originally posted by ~*main maut*~ ...

[QUOTE]Originally posted by ~*main maut*~
[B]ahcha likha hai janab.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 5th November 2005, 08:45 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,124
Posted By ~*main maut*~
ahcha likha hai janab.bas yunhi likhte rahiye...

ahcha likha hai janab.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 3rd November 2005, 05:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,482
Posted By ~*main maut*~
thanks parul ji for liking that sher and sharing...

thanks parul ji for liking that sher and sharing so beautiful sher.keep reading.

MAUt
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 3rd November 2005, 05:28 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,482
Posted By ~*main maut*~
Re: Re: nashe me nahi aate hain......

thanks farhana ji.keep reading.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 3rd November 2005, 05:25 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,482
Posted By ~*main maut*~
thanks ravi bhai jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko...

thanks ravi bhai jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko mera kalaam pasand aaya.


MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th October 2005, 08:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 925
Posted By ~*main maut*~
janab ahcha likha hai aapne.lagta hai aap bhi...

janab ahcha likha hai aapne.lagta hai aap bhi meri hi jamat ke hain.waise ye sher bahut pasand aaya mujhe.

hamne ki thi na koi baat jo yaad tumko na aa sake,
tumne hamein bhula diya par hum tumko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th October 2005, 08:17 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,153
Posted By ~*main maut*~
Re: Re: dil ka mohtaz hoon...........

janab dard to hua tha ek jamane me ek aisa dard jisne hume jeete jee maar dala.bas isi karan to main maut ban gaya.bas yahi kahunga ki kabhi kabhi maut bhi chot kha jata hai.aur log maut se bhagte...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th October 2005, 06:26 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 3,103
Posted By ~*main maut*~
wah garima ji bahut khoob.aapne to mere upar hi...

wah garima ji bahut khoob.aapne to mere upar hi likh diya.aaj kal to lagta hai ki har jagah main hi chaya hua hoon.par jahan tak maut ka maan na hai aapne maut ko jis tarah se pesh kiya hai log maut...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th October 2005, 04:50 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,153
Posted By ~*main maut*~
janab aapko pasand aaye khayalat ye jaan kar hume...

janab aapko pasand aaye khayalat ye jaan kar hume bahut khushi hui.aur wo sher batane ka takalluf karne ke liye main aapka shukraguzar hoon.umeed hai aage bhi aap mehfil me aate rahenge.


MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th October 2005, 08:43 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,153
Posted By ~*main maut*~
pallavi ji jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko mera...

pallavi ji jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko mera kalam pasand aaya bas yunhi humari mehfil me aap aate rahiye.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th October 2005, 06:06 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,153
Posted By ~*main maut*~
aapko pasand aaya jaan kar khushi hui ballu...

aapko pasand aaya jaan kar khushi hui ballu sahab.bas yunhi padhte rahiye aap hume.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th October 2005, 06:03 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,153
Posted By ~*main maut*~
hey my footnote itself says that.maut sabki jaani...

hey my footnote itself says that.maut sabki jaani pehchani hoti hai.isiliye aapko lagta hai ki main aapka jaana pehchana hoon.padhte rahiye.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th October 2005, 06:00 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,153
Posted By ~*main maut*~
karthik brother u liked it.i was glad to know...

karthik brother u liked it.i was glad to know this.just keep reading.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th October 2005, 10:11 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,153
Posted By ~*main maut*~
aapko pasand aayi khushi hai is baat ki garima...

aapko pasand aayi khushi hai is baat ki garima ji.bas yunhi padhte rahiye aur hum likhte rahenge.


MAUT
Forum: English Poetry 24th October 2005, 09:14 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 699
Posted By ~*main maut*~
brilliant my dear i just loved this 1 very nicely...

brilliant my dear i just loved this 1 very nicely crafted poem.just keep writing.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th October 2005, 08:33 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,338
Posted By ~*main maut*~
heloo karthik ji.i loved this poem of urs like...

heloo karthik ji.i loved this poem of urs like nething.as it looked to me as if u saw me and wrote the poem.as i cud only see myself in those lines of urs.hats off to u my dear.keep writing.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th October 2005, 07:26 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,153
Posted By ~*main maut*~
dil ka mohtaz hoon...........

main ek goonge ke kanthon ki aawaz hoon,
jise sab ne thukra diya hai wo andaaz hoon.

bhari mehfil me jise lutaya gaya hai,
sacche pyar ki main wo masum laaz hoon.

wafa aur pyar se bhara hua ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th October 2005, 07:15 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,385
Posted By ~*main maut*~
khoob likha hai janab.par ye baat is jalim duniya...

khoob likha hai janab.par ye baat is jalim duniya ko nahi samjha paoge.logon me dil me basane ki himmat nahi hoti fir bhi pyar ke suhane sapne dikhate hain.hath jalne se darte hain phir bhi hume...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 24th October 2005, 06:02 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,482
Posted By ~*main maut*~
nashe me nahi aate hain......

meri kahani sun saki ki bhi aankhon me aansoo aa jate hain,
sare mehkhane ki sharab pee hum nashe me nahi aate hain,
itni jyada peene lage hain hum to ab ai duniyawalon,
ki hum mehkhane me bhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th October 2005, 05:54 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 990
Posted By ~*main maut*~
kasak ji aapko ahchi tarah se pata hai ki maut ko...

kasak ji aapko ahchi tarah se pata hai ki maut ko kisi ka darr nahi hota maut par kisi cheez ka asar nahi hota.phir dekhta aaki aage kya hai hota.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th October 2005, 05:50 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 990
Posted By ~*main maut*~
shukriya ravi ji.umeed hai aapko humare kalaam...

shukriya ravi ji.umeed hai aapko humare kalaam pasand aayenge.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th October 2005, 05:48 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 990
Posted By ~*main maut*~
dekhiye jasleen ji baat darasal ye hai maine site...

dekhiye jasleen ji baat darasal ye hai maine site join abhi ki hai par is site ko observe mahino se kar raha tha.isiliye mujhe yahan ho rahi har ghatna ka gyan hai.aur aapko bas ye galatfehmi hai ki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th October 2005, 05:45 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,044
Posted By ~*main maut*~
jee zoroor aapko humse baat karni hai to hum...

jee zoroor aapko humse baat karni hai to hum jaroor baat karenge.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd October 2005, 08:43 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 990
Posted By ~*main maut*~
thanks a lot jasleen ji it was my pleasure that u...

thanks a lot jasleen ji it was my pleasure that u liked the way of my xspression.and no problem u will read more from me.and i have already posted something with the hope that u will like it.just...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd October 2005, 08:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,044
Posted By ~*main maut*~
Meri Rooh Sari Hui Hai

doston ye meri is site par pehli ghazal hai umeed hai ki aap logon ko pasand aayegi.

nistabhdta nisha ki din me bhari hui hai,
lash meri mere hi samne pari hui hai.

har taraf khamoshi ka hi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 23rd October 2005, 08:19 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,088
Posted By ~*main maut*~
kehna mushkil hai janab ki wo aaye kyun the.ahcha...

kehna mushkil hai janab ki wo aaye kyun the.ahcha likha hai aapne.likhte rahiye.

MAUT
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd October 2005, 08:14 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 990
Posted By ~*main maut*~
my 1st here

bas aane ki khabar kar raha hoon,

sacche pyar ko main khwab kehta hoon,
lahoo ko to main sharab kehta hoon,
aaj aaya hoon aap sabhi ke samne,
isliye sabko main aadaab kehta hoon.


MAUT
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