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Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 31st March 2004, 11:21 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 986
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~ Khamoshi ~~

Har sahil ko kinara mat samjho,
har dost ko sahara mat samjho,
najar-najar me fark hai!
yaro, har najar ko ishara mat samjho...!!!!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Dil gumsum,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 27th March 2004, 07:05 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 888
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~Pyar~~

Pyar maanga tha judaai nahi,
Vafa maangi thee bewafai nahi

Rimjhim :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 12th March 2004, 03:46 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 404
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~ Deedaar ~~

Aaj kaafi samaye baad kuch post kar rahe hain...i hope ki aap logo ko pasand aayega :-)

Khamoshiyaa teri mujhse
Baatein karti hain
Meri har aah, har dard samajhti hain
Pata hai majboor hai tu...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th February 2004, 05:08 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 551
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Shimul ji,

Shukriyaa hausla afzaai ka...agar aapka reply nahi milta hai to shayri mai kuch kami si lagti hai...isiliye hum hamesha chahte hain ki jab bhi hum kuch likhen to aap oos par reply...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th February 2004, 05:05 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 551
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Aman ji,

Kaafi samaye baad dekha hai aapko yahan par...yaa yeh kahen ki hum kaafi der baad yahan aaye hain :-(

Kaise hain aap???

Ab aap jaise itne umde shyron ko hamara likha hua pasand aa...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th February 2004, 05:03 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 551
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Mayank ji,

Aap gila shikwa karne ka mauka nahi diya ooske liye dil se maufi maangna chahenge hum :D

Waise abhi bhi kuch nahi bigra hai aap gila shikwa kar sakte hain.

Aapko hamari shayri...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th February 2004, 05:01 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 551
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Manoj ji,

Shukriyaa aap apna keemti samaye nikaal kar yahan aaye aur yeh chand lines pasand ki. Sach kahen to hume bhi itne din jab yahan se door the to kuch adhoora sa laga par bahaut bsuy thee...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th February 2004, 07:24 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 551
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~ Un Kaa Naam ~~

Hi everyone,

Aaj bahuat time baad kuch likha hai...i hope ki aapko pasand aayega...

Faanslo se tang aa kar
Laga diye jabaan par taale
Dil se un kaa khayaal
Magar khone naa diya

Aansoon...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 14th February 2004, 07:23 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 671
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~ Un Kaa Naam ~~

Hi everyone,

Aaj bahuat time baad kuch likha hai...i hope ki aapko pasand aayega...

Faanslo se tang aa kar
Laga diye jabaan par taale
Dil se un kaa khayaal
Magar khone naa diya

Aansoon...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th February 2004, 04:16 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 877
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Bahaut accaha likha hai mohit. Short and sweet :-).

Rimjhim :-)
Forum: General Stories 3rd February 2004, 07:23 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 55,585
Posted By Rimjhim
chintal_007 ji, Aapne to kuch jyada hi...

chintal_007 ji,

Aapne to kuch jyada hi tareef kardi. Hum itna bhi acacha nahi likhte hain ki novel likhan shuru kar den. aapne kuch jyada hi izzat de di hume :-).

Shukriyaa yahan aane ke liye...
Forum: General Stories 3rd February 2004, 07:22 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 55,585
Posted By Rimjhim
puneetgrover ji, Ji ab experience to hote...

puneetgrover ji,

Ji ab experience to hote rahte hain life mai...ab koi cheez hum soch kar to nahi likh sakte hain ooska koi naa koi hiss sa to hum se bhi jura hota hai isiliye to hum oose likhte...
Forum: General Stories 3rd February 2004, 07:20 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 55,585
Posted By Rimjhim
sushil_jagtap ji, Ji aapne bilkul sahi kaha...

sushil_jagtap ji,

Ji aapne bilkul sahi kaha hai jidagi sirf ek kahani hai...lekin woh kahani hum nahi hamare liye koi aur likhta hai par hana oosmai rang kaise aur kitne bharne hain woh hum par...
Forum: General Stories 3rd February 2004, 07:19 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 55,585
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Mansi ji shukriyaa yahan par rukne ka aur apne thoughts likhne ke liye...

Rimjhim :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 23rd January 2004, 11:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 497
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Mohit mere paas koi contact nahi hai pari ji ka...waise oonko email karo shaayad kuch pata mil jaaye.

Nothing new in my life...how are you???

Rimjhim :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd January 2004, 11:13 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 387
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Romana bahaut acacha laga tumne sis kaha anywayz haan ab to bas kuch hi din bache hain oonke aane mai...yeh intezaaar bhi bahaut mushkil hota hai...ab to bas yeh khatam hone waala hai INTEZAAR...
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd January 2004, 09:02 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 387
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~ Gazhal:- Subah Ka Jonkha ~~

Doston aaj ek arse baad maine kuch likha hai. Aaj arson baad dil mai kuch jazbaat oothe dil ki gahraayi ko kaagaz par ootar diya hai bas wohi aapke saamne pesh kar rahi hoon. Aasha hai aap sabko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 23rd January 2004, 09:01 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 497
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~ Gazhal:- Subah Ka Jonkha ~~

Doston aaj ek arse baad maine kuch likha hai. Aaj arson baad dil mai kuch jazbaat oothe dil ki gahraayi ko kaagaz par ootar diya hai bas wohi aapke saamne pesh kar rahi hoon. Aasha hai aap sabko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd January 2004, 06:30 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 4,764
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Manoj ji, bahaut time ke baad aaye hain yahan par...ab to bas aisa lagta hai jaise ki shayri.com se rishtaa hi toot gaya.

Anywayz aapko yeh batana chahte hain ki aapne bahaut khoob likah hai. Itna...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 23rd January 2004, 06:28 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,223
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Rakshit ji,

Bahaut acacha likha hai aapne aur bahaut sach bhi likha hai. Sahi main mothi ne theek kaha we all r with you.

Bye
Rimjhim :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th December 2003, 02:30 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 672
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Hi nisar ji,

Aapko pehli baar dekha hai hamare page par, I think u r a new member...atleast for me. Anywayz if u r then welcom on shayri.com.

Aapko hamara kalaam pasand aaya ooske liye hum tahe...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th December 2003, 02:29 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 672
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Hi arvind,

Haan yaar kaafi din baad aayi hoo yahan par, kya karoon exams chal rahe the naa, isiliye time nahi mila...Aur tum to jaante ho medical ke exams, right???

Aur tum batao Indian mai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th December 2003, 02:27 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 672
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Shimul ji, hamesha ki tarah humne likha aur hamesha ki tarah aapne reply kiya, aapko acacha laga yeh jaankar hume bahaut khushi hui, bas aap logo ka pyar hi to hai ki baar baar hum yahan keenche...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th December 2003, 07:01 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 672
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Happy ji shukriyaa apko hamara kalaam pasand aaya hume bahaut khushi hui...

Shukriyaa ek baar phir se taarif ka :-).

Rimjhim :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 14th December 2003, 08:44 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 672
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~ Gazhal :- Intezaar ~~

Intezaar to kareiN ke jab vo aaye bhi
Bhool jaayeiN hum chhodeiN jo mere saaye bhi

Kal subah yeh zindagi jo na rahi
Tamaasha dekheNge apne aur paraaye bhi

Vo gair hai to gair ban-na bhi seekh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th December 2003, 05:25 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,249
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Hi Paras Ji,

Pehli baar aapka likha hua kuch padha, sahi kahen to dil ko kya hamari aatma ko chu gaya khaastor se yeh lines...

"Wo na samjheinge hamari chahat kee bekasi
Hamare zinda hone ka...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 6th December 2003, 10:14 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,063
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Hi manoj ji,

Aaj bahaut samaye baad aapne yahan kuch post kiya aur humne padha, padhkar behad khushi hui, aapne bahaut acacha likha hai...

Waise aajkal aap yahan dikhte nahi hai kya baat hai???...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 5th December 2003, 05:30 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 963
Posted By Rimjhim
I hate u

Whoever u r u know wht I HATE YOU. I really hate u.

Rimjhim
Forum: Humourous Shayri 5th December 2003, 05:28 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,082
Posted By Rimjhim
I hate u

Whoever u r u know wht I HATE YOU. I really hate u.

Rimjhim
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 14th November 2003, 06:08 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 427
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Arvind ji aapne hamari gazhal ki tareef bhi ki aur yeh kya udaas bhi hain, kya hum jaan sakte hain ki wajah kya hai???

Luv
Rimjhim
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 14th November 2003, 06:07 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 427
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Shukriyaa manoj ji pasand karne ke liye. Ji humne to jo dil mai tha likh diya, aur phir mohabbat yeh jo shabd hai ismai sirf gum to nahi hai naa khushiyaa bhi to hai, to phir jo yaadein hume kisi se...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th November 2003, 07:16 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 427
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~Gazhal:- Ab Bhi Baaki Hai Mere Paas ~~

Kon kehta hai, ki mai barbaad hoke reh gayi...
pyar khoya to kya huaa, bahoot kuch baaki reh gaya...

Vo suraj ki kamjoor kirne, dhalti hui vo shaam...
Gungunaati hui ye nadiya, ye sangeet aur ye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th November 2003, 07:10 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,379
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Manoj ji ab yeh kahenge hum ki aapne bahaut khoobsoorat likha hai to bahaut mamooli sa lagega isiliye hum to yeh kahenge ki yeh gazhal hamare dil ko chu gayi.

Par hume k bata aur bhi kahna...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th November 2003, 06:48 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 611
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Manoj ji aise hi aaj dil mai aaya to likh diya, kuch socha nahi, apako dukh hua hamare dukh iske liye hum aapka shukriyaa adaa karte hain, waise yeh humne apne liye apni ek dost ke liye likha hai,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th November 2003, 06:45 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 611
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Shukriyaa arvind ji,

Ji hum bhi aapke saath hain bhagvaan ji kabhi aisa bahana nahi denge hume jiski wajah se hum aapse door ho jaaye, don't worry about it.

Thanx for appreciating my poem.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 7th November 2003, 08:24 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 611
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~Talaash~~

Naa kisi mukaam ki Talaash hai,
Naa kisi bahaane ki Talaash hai,
Jo Gham Jindagi ko maut de de,
Aaise hi Bahaane ki Talaash hai

Rimjhim :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 7th November 2003, 08:20 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 612
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Arvind u have doen a nice job ;-).

Manoj ji ky alikha hai aapne, sahi mai aaj phir se aapke iss sher ne dil ko chu liya hai, aur hum aapka shukriya abhi adaa karna chahte hain ki aapne shayri E...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th November 2003, 07:20 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 512
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Sakhi ji pyar ke baare mai to har baat sahi hoti hai, hai naa??? Pyar to khud mai ek bahaut bari sachaai hai. Log pyar ko kitne naam dete hain, gam, sacrifice, respect, trust, lekin koi pyar ko ek...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th November 2003, 05:50 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 512
Posted By Rimjhim
Love ~~ Gazal :- Pyar Ka Jadoo ~~

insan pyar me kujh aisa pagal ho jata hay .
ki use kisi aur ki parbha hi nahi hoti .
baas lagta hay bhot hi khobsurat sara jha.
lakin khte hay log, bhot dhook milta hay pyar me.
lakin hum khte...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd November 2003, 11:08 PM
Replies: 14
gam
Views: 638
Posted By Rimjhim
Hi

Hi arvind,

Thanx for writing such a nice shayri for me. Au rkya kahoon, kyon likha tumne, itni mayoosi waali baatein kyon kar rahe ho arvind. Check ur email...for me.

Rimjhim
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