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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th February 2003, 01:20 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,654
Posted By Bijili
Waah Mahima Ji, Pahli baar hi bahut...

Waah Mahima Ji,

Pahli baar hi bahut khoobsurat se apni shikayat sinaya aapne..great work...
Bahut khoobise farmaaya apni dard ko aapne..

Dekha maine khwabon mein tujhko aasmaan tak
par...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th February 2003, 01:15 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,882
Posted By Bijili
Waah Nilam ji, Bahut khooob faramaaya...

Waah Nilam ji,

Bahut khooob faramaaya aapne..

Aitbaar kar ke chout ka chuke hain
Apne bardhaastgi ko bahut aazmaa chuke hain ..

kyaa khoob kahaan . hume ye behad pasad aayin..
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th February 2003, 01:08 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 4,117
Posted By Bijili
Wonderfulll.... Waah Damal ji, aaptho ustaad...

Wonderfulll....
Waah Damal ji, aaptho ustaad nikle..:) sheron me..
pal bhar ke liye hamara dil bhi dard se bhar gaya aapka likha parke.. jyaada nahin kahoongi isse jyaada ki. ..kaafi dard hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th February 2003, 01:44 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 617
Posted By Bijili
Waa Chaand saahb, Bahut khoob.. bahut achcha...

Waa Chaand saahb,
Bahut khoob.. bahut achcha likha hai aapne... Jaise pahle hi kahchuke hai Amanji.. bahut dard hothi hai aapki shero me..

kyaa kahen hai aapne..

Machalti hai hajaaroN...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th February 2003, 12:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 823
Posted By Bijili
Vipin ji, Aapka kashmakash ko bahut...

Vipin ji,
Aapka kashmakash ko bahut khoobsuratse pesh kiya aapne.. har ek lafz achchi hai..
phirbi un sabmese hume ye bahut khoob lagi..

Tasveer ke dono rukh saamne nazar aate hain mujhe...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th February 2003, 12:48 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 744
Posted By Bijili
Damaal ji, Aap tho sheron ka khazana lekhe...

Damaal ji,
Aap tho sheron ka khazana lekhe aayen hai... itne gazab ke sher pass hoka aap kaamiyaab nahone ki kaise soch rahen hai...:).
Umeed hai aap yun hi likthe rahen ge..

Bijili
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th February 2003, 12:43 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 865
Posted By Bijili
Waah Damal Ji, Aapne ne tho kamaal kardiyaa.. ...

Waah Damal Ji,
Aapne ne tho kamaal kardiyaa..

Bahut khoob khaan hai aapne..
itna bedard yeh zamana kyon hai
chalakta aankhon ka paimana kyon hai
jiske liye umr bhar tadapte rahe
woh ab kisi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th February 2003, 08:35 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,105
Posted By Bijili
Varindar ji, Bahut achcha likh hai...

Varindar ji,
Bahut achcha likh hai aapne...bahut khoob..

Tamanna thi..ShaMa Ki Lau Mein Jal Jaane KI
Bas Yehi AarZoo Poori Hui Is 'Parwaane' KI

Ye sher hume behad pasand aayin..apni dard ko...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 12th February 2003, 09:21 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,248
Posted By Bijili
Ha ha ha :p Thats really Fundooooo song.. ...

Ha ha ha :p

Thats really Fundooooo song..
Great...

Bijili
Forum: Humourous Shayri 12th February 2003, 09:18 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 3,042
Posted By Bijili
Seams like U learned it in hard way :p How...

Seams like U learned it in hard way :p

How to belive it is truth??? may be U shd have attached ur photo as elibi... :D (Just kidding..)

Jho bhi ho magar, aapka sher tho lajawaab hai .. :)
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2003, 09:08 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,303
Posted By Bijili
Varinder Ji, Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....

Varinder Ji,
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. excellent.. Bahut khoob sajaya aapne apne gazal.. ko

Khila tha Chaand sa ChehrA..Adaaon mein NazakaT thi
Haan the Aise Bhi Mausam..Tujhe Mujhse...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2003, 09:01 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 691
Posted By Bijili
Waah Vipin Ji, Kyaa kahen aapka sher ka bahut...

Waah Vipin Ji,
Kyaa kahen aapka sher ka bahut dard baraa hai.
Jaane kahaan lagayin hume....

Its wonderfull..
Hope to C many more like this form U

Bijili
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2003, 08:50 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 990
Posted By Bijili
Hi Ishiqa Ji, Bahut khoob famaaye aapne... ...

Hi Ishiqa Ji,

Bahut khoob famaaye aapne...

Khoon se hum unka naam likhte rehe
Voh humara naam dil se mittate rehe

Kyaa kahna is sher ka...waah..

Hope to C many more like this,
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2003, 08:41 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,158
Posted By Bijili
Waah Zeba ji, Aapne tho gazab farmaaye..:) ...

Waah Zeba ji,
Aapne tho gazab farmaaye..:)

hum ko yeh tab ehsas hua ke tu hamara na tha
tujhe bhoolne ke sivaa jab koi chaara na tha

Waah..bahut khoob...

Bijili
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2003, 07:11 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,170
Posted By Bijili
Waah Farhaana JI Gazab ke sher...

Waah Farhaana JI

Gazab ke sher farmaaya aapne..:)

MEHSUS KIYA HAI TERI KHUSBOO KO SANSON MEIN;
WOH MEHEK KE JISSE MERI SAANS GHUTI JAATI HAI,

KAISI BEMURAWWAT KAALI RAAT HAI YEH...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2003, 07:08 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,007
Posted By Bijili
Bahut Khoob likhaa Priya Ji aapne :) Aaj...

Bahut Khoob likhaa Priya Ji aapne :)

Aaj phirse padhe uske khat maine yaaro,
Aaankhon se gire laakho ashk yaaro,
Vo jo in aankhon me sapne pirota tha,
Aaj gir gaya jami par banke ashk yaaro .....
Forum: Humourous Shayri 7th February 2003, 12:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 3,042
Posted By Bijili
:D very funny... bahut khoob likha hai aapne. ...

:D very funny...
bahut khoob likha hai aapne.

Bijili
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th February 2003, 12:31 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 753
Posted By Bijili
Romance Ji, Bahut khoobi se aapne apni pori...

Romance Ji,
Bahut khoobi se aapne apni pori zindagi ki dard dikhaya sher me.. aur title bhi achche select kiyan... bahut khoobi se sajaya aapne lafzonko.. khaaskar ke ye

phir achanak hi bahar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th February 2003, 12:23 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 725
Posted By Bijili
Aapne hamari Kavitha pade aur reply bhi diye,...

Aapne hamari Kavitha pade aur reply bhi diye, bahut kush kismat hai..hum.

Bahut achchi tarikese hamari galthi dikhaye aapne..:)
I messed it in hurry...

Thanks
Bijili
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th February 2003, 12:12 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,059
Posted By Bijili
Damaal ji, Bahut khoobsurat lafzon me kahaa...

Damaal ji,
Bahut khoobsurat lafzon me kahaa hai aapne apna pahla pyaar bi aur dard bi.. hume bhi yehi sher pasand aayin..

ki thi jo wafaen mere dil ne
shayad kabhi usko yaad aayen
phir dhoode...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th February 2003, 12:10 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 877
Posted By Bijili
Zeba Ji, Aap 5th class mehi nahin abhi bahut...

Zeba Ji,
Aap 5th class mehi nahin abhi bahut achhe likhthe hai :), Bahut khoob likha hai aapne..waise poori gazal baakhobise sajaya aapne magar khaas ke ye sher hume bahut pasand aayin..

maut ke...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th February 2003, 12:06 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 571
Posted By Bijili
Adaab Irfaan JI, Apni dard ko bahut khoobise...

Adaab Irfaan JI,
Apni dard ko bahut khoobise sajaya aapne lafzon me. Bahut dard hai aapme aur apni sher me bhi, yun hi bhaathe rahiye.. kam hojayegi :)

Bijili
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th February 2003, 12:00 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,240
Posted By Bijili
Vipin Saahab, Har baar ki tarah aapki kavitha...

Vipin Saahab,
Har baar ki tarah aapki kavitha ek achchi sandesh dejathi hai..

Laason ke biche iss dher mein
khoon ki keemat kuch bhi nahin.
Insaan ke siyaasati khel mein
sacchai ki moorat...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th February 2003, 11:52 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,519
Posted By Bijili
Aakhri hogi vo mulakaat aisa bhi to socha na tha,...

Aakhri hogi vo mulakaat aisa bhi to socha na tha,
bhatakti gayi meh us anjaani muhobbat mein..

Bahut khoob kahaan hai aapne..Aapka pahla sher kuch ahsaas degayi aur kuch kahgayi ki use bhuulna...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th February 2003, 11:47 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,956
Posted By Bijili
Yaar Priya, Sach kahaan hai aapne, in Bemani...

Yaar Priya,
Sach kahaan hai aapne, in Bemani logon ko ab tho bhoolna chahiye, jane kithne ashk bahaaye, najane kitne Din raath bahaaye.. aap sahi kahthe hai..

BHul jana hai un bedard insaano ko,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th February 2003, 12:50 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 725
Posted By Bijili
Yaar Priya, Aapko hamara sher pasand aayaa,...

Yaar Priya,
Aapko hamara sher pasand aayaa, khush kismat hai. Aur bahut bahut shukriya aapka dua'on ka. kassh woh khudaa sunletha..:)

Bahut bahut shukriyaa, hamari gazal parneke liye aur pasand...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th February 2003, 12:42 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 929
Posted By Bijili
HI Priya, Duniya me mera dil nahi lagta, har...

HI Priya,

Duniya me mera dil nahi lagta, har koyi paraya lagta ha,
darr aur koyi nahi mujhey par kisi ko apnane se darr lagta hai,

Bhuat khoob kahaan hai aapne..kaafi dard bhari hai..
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th February 2003, 12:38 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 837
Posted By Bijili
Parwana Ji, Bahut khoob kahaan hai aapne, dil...

Parwana Ji,
Bahut khoob kahaan hai aapne, dil ko chugayi aapki ye kavitha..

Woh Maahjabi Guzar jaata hai Saamne se.. Beparwaah
Hum to Bandagi mein Jhuke rahe Usne na mera Salaam Liya

Yuun to...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th February 2003, 12:34 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 791
Posted By Bijili
Kiran ji, Bahut khoob likha aapne.. khaas...

Kiran ji,
Bahut khoob likha aapne..
khaas ye sher hume bahut pasand aayin..

veeraniyon ke paar niklenge kabhi to
ye din humare bhi karwate badlenge kabhi to..

Hope to C many more like...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th February 2003, 12:31 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 690
Posted By Bijili
Vipin Ji, Har baar ki tarah is baar bi aapka...

Vipin Ji,
Har baar ki tarah is baar bi aapka shayari ek sadesha degayi hai maatru bhumi traf aapki pyaar ka. hume bhi yehi dher pasand aayin..

Na afsos hai na shikaayat koi
mujhe pyar karna hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st February 2003, 04:16 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 725
Posted By Bijili
Meri Khuda

Doston kuch hamare tarafse bhi...pesh hai..

meri khuda aur kuch nahi mujhe thodisii mohalat tho dede
dhekloon ek pal use mautse pahle, aisii ne'hmat tho dede

zindagi guzaarun saath mai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st February 2003, 04:12 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,286
Posted By Bijili
Tu sada khush rahe tu hee aabaad rahe. Sasta...

Tu sada khush rahe
tu hee aabaad rahe.
Sasta hoon insaan main
sastey mein aasoon bik rahe.

Wah Vipin Ji ,
Bahut khoob kahaan hai aapne, Age kuch kahneki lafz nahin hamare pass, tho fir ek...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st February 2003, 04:02 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,285
Posted By Bijili
HI Ishiqa, Bahut dard hai aapka...

HI Ishiqa,

Bahut dard hai aapka sher me, kyaa khoob kahaan..
Hume yeh don sher khaas pasand aayen..

Voh shokh haseen zindgi lauu'n kahan se mein
Yeh dil toot'h raha hai, isse...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st February 2003, 03:53 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,578
Posted By Bijili
Waaah Priya... waah.. Kehte they hai...

Waaah Priya...
waah..

Kehte they hai tujhey har hakk mujhpar, kuch apni si hai tu,
mujhe phool ka kithaab diya unhone, par dur kar di khushbuu?

.. Yaar kyaa kahaa aapne..
Kuch hum bhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st February 2003, 03:32 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 521
Posted By Bijili
Anitha Ji, Maaf Karnaa, galathi hui humse.....

Anitha Ji,
Maaf Karnaa, galathi hui humse.. :(
par aapka nick name thodi confusing hai.. Now I know ur real name, so dont confuse myself again,

Bye
Good luck
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st February 2003, 01:29 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 521
Posted By Bijili
Waah Anzz saahab, Bahut khoob likha hai...

Waah Anzz saahab,

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne...DIl ko chune waali sger hai..

Is naacheez ne ki hai badi gustaakhiyan
dil mai maujood hai dard - e - seeshe ki parchaaiyan
husn waalo ko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st January 2003, 05:01 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,045
Posted By Bijili
Adaab Genious Saahab, Bahut khoob kahaan...

Adaab Genious Saahab,

Bahut khoob kahaan hai aapne, bahut hi achche likhthe hai.
Aise hi likhthe rahiye.
Aur haan.. Ur nick names is really great. bahut pasand aayin.


Bijili
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2003, 11:41 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,143
Posted By Bijili
Parvaana ji, Waah wah.. kyaa khooob kahaan hai...

Parvaana ji,
Waah wah.. kyaa khooob kahaan hai aapne..

Uski Saudagiri Wah!Wah!Zindagi Lekar Gum de gaya
Meri Nadaangi Wah!Wah!Ab tak Insaaf ki Aas Jagaaye hain

Daste Tanhai Mein Dil behlaate...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2003, 11:37 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 992
Posted By Bijili
Waah Pyasa jji, Bahut choti cher aapka bahut...

Waah Pyasa jji,
Bahut choti cher aapka bahut bada Dil dikhaya.. behad pasand aayin..

Bijili
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2003, 11:35 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 898
Posted By Bijili
Hi Ishiqa Ji, Kaise hai aap?Bahut dinonke baad...

Hi Ishiqa Ji,
Kaise hai aap?Bahut dinonke baad phir aapki kavitha padne mili :)
Bhuat achcha likha hai aapne.

Aakhir saans socha tha marenge tumhari bahon mein, magar aaj hum ekele marr rehe...
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