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27th November 2013, 10:15 AM
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Originally Posted by Aafan22
Kyoun Bhool Gaye Hum Ko Rishta To Purana Tha.
Aik Yeh Bhi Zamana Hai Aik Woh Bhi Zamana Tha.
Rangeen Fizayein Thi Shokh Adayein Thi.
Jazbon Ki Jawani Thi Mosam Bhi Sohana Tha.
Seene Se Lagaya Tha Ankhon Pe Bithaya Tha.
Maloom Na Tha Tumne Yoon Chhor Ke Jana Tha.
Kyoun Humse Khafa Ho Tum Kyoun Humse Juda Ho Tum.
Kya Jurm Hua Humse Itna To Batana Tha.
Nafrat Se Bhari Nazrein Aik Jaan Hi Le Bethi.
Tukre Bhi Kiye Dil Ke Kya Khoob Nishana Tha.
Nt mi9
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Aafan bhai............. Kya khubsurat qlaam pesh kiya hai..............
Some suggestions,
Agar aap 'aankhoN' ki jagah 'palkoN' ka istemaal karenge to ye bilkul sahI baithega.
Aur agar aap harek sheyr ke baad ek space deN to paRhne me aasaanI hogI
~ Safeer ka salaam 
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