[sapana]

dil banke bicha jaati hu mai teri rahome,
tere kadamoka nishan hu mai.

Originally Posted by Mayank

Sher ka jawab sher meiN deejiye..

DostoN,


ham apni is Anjuman main ek or thread ka izafa karte haiN ess main aap ko ashar hi likhne haiN or agle member ko us sher ke jawab main koi sher meiN likhna hoo ga theek hai ?

yeh koi naya silsila nahi hai sab ko pata hoga ke kaise khelna hai yeh.. aise threads say hame kaafi kuchh seekhne ko milta hai.. Sher kisii ka bhii ho sakta may be your own or borrowed..

bas she'r likhte vaqt is baat ka khayaal rakha jaaye ke javaaban jo she'r likha jaa rahaa hai, us ka koi na koi rabt pichle she'r se hona chaahiye..Shukryah!

to chaliye meiN hi Shuruaat karta huuN:

ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa


PS: to keep the beauty & meaning of the thread 'sher ka jawaab sher me.n deejiye', it is requested to all member that, please reply a 'sher' with a 'sher' only (not with four liners, qitaa, Ghazal, nazm etc etc). I hope all members will cooperate me to maintain beauty and dignity of the site in all level.

thank u all

Mayank