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23rd October 2006, 03:48 PM

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Originally Posted by rajveeer View Post
Dosto yeh meri phele kosish hai kuch likhney ki, patta nahi thik hai ja galat, umeed karti hu app mrea saath dogey aur appney views bhi bataeygey.

"Sochti hu ki mere alfaaj kaha kho gaye,
mere mehboob hum tum juda ho gaye,

dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye,

appni pahchaan ab nahi rahi meri,
sochti hu kyu hum appse juda ho gaye,

umr bhar rougi mai teri waffo ki yaad mai,
tu nahi jaanta, teri waffa ke jakhm kitney gahrey ho gaye.

waiting for u r reply.......................!


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Sunita Virender Singh

sunita ji appki pehli post ho meri nazar na pare us par yeh to mumkin hee nahi....saach main bhut pyari shuruwaat hai bhut acha lagga appko parhna.....har lafaz dil se nikla hua hai or main manta hoon ki jo baat dil se nikle wo to kabhi galat ya buri ho hee nahi sakti.....is pyari c koshish ke liye raj ki tahe dil se daad kabool karna.......take care........raj......
rajveer ji namaskar

meri es koshish ko aapne bhi sawikaar kiya, shukriya. yu hi saath detey rahiyega.

aapki dost


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