30th October 2010, 09:55 PM
aisa na ho ke mil kar mujhse juda ho wo
taaveez uske naam ke ab baandhti hun main
Lamha Dear,
Its very lovely to read you,
after a long time....
Boht khoobsorat peshakash hai janab,
wese to tamaam ki tamaam ghazal
ache khiyalaat se saji hai,
lekin quoted shair kuch ziyada hi
pasand aaya,
Youhni apne ache ache alfazooN
se ru-ba-ru karaatay rahiye ga,
DuaooN k saath ijaazat,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
Last edited by Hassan; 30th October 2010 at 09:58 PM..
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