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Originally Posted by ghayalparwana
Mian Nahin jaanta ye nazm maine kitni baar pad daali... Aur kuchh is tarah isme doob gaya ke daad dena hi bhool gaya!!
Kya kahoon Maikash!! Nazm pad ke shahir ji ki nazmein yaad aa gayi... Har lafz jaise taraash ke likha gaya hai, dard ke saath saath khoob mehnat bhi kee gayi lagti hai isko likhne mein. Isse padne ka nahin gungunnane ka mann hua har baar, tarran ban gayi aapki ye nazm padte padte..
Shukriya isse share karne ka..
Varinder
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SSA bai ji
janaab aap ko gaayab hi ho gaye the saahab, ba-har-haal aapke darshan to hue!
aapko nazm pasaNd aayi aur aapne hamesha ki tarah hausla bhi badhaaya hai, ummiid karta huuN ke aayiNda bhi aapki ummiidoN par kharaa utar ke dikha sakuN
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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