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25th October 2006, 12:01 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by dilip200 View Post

dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye


hi didi kaisi hain aap

aapka aaaj purana kalam padne main aaya
mashaallah kya khoob likha hai aapne bakai
is sher per to main kurban jaunn kya baat hai
ese hi likhte rahe.n aap
is tammana ke sath

dilip
dear dilip

mera yeh kalaam tumhey pasand aaya, shukriya !

koshish karungi es se bhi behtar likhney ki. bas aap sab ka saath aur duay chahiye.

tumhari didi


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

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