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28th May 2007, 12:36 PM
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Originally Posted by mausam View Post
bhe>>>>

bheegta badan...mehakta aanchal...julf ghata si....
aur jheel si uski ankhon main mujhko doob jaana tha

bheegte hue hi mila mujhe mera "saccha pyar"
tabhi to mushkil us manzar ko bhool jaana tha

tha>>>>>>>>


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