Thread: Ghazal: har Shaks meiN ik Shaayar chhipaa hotaa haii...!
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20th November 2008, 04:59 PM
janab dhaval sahab ko aadab

bhaii badi pyari gazal likhii hai aur kafi dino baad bhii likhii hai
main technicaly to kuch nahi kah sakta per haan thodii sii rawangii ki kami lag rahi hai... banii ehsas to tumhaare hamesha hi jandar hote hain
merii to duaa hai hamesha ese hi likhte raha karo....

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