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21st January 2005, 09:16 AM

Ek akela tanha baadal ki tarah
toumhare in khayaalon par se
gouzar kar jaana hai moujhe...

Andhakaar bankar tere suraj par
apni parchaayi ko padne nahin diya
Na hi barsaat ki boundein bankar
teri khoushiyan par barsa kabhi

Wah Wah!!


Suraj ko apni baahon main lipatne wale
Ya pyaasi dharti par barasne wale
baadalon ki hi kouch ahamiyat hoti hai
Baaki ….kisse pata

Kal yahi kaafi hoga mere liye
ki tere asmaan se gouzar kar
tere deedaar ke do pal paaya meine…

Tera naam mere liye hamesha
ek ghazal ban kar rahegi…


Bahut Khoob!!

Dear Amanush ji!!

Kaise hain Janaab? Hope ur doing gr8

Bahut khoob... mujhe bahut aacche lage aapke yeh ashaar.... Really very nioce words...

Andhakaar bankar tere suraj par
apni parchaayi ko padne nahin diya
Na hi barsaat ki boundein bankar
teri khoushiyan par barsa kabhi


Yeh sher mera fav. raha... Loved it...

Aage bhi yun hi likhte rahiyega.... And do Take Care


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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