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10th July 2007, 09:40 AM

namaskaaR maasoom bhaiyaa:

aapkii Ghazal ko deKh ke baRii hi khuShii hu'ii mujH~e...waise maaloom to thaa ki aap unsey milne waale haiN..aor waapis lauT ke aapne jo Ghazal peSh-e-Khidmat kii haii Bahot pasaNd aaYii..aur ess baar to aap dono saath naZ^ar aaYeN aor aap dono ko saath me paRhne kaa maukaa milaa hum sab ko..aSh'aar itney khoobsoorat haii kii issey Ghazal ziyaadaah rawaaN lag rahii haii..waisey ess meiN sey do sher kaun sey unke ho sakte haiN ta'eY karnaa baRaa muShkil haii mere liYe...par fir bhii kosiSh kartaa huuN apnii taraf sey aapke sawaal ka jawaab dene kii..Ghalat^ ho to mwaaf!!
Quote:

is se bada sach to mere pas bhee nahee hai
maine is zindgee ko bas kaza dikhayee hai

Quote:

wo to chand hai jisko khud pe guroor hai
chandnee to khud chalke khidkee pe ayee hai


ess Khuubsoorat Ghazal ke liYe mere dil sey niklii hu'ii daad ko qabool farmaaYeN..ummid kartaa huuN aap dono aik baar fir saath meiN naZ^ar aaYeNge..taa.K sab ko fir sey aap dono ko saath me paRhne kaa maukaa mile..

khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka masoom
Dhaval


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