Ghayal Ji -
18th November 2007, 09:04 PM
GHAYAL JI AADAB AUR BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA AAPKA KI HAMARI GAZAL PE AAPNE GAUR KIYA AAPKI RAY ME ISME FER BADAL KI JARURAT HAI THEEK HAI LEKIN AAPKO MAI YE BATA DUN KE YE GAZAL MAINE FAQAT IK MAHBOOB KE NAM PAR PESH KI HAI
........SOCHA BHI NA THA AISA BHI MUKAM AAYEGA
.........MUJHPAR HI BE WAFAI KA ILZAM AAYEGA.
IK MAHBOOB SE AGAR MAINE MUJHPAR BHI KAH DIYA TO YE AISA HOGA KI MUJHSE PAHLE BHI WO KISI PAR ILZAM LAGA CHUKA HAI MERE IS SHER KI Gahrai to ye ishara kar rahi hai ke khud be wafai karke ilzam mujhpar laga raha hai aur dusri bat agar is gazal ki heera hai dil ki line ko aapke hisab se kaha jaye to is sher ko is gazal se nikalna parega kyun ki iska baher hi tut jayega aap ise kisi bhi tarannum se padh ke dekhiye isme sakta a raha hai aur baher ke bina gazal gazal nahi kuch aur hi ho jati hai teesri bat kauriyan aaj ke daur me jeero ke mane rakhti hain aaj muhabbat me dil ki keemat dil hai jo ke anmol hai lekin ye anmol cheez dil ke badle har daur me milti rahi hai magar tute dil ke badle kuch nahi milta matlab jeero matlab kauri khair aapne apne hisab se rai di hai aur kuch achcha hi soch kar kaha hoga iske liye bahut bahut shukriya waise mera nam rahnuma istiyaq hai mai hamesha aapki rai ka intezar karunga yahan to nahi lekin kahin na kahin mai galat bhi ho sakta hun jiske liye aap jaise rahnumao ki jarurat hai....khuda hafiz....aapka dost rahnuma
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