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Originally Posted by Anjana Rahi
Mohtaram Maikash saaheb, Aadab
Aaj kaafi waqt tha tau iDhar se guzra ur aap ko paRha ... par ab yeH afsoos ho raha hai kii maine pahle kyoN nahiiN paRha.. Aap kii yeH nazm is qadar dil ko bhai hai kii samajh meiN nahiiN aa raha hai ki kaise taarif ka haq ada karuuN.. tau saaheb maiN ghalti kar jaauN to peShgi meiN hi ma'azrat ka khwaaishmand huuN...
aap ke nazm ko paRh kar dil meiN yeh Khayaal aaya...
ai maut tuu mere qareeb aa aur gale se lagaale,
kee jee raha huuN meiN teri khwaaish meiN har aik lamha,
[mayank]
waah! Kya aagaaz hai, Bebasi ko khuuB lafzoN meiN sajaaya hai huzoor,
waah! waah! waah! huzoor.. behad khuub..... ess se khuub-suurat bayaaN-e-bebasi kya ho sakti hai.. aap kii yeH nazm bohat achchhi lagii... Bohat khuub ravaani hai daad-0-mubaarak baad qubool kareN..
-Mayank
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to miyaaN aap aa hi gaye chuTTiyaaN manaa kar, badii khushi ki baat hai, aapki kamii khal rahi thi bazm meiN aur ye baat meiN dil se keh rahaa huuN yaqeen kijiyega
aapko nazm achchi lagi ye baat mere liye baa'is-e-massarrat hai kyoNke aap khud ek umdaa aur suljhe hue shaayir haiN aur isliye aapki daad-o-mubarakbaad aur bhi maayine rakhti hai, aapki daad sar aaNkhoN par
bohat shukriya
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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