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Darkhwast e islaah - 12th January 2013, 05:03 PM

Tasleemaat bhaiyo wa behno, Jaisa ki ham sab nay daykha ki madrasa tou kabka khul chuka haye laykin dars ki shuruaat abhi tak nahee huee, isee cheez ko madd e nazar rakhtay huay nacheez nay socha chlao apni hi kavish say Bismillah Kar detay hayn.

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1.Sabsay pahlay sabhee arbaab e zauq wa shayeqeen e shayree say islaah ki darkaar haye jahaan munsaabi samjhayn, please come forward with your suggestions as to where there is a need for or room for improvement in the bayanee and adaygee.

2. Suaal raqm do yay haye ki yay kaavish kis category mayn shumaar hogee.. ghazal ya nazm? Aur kyoon?

Ilteja e islaah kay saath aap sab ki aara ka muntazir
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