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18th January 2013, 12:52 PM

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wo kar ke Deewana khud'ii (khud hi) pooNchtaa hai,
huaa chaak teraa girebaan kyun hai...

deewaanaa... 22X ... ise di ki sound girana khatre se khaali nahi... isliye maine b nahi girayee thi ..
1] vikas sahab , deewaana ka 'di' chota ho sakta hai...iski bahot strong misaal hai

ameer kazalbash
zindagii tujh ko manaane nikle
ham bhi kis darja diivaane nikle


kuch to dushman the mukhaalif saf me
kuch mere dost puraane nikle


2] prima facie aitraaz 'khudi' par ho sakta hai, kyuki lafz 'khud hi' hai, iska vasl nahi ho sakta ,waise bhi scannning ke liye 'khud hi' ko 'khudi'(ego,self respect) kar den to meaning change ho raha hai...yaha zara muamla doubtful hai.....

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