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20th June 2014, 03:19 PM

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Originally Posted by zidd View Post
kahaani, nishaani, suhaani , puraani, pani...ye sab istemaal ho gaya hai is ghazal me.

think of something apart from above..

like---raani,jaani,diwaani,bataani,...etc etc...many are there.

baat bataaani hai ye
bahta hua pani hai ye
kaisi diwaani hai ye


some exapmples...just to prompt you.

bhaisaab ek chota sa sawaall hai....

diwaani ko kyaa is ghazal me shaamil kar sakte hain.... ???

mere khayaal se deewaanii ki takhtiii 222 honii chahiye.... aap kyaa kahte hain...???


Shaad...
   
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