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17th December 2008, 10:20 PM

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Originally Posted by stillalive View Post
hi sunita dii ..bahut achi lagi aapki gajal .. bahut khoobsurat aandaaj e bayaan aapka hai..kabhi humein aisi shayri likhne ki tricks baatayein.. bahut khoob sach mein..


tujhko dekhenge to sitaare ziyaa mangenge...
or pyaase teri julfon se ghata mangenge...
apne kandhe se dupatta na sarkane dena ..
warna budhe bhi jawaani ki duaa mangenge... nm


dear vicky..........bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne meri adna si shayri ko pada, saraha aur pasand kiya.....umeed hai yoon hi saath milta rahega.

kush raho
duao.n ke saath
tumhari diii


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

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