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27th October 2017, 11:48 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phoenix View Post
Umeed ki ek kiran

jo dikhi thi kaali andhere raaton me
Naa jaane aaj kahan kho gayi...


Ek hi dilruba ko dil me qaid kiye the
aaj wo aazad panchi hai
apni bahein pasare keh rahi hai
ye saara aakash meri hai
aur main hun iss aakash ki rani.

Very nice........bahut accha likhte hai aap, vaise aapka naam hai kya ? Phoenix keh kar bulana kuch ajeeb sa lagta hai


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