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17th February 2007, 04:15 AM
aapne bahut hi accha likha hai, the way the thoughts flowed into words is marvelous,....lekin is kavita ko padh kar kuch kehne ki himat nahin...kaanp si gayi mai to isse padh kar.....
Regards
aarya
khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii
lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii
ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii
regards aarya
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