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Originally Posted by Mayank
Kunal bhaaii,
achchhe khayaal ko aap ne lafzoN ki shakl dee hai.. daad haazir hai.. do- ek baateN arz karta huuN, agar Ghalat lage to fauran dar-guzar kar deejiyega..
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jee Bohat boohat shukriya .. mohatram mayank saahab... aapki daad palkoN pe rakh ke kabool hai ... aur haan kisi ki raiy humeN kabhi galat nahi . lagii.. bas haan kyuNki dekhne maiN kya jata hai ....
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Originally Posted by Mayank
(duusre Sher ke pahle misre meiN 'the' ya 'haiN'? agar aap 'the' kahna chaahte haiN to aap woh ehsaan ka karz utaar chuke haiN yaa phir ehsaan bhula chuke haiN)
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THE ka matlab kahin nahi hota ki khthm ho gaya .. jaise aapne kaha .. KI MAINE AAPSE YE SAMAAN LIYA THA >> zaroori nahi ki aapne wapas lauta diya ho ....
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Originally Posted by Mayank
(kunal bhaaii, aap ne ess se pahle Sher meiN usay 'bewafaa' kah rahe ho yahaaN khud ko mujrim, bura na maaniye, maiN aap kiii baat samjh sakta huuN par baat thoRi si ulajh rahii hai.. ek raa'ey hai, dekh lejeiye, dekhane meiN kya harz hai... agar aap pahle waale Sher meiN 'bewafa' ko haTa deN to shaayad rabt kuchh baRh jaayega.. aisa bhii kar sakte haiN..
ehsaan haiN jo pal muhabbat ke
yaar kaise, MaiN bhuula paauNga! )
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Aur yahaN jo pehla sher hai wo saamne waale se babasta hai .. aur doosra sher meri kahani ko keh raha hai .... Kyunki usne jo kiya wo uski taraf se tha .. par hua mere sath ... par meri galti bhi to thi na .. ki maine pyar kiya .. isi liye maine khud ko doshi bataya ki .. aur ye gunaah kabool kiya .. ki jo ishq naam ka gunah hai maine kiya hai us bewafa se pyar kar ke ... to maut se badtar saza jo mar mar ke jeene ki hai wo milegi ... ya ek jeewan bhar kee tadap... aur upar ka sher ye kehna chahta tha ... ki jo pal mohabbat ke maine tumhare sath bitaye .. jo tumne mere sath bita ke mujh par ehsaan kiya ... kyunki tum to bewafa the .. jo bas waqt guzaar rahe the .. par maiN kaise unhe zindgi maiN bhula paunga .. kyunki maiNe saccha pyar kiya ... khair... aapki baat se bhi inkaar nahi karta .. ho sakta hai maine bayani maiN kami chori jo diloN ki samajh se door rahi .. mujhe afsos hai khud pe .. aur aapki raiy ko bhi sir aankhoN pe leta huN .. kyUnki yebhi durust raai hai ...
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Originally Posted by Mayank
kya kahuuN? waah! ya aah!
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Kuch bhi keh dijiye huzoor .. nahi bhi kahenge to aapka aana hi humare liye sukoon kee baat hai ...!
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Originally Posted by Mayank
Khuub! par huzuur, jise pyaar karte haiN, unHe rula kyoN rahe haiN.. achchhii baat nahiiN... 
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arre jisne itna dard diya hai .. kam se kam meri kahani sun ke do aannsu to bahaye na mujh pe .. chahe yahi kahe .. marne ke baad bhi peecha nahi chorta
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Originally Posted by Mayank
(yeh 2 Sher to dil-jaloN kii Sher lag rahii hai  , dil-jaloN waali baat kah rahe ho. )
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dil jale na hote to dard ki galiyoN maiN kyuN phir rahe hote ,,, humari kalam bhi ishq ke kalaam likhti ... aur hum bhai koi proffesionally shayar to hai nahi ... to bas jo dil main aaya likh daala
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Originally Posted by Mayank
achchhe khayaal aap ne nazm kiye haiN aap ne .. daad haazir hai..yuuN hii likhate raheN...
Khaaknashiin
Mayank
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Shukriya mohatram saahab.. mere khayaaloN ko apni dariya dil dikhate hue sarhane kee ... aapki daad sir aankhoN pe .. umeed hai aap bhi sath dete rahenge
Khaaksaar
Kunaal