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Originally Posted by zidd
ek ghazal pesh karta hu aapki khidmat me....
qafiye ki self imposed bandish liye huye hai,,,jo kuch logo ko turunt apparent hoga....
ab aapke hawaale karta hu cheer phad ke liye 
ab aap miliye(to meet) to aapki rai mile(to get) , abstract ideas ki milawaT hai ( to mix) is ghazal me......aur bhi bahut saare ...to receive...to want...to discover etc etc etc,....
jyada logic ki baat koi na kare to accha ,halanki koi dabaoo nahi iska...ek puzzle ki tarah is suna jaaye.
aaiye miliye...
Jo raasta mila muhje vo kaun sa mila
Muskil bahut hisaab hai kuch khoya ya mila
Milkar na aaya khwaab mujhe raat bhar koi
Kya gesuoo ka rang andheron me aa mila?
OoDe tamaam chehre vo nikla naqaab se
Mil to gaya par is tarah milkar bhi kya mila
Khud par kiya gumaan laga haath kuch nahi
Jis par tha aitbaar vo auro se jaa mila
Sabka yakeen karke tujhe mil gaya sukoon
Tera yakeen karke bhala mujko kya mila
Dushmam nahi tha taak me so dost par bani
Dushman bhi mera dekhiye kya kaam ka mila
Teri hai gar ye zidd to ye zidd ki hi haar hai
Le abto mere jaam se tu jaam laa mila |
MashaAllah bohat khoob zidd sahab......
As always something different.........