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Re: gazal - 19th January 2006, 07:07 PM

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Originally posted by wafa ali
Daste dua ho jayega

beemar tera dekhke daste dua ho jayega .
Tera yahan aekbar ka ana dava ho jayega .

Dilki ye kishkol to hamne kabhi kholi nahin
Koi de ya na de hamein sabka bhala ho jayega .

Phool ,patthar,kante ho ya ho bijliyonka khiraj
Jo bhi girega ish nasheman per hava ho jayega .

Yoon isharo aur kinayo mein kahoge kabtak
Jo jaban se apni keh do ge to kya ho jayega .

Loot le jao yahanse phool,patti.shakho,phal
Ye chaman ab kuch dinomein viran ho jayega .

Bana phirta he ye phiron aur shaddad ka beta
Khuda wahid ko chhor kar kya khuda ho jayega .?

Sham ke kandho pe roya khoon ke ansu suraj
Barbadyon ki rat ayegi tabah ho jayega .

Hamne “Wafa” waqt ki rassi kabhi thami nahin
Kuch bhi kahenge jamanese gilaa ho jayega .
janab aapko kuch suggestion dene the.pehla to y ki aap ek saath itni saari cheezen na post karen log nahi padhte hain itne sare ek saath maine bhi sare nahi padhe hain.
aur doosri baat aapne jo ye ghazal likhi hai iska kafiya theek nahi hai.kyunki aapne kayi baar alag alag tarah ka kafiya use kiya hai.main guzarish karunga ki aap is link ko padhen bahut kuch seekhne ko milega wahan aapko.

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