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5th March 2006, 01:46 PM

Assalam-o-Alikum Piari Bahen,

As I always say.. Your work is different from all

But I found some mistake in the basic idea of your last Nazam Khudi,
Kindly not it down as follow,

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"Khudi aur Khuda mein ulze hue hain.
Khudi ka matlab na samze hue hain."

Khudi aur khuda may dekho saaf farak hay
Ek banda-e-ajiz aur wo zataye Azal hay

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"Khudi se banta hai iman kamil
Khuda ki raza har amlon me shamil."

Bando ko sedha raha dekhay hay Allaha
Phir marzi insaan par us ky amal ke hay

My apology if you find me harsh

Keep ing
Allaha Hafiz


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