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26th October 2006, 10:58 AM

maikasH ji kaise ho mere dost
aaj subha subha itni achhi nazam padhne ko mili baht achha laga ye nazam padhke iske asaar dil ko chhu gaye mere dost

aur ek sher to mujhe behaad pasand aaya wo saqi wala kya kamaal ka sher banaya hai aapne

jaan dene ke ilaawaa ko_ii chaara hi nahiiN
ab mera ziNdagii ke saath guzaara hi nahiiN
meri saaNsoN ka diyaa aaj bhujhaa de saaqi
maiN haath joDta huuN zahar pilaa de saaqi


bahot hi khub kaha hai aapne is sher me ,maikash ji is nazam ke liye dil se nikali daad kubul kijiyenga

apna khayal rakhiye , khus rahiye

jai shree karishna

aapka dost
dhaval


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