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Originally Posted by amrit_sharad
MujeeB Jee!! Meine AaP ko hi nahiN kisi Ko bhi Kabhi ye nahiN kaha Ki usne GalaT Ya Uske Likhne MeiN kuch Kami hai...
Rahi aaP ki Ghazal Kii To JanaB .... Jaisa Ki meiNe kaha Ki Mein Jab bhi Padta hooN to Usko Har Lihaaz Se padTa hooN...
Ab agar aap ko Legta hai Ki.. Meine JurM kiya hai To Banda Saaza ka HaakdaaR bhi Hai.. .. Ab ye Aap par hai Kya Saaza mere Liye hai!
Ye mehfil ya kahu(SDC) Mera Pariwaar hai.. yeha Jo bhi tay Hoga .. Saraankho Par!
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Aadaab !
moHteram app ne kisi ko bhi kabhi nahieN kaha keh usne Ghalat ya unke likhne meN kuch kami hai ... woh aapka masla hai appne aisa kiyoN nahieN kaha ...
is meN meri ghazal ki baat kahaN se aa gai ???
ohhhh ab smajh meN aya keh app kehna chahte haiN keh meri ghazloN meN bhi kami hoti hai mager appne kabhi kuch nahieN kaha .
moHterem is baat se meN mutafiQ hoN keh meri ghazloN meN besh baha ghaltiyaN huwa kerti haiN ,meN ne kuch hi din pehle bhi apni hi aik ghazal ka jawab meN likha tha keh mujhe is ghazal se pehle tak Qaafia aur Radeef ka e'lm bhi nahieN tha
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...177#post311077
link app dekh sakte haiN
aur mujhey jahaN tak yaad hai is ghazal ke ba'ad meN ne apni aik hi ghazal post ki "
kab is dil meN" jis meN radeef aur Qaafia ka khayal rakhne ki koshish ki hai kis Had tak kaamyaab raha mujhe to is baat ka e'lm bhi nahieN hai
app kis jurm ki baat ker rahe haiN smajh nahieN aai ...
Mujeeb