arvind vyas "pyas" -
21st February 2007, 10:48 PM
Priya Ji,
Bahut bahut dhanyabad,
Me sahityik pahalu batana chahta tha.......
Per kavita.....apne me sunder honi chahiye......
Aaj kal ka jo kavita ka chalan hai........swatantra......mukt hona....achchha hai..
Mere anushar.......
Raso ka samanvay.......sunder vishay
Sunder milan ho.....sabd aur vishay
Vishay ki ekagrata
Gahan Gyan ka samanvay......sakaratmak sandes......
Sabdo ki saralta......sunderta
Lay ka lawanya.....geet ki gunjaan
Eisa ho to baat hi kya hai.......
Khud b khud........sunder kavita ban jaati hai.......
Per achchhi rachna ke liye........soch aur mahanat jaroori hai....kavita gyan / niyam ke saath......
Dhanyabad
Arvind Vyas "Pyas"
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