Hi Namita,
Aapka khayaal bahut achha laga...
humne bhi kuch aisa hee khayaal apni ek kavita mein likha hua hai....
humari kavita Punjabi mein hai....
iss liye hum uska anuvaad bhi likh denge ...
taaki padhne waaloN ko poorti baat keh sakeiN..
"Nain katore bhar bhar chovan
Dil hun cheesa.N maare.......
Aa sajan hun der na kar tu....
Saah Vee lagde bhaare....."
iska anuvaad aisa hai...
meri aankein katore ki tarah bhari hui haiN
aur aansoo baha rahiN hai....
Aur dil bahut jyada tadap raha hai...
aye saajan ab aur der na karna..
ab saans bhi bhaari lagti hai.....
The idea here is that "Saans" is lightest thing in the human body......
aur jab kisi ke liye saans lena bhi mushkil ho jaaye .......
to uski haalat kaisee hogi.....
"Aap likhte rehna .... aur ache se likhna.... hum zaroor padenge"
Cheers!!
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