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Ye aansu.................. - 1st June 2005, 11:43 AM

"ek aansu jo tere intezaar me bahta hai
ek aansu jo tujhe paas aane ko kahta hai.
ek aansu jo tujhe bhagwaan se maangta hai.
wo aansu tujhse milna chaahta hai.



ye aansu johar baar bhar aate hain.
kitni mohabbat hai hame tumse,ye batate hain."


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13th June 2005, 11:01 AM

very nice i realy like it
ur both ek ansu and yeh ansu

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really liked it...!!
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really liked it...!! - 14th June 2005, 08:02 PM

Hi Namita,

Aapka khayaal bahut achha laga...
humne bhi kuch aisa hee khayaal apni ek kavita mein likha hua hai....

humari kavita Punjabi mein hai....
iss liye hum uska anuvaad bhi likh denge ...
taaki padhne waaloN ko poorti baat keh sakeiN..


"Nain katore bhar bhar chovan
Dil hun cheesa.N maare.......
Aa sajan hun der na kar tu....
Saah Vee lagde bhaare....."


iska anuvaad aisa hai...

meri aankein katore ki tarah bhari hui haiN
aur aansoo baha rahiN hai....
Aur dil bahut jyada tadap raha hai...

aye saajan ab aur der na karna..
ab saans bhi bhaari lagti hai.....

The idea here is that "Saans" is lightest thing in the human body......
aur jab kisi ke liye saans lena bhi mushkil ho jaaye .......
to uski haalat kaisee hogi.....


"Aap likhte rehna .... aur ache se likhna.... hum zaroor padenge"

Cheers!!
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nice1 - 27th June 2005, 03:02 PM

beautiful!!!!!!!!



"wo ashq ban ke mere chasm-e-tar mein rehta hai,
ye ajeeb shaks hai jo paani ke ghar mein rehta hai."


my angel lost her wings.......
   
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2nd July 2005, 05:11 AM

Hi Namita,

kitni tadap hai is shayri me... bahoot hi achho lagi...



"ek aansu jo tere intezaar me bahta hai
ek aansu jo tujhe paas aane ko kahta hai.
ek aansu jo tujhe bhagwaan se maangta hai.
wo aansu tujhse milna chaahta hai.

ye aansu johar baar bhar aate hain.
kitni mohabbat hai hame tumse,ye batate hain."


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5th July 2005, 04:26 PM

Namita Ji,

i like what u have written

keep writing

Best Wishes,

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